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Act- act of the second. I like all this political stuff. I think it's interesting to see the factionaliztion and almost tribalization within the Fleet. That there are different cultures represented within the rag-tag fleet. That they have different points of view. And this idea, that P- [[Sarah Porter]] and the Gemonese were gonna come a'callin because of their support to Laura, when she needed it, when Laura rose up against Adama way back when and declared herself a prophet earlier in the season. There was the implication then, Zarek saw it coming, ironically enough. Zarek was the guy who looked down the road and said, "This is a mistake. This is going to come back to- to bite you in the ass." And that Zarek was right. That Zarek is a smart political animal. He knows how these things work. And Ba- and Zarek as the secularist saw the dangers of this, saw that the religious people, fundamentalist crowd, as it were, within the Fleet, were going to want something for their support and there was a political reality to that. And I thought there was something very interesting about seeing Laura caught in that vice, where she needed their- their support. She wanted their support. And then their support came at- at a price. And how does she reconcile those two ideas? And her first instinct is, "No, I'm not banning abortion. Fuck that. I'm- I'm- that's not who I'm about. That's not what I'm about." And then sh- there's this little scene. Adama sits down, and Laura knows, "Ok. What's up? What's on the Admiral's mind?" It's interesting just to see their body language and the nature of their relationship at this point, the way these two characters have changed over the course of- of almost two seasons now. They are more intimate with each other. They're easier with each other. Adama knows this is a political issue. It's kinda the first time Adama's stepping out of his role as military commander and actually injecting himself into a political idea, and bringing something to- to Laura's attention. | Act- act of the second. I like all this political stuff. I think it's interesting to see the factionaliztion and almost tribalization within the Fleet. That there are different cultures represented within the rag-tag fleet. That they have different points of view. And this idea, that P- [[Sarah Porter]] and the Gemonese were gonna come a'callin because of their support to Laura, when she needed it, when Laura rose up against Adama way back when and declared herself a prophet earlier in the season. There was the implication then, Zarek saw it coming, ironically enough. Zarek was the guy who looked down the road and said, "This is a mistake. This is going to come back to- to bite you in the ass." And that Zarek was right. That Zarek is a smart political animal. He knows how these things work. And Ba- and Zarek as the secularist saw the dangers of this, saw that the religious people, fundamentalist crowd, as it were, within the Fleet, were going to want something for their support and there was a political reality to that. And I thought there was something very interesting about seeing Laura caught in that vice, where she needed their- their support. She wanted their support. And then their support came at- at a price. And how does she reconcile those two ideas? And her first instinct is, "No, I'm not banning abortion. Fuck that. I'm- I'm- that's not who I'm about. That's not what I'm about." And then sh- there's this little scene. Adama sits down, and Laura knows, "Ok. What's up? What's on the Admiral's mind?" It's interesting just to see their body language and the nature of their relationship at this point, the way these two characters have changed over the course of- of almost two seasons now. They are more intimate with each other. They're easier with each other. Adama knows this is a political issue. It's kinda the first time Adama's stepping out of his role as military commander and actually injecting himself into a political idea, and bringing something to- to Laura's attention. | ||
I like this line and I don't like this line that's coming up. | I like this line and I don't like this line that's coming up. "I have- I have fought for a woman's right to control her own body | ||
her whole political life." It's true. It's a needed line. I was never happy with it in terms of the elegance of it. It's an inelegant line, 'cause the line that- that you wanna here is, "I fought for a woman's right to choose my whole political life." That's the more natural line. That's the line that you're ready to hear. And that's just one of those subjective calls where, in that particular case, the "right to choose" is such a specific contemporary reference to a contemporary political argument that I- I just pulled back from it and didn't feel like I really wanted to go there and wanted to change it slightly. And it's inconsistent. I play- sometimes I- I let them say things that are very contemporary and very familiar and other times they strike my ear oddly and I shift away from it. And there's really not any rhyme or reason for that except for my own sense of what sounds correct in the show and what does not. And ultimately that's my role. I have to- I have to play the show in the key I think it plays the best. It's- it's- it's music. And sometimes the music sounds right to me and sometimes the music doesn't sound right to me. And you need somebody- the showrunner's job is to essentially do that. It's to maintain the voice of the show, as it were. The show has a voice. And it's my voice. And I have to play questions like that as I hear them best. | |||
This whole bit about the distress call fragment, and her sussing it out and figuring out what it means was part of a larger ongoing plotline that we ultimately cut down for time. | |||
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Hello, and welcome to the podcast for episode 17 of season 2. I'm Ronald D. Moore, executive producer and developer of the new Battlestar Galactica, and this is for "Captain's Hand," the podcast that was delayed from last week, so I'll be giving it to you this week. In fact I'll be doing two of them back to back tonight. I'll do "Captain's Hand" and then we'll go right into "Downloaded", on a separate track, of course. (Ron lights a cigarette)
Before we get going we should probably mention, right off the top, that let's have a little less of the whining, out there on the bulletin boards, shall we, about the noises in the background here at the pod- at the podcast around the old Moore manse. You know folks, you just gotta be tough enough to listen to the podcast. These are imperfect conditions. We do this at my home, not in a nice, tidy, little studio. We do ever our best effort to keep it quite for y'all, but c'mon, enough with the whining, with the pewing- with the mewling and puking out there. Be tough enough for the podcast. We drink, we smoke, we curse, we have a good time. Get with it- get with the program.
Ok. So here we are. Pegasus. Teaser. There go the Raptors off on a training mission. In early drafts of "Captain's Hand" this particular crisis happened much later in the show. It was one of the problems that we struggled with in the early drafts of the story was, what was the nature of the crisis, and when should it begin.
The whole notion of this episode revolved around the coninu- acknowledging and dealing with the continuing command problems aboard Pegasus, which felt like a natural outgrowth of the idea that the ship, the Battlestar Pegasus, that showed up was a- a deeply flawed, almost piratical ship, under the command of Admiral Cain. Well, if Admiral Cain had run that ship the way that we saw her run that ship, one would assume that there would be a variety of problems that would definitely outlive her. And so we wanted to continue to play that as the season went on, and the first CO after Cain was obviously Commander Fisk, who promptly got into the black mark- black market and got himself killed for the trouble. And then we moved on to Commander Garner, who in early drafts was always named Trammel. But legal, as legal often does, came back to us with some- some whining about the name Trammel, about it being too close to somebody else's real name, and of course, we had to change it over to Garner at the last second. So there are many references that we all kept catching ourselves calling him Trammel. In fact, we named him Trammel in an earlier episode, in an offhand way. A line from Adama. We had to go back and reloop that in ADR at the last second.
I like this notion of- the beat that open this little section here with Lee and Dualla, that the pilots and the crew had private signals among themselves to "Stay clear of the quarters when I got a girl, or a man, or both inside." And that they had a private signal. You couldn't quite see it 'cause we had to cut the- clip off the head of that shot but when Duck and the other pilot came up there was a pair of boots were hanging from the hatch, and they knew, as soon as they saw the pair of boots that that meant that somebody was in there and getting a little something. And that was what prompted them to bang on the door, and the gag was, "Oh. It's the CAG." And they kinda looked at each other and went away.
This sequence- this little scene here with Dualla and Lee, we played around with in editing quite a bit. There were some lines that were dropped that indicated that a longer passage of time between end of the last episode and this one, to give Dualla a little time to mourn, to give Lee a little time to recover, and move everything along the timeline.
This storyline, the "B story" here, of Rya Kibby and her unwanted pregnancy, and then the abortion decision that Laura eventually comes to was actually a storyline that we had developed very early. We had started talking about this idea early in the first season as a- as a potentially interesting storyline for us 'cause it dealt with a practical issue of, "What are their policies, in the Fleet, going to be in terms of birth control, in terms of abortion?" The population of the species was going to be- hang in the balance, and what would these people really do in these circumstances? And it was definitely an issue we wanted to deal with, and wanted to play, and wanted to see how the characters would react in this circumstance. I thought there was something interesting about Laura Roslin, whose politics on the surface seem probably moderate-to-liberal, Secretary of Education, and one of the ongoing threads of the entire series was watching as Laura is slowly changed by the repsonsibilities of being President. And this storyline was one of those key ideas that, like I said, we talked about early in the first season. And I was fascinated with the idea of this soft-ish appearing woman who's probably, presumably, has all the politically correct positions on these sorts of matters being forced to grapple with the real responsibilities of her- of her role. And I was always interested by playing against the expectations that, I've said this many times though, Laura would be the "dove", and Adama would be the "hawk", and that would always provide very predictable expected conflict between the two. And I always thought it was interesting to subvert that at every- at every turn and always put the characters in situations where they would have to grapple with them as human beings rather than as- as- as just as stalking horses for expected political positions.
Here comes John Heard, who I think is a great actor, in many, many things. I knew him, as soon as his name came up, I was "Oh, yeah! From 'Big'!" Which I think was a tremendous movie and a wonderful, wonderful, film and John had the quasi-villainous role in that episode- in that movie. And more recently I had known him from his work on "Sopranos" as the corrupt police lieutenant. I think John's a great actor and we were really, really happy to have him on the show. He fit in really well. He provided a different color, different flavor to the part and so- it's always nice to get "name" guest cast to come in and juice up the production a little bit here and there.
"Captain's Hand" is also a mix between a standalone episode and a more traditional continuing episode of ours. I think it successfully straddles the line in terms of continuing the ongoing storylines of Lee, and Dualla, and Baltar, and Laura, and Kara, and at the same time dealing with issues that are self-contained within one episode.
Oh, here comes the beep! Oh no! Cover your ears.
Act 1[edit]
Ooh. That scary beep. Beep.
Initially, in the early drafts of this in the story and in the first draft of the script Lee came over by himself. It was more of a self-contained "Lee" show that really didn't involve Kara until a little bit later in the drama when she was pulled over to Pegasus. The idea wa- ,in the initial drafts, was that Lee came aboard, and that the problem onboard Pegasus was not- was not that discipline was too tough, it was that it was quite the opposite. It was that it was too lax. The idea was that Trammel was just a nice guy. Trammel was just everything that Lee thought his father should be. The idea was Lee comes on board this ship and Trammel's this perfectly nice guy who wants to be liked by his crew and wants to get along with everybody and just commanded with a very soft glove. And Lee found himself fulfilling the hardass role. He came over and yelled at guys and saw that fights were breaking out on the hangar day, nobody- hangar bay, nobody gave a shit about it. People talked back. People didn't carry out orders. There was a certain sense of "School's out on Peggy" since Cain and Fisk had both been killed, and then they get this- this new commander in who hasn't had any experience commanding a ship and he just, more than anything else, wanted to be liked by the crew, because the crew had hated the previous two commanders. And then that was supposed to bring along its own problems. That grew less satisfying. As we played it out it was an odd fit because it never quite felt right that Lee was such a complete hardass with these guys and it cut against the grain, just, we were having trouble making that story work. So we kept working on, "What is the nature of Garner's problem? Is he too lax? Is he too friendly? Is he too much of a hardass? Is he crazy?" The version that we shot, the f- the draft, the filming draft is slightly different than the edited version, too. These early scenes were colored by the fact that- that CIC scene that we left a moment ago where Lee first came into Garner and found out that the Raptors were missing, we played it where Garner immediately was on Hoshi's ass about something. Hoshi was on the phone with somebody at Galactica and was not informing Garner in the way that Garner wanted to be informed. And he was riding his ass and sent him to his quarters and had him arrested and there was a sense of fear everywhere. That Garner was this crazed, despot. And we were taking direction from "Caine Mutiny", was sort of an archetype for the character at that point, and the idea that we were going to play, and you can still see parts of it are still here, was that Lee appreciated Garner. That Lee liked Garner. Respected him. Thought he was trying to make the best of a bad situation. He was- he was the third guy who had to command this ship, and he was trying to bring discipline back to a vessel that had had questionable discipline. It was a somewhat Kurtz-like regime under Caine and it then it was a more overtly piratical regime under Fisk and then Garner was trying to just straighten it all out. And the idea we were going to play was Lee was slow to see that- that Garner was deeply flawed as well. And that was an archetype that was borne out of "Caine Mutiny" which follows a very similar structure in that- that the Queeg-
(phone rings) Now see there? Look! Oh my god! Run for the hills, my phone is ringing. The idea- (phone rings) I could unplug it. I could actually walk ov- hey! I'm going to walk right over there right now (phone rings) and I'm going to unplug it for- for all of you 'cause I don't want any of your precious little feelings to be hurt. (phone rings) Here I go. (Ron's voice gets fainter as he walks away) I'm walking over. I'm unplugging. I'm unplugging as we speak. And, it's now unplugged. You happy? Everybody happy now?
What we opted to do instead was- instead of going down the "Caine Mutiny" route so strongly was to dial-back Garner's early scenes. The Queeg character in "Caine Mutiny" was somebody that the Ensign Keith character, who's central to the book and the movie, comes aboard and likes Queeg at first 'cause Queeg seems like he's just trying to straighten out a very difficult ship and Keith, Ensign Keith, doesn't realize until fairly late in the drama that Queeg is crazy... that Queeg is paranoid and damaged and had been scarred by his- his experiences in the war. And we tried a similar archetype in this episode, but when it was all cut together the problem was that you saw the problem with Quee- with our Queeg, with Garner, just immediately. As soon as he started bitchslapping Yoshi- Hoshi in that first scene, and you saw that he was a little bit nuts, you knew exactly everything that was gonna to happen in the show. You knew he'd be relieved. You just saw it. It's like, "Oh. It's so clearly the "Caine Mutiny," that it didn't work. So we cut back on all of the initial craziness, and now it's not quite as clear what's going up- going on with Garner.
This scene that's on camera right now, with Gar- with Baltar and Zarek was originally much later in this script. As shot, this scene didn't happen until act four, actually, I believe, or act three possibly. And it happened only after Laura had made her religious proclaimatio- er, not her religious, her political proclaimation to ban abortion, and that prompted Zarek to go to Baltar. And when I was watching it cut, it seemed like it happened way too late, and I thought it would be much more interesting if early in the show we got Baltar thinking about the presidency. I think it's much more effective, 'cause now, when Laura goes to ask him later about the demographics of the Fleet and is wrestling with the decision, the idea that Baltar might possibly run for the presidency is already in the character's mind and it's already in- in the audience's mind.
The idea here of the Kara/Lee struggle/conflict, since she shot him, by accident, but she shot him in the last episode, felt like definitely something we wanted to follow up on, as part of the growing chasm between these two characters. You saw in "Scar" that they came close to actually sleeping together, in a moment, and that Kara reached out to him in desperation to try to forget about Anders and then- and then it all fell apart. And... there was something interesting about continuing to play these two becoming more and more estranged, especially since your expectation is that these two are going to end up together or there's some kind of romantic tension going on. Finding- I found it was much more interesting the further apart these two got. The more that their- their relationship became dysfunctional. (Ron lights a cigarette)
I love this Cottle/Adama scene in sickbay. Cottle is, I've said this before, has developed into one of my favorite characters in the show. And I like this little scene, 'cause it says so much about the relationship between Adama and Cottle. This notion that Cottle was performing abortions throughout the Fleet, very quietly and with no questions asked, I thought was interesting. It again provided this backstage look at what was happening off-camera during all these episodes. That there was a life to the fleet. There were, like, people's lives were continuing on. Things were happening. And just because we didn't show them to you up in CIC didn't mean that things weren't happening below decks. Adama's- this little beat. This look on Adama's face. "She could apply for asawman- apply for asylum." And Adama just looks at Cottle. And then this look on Cottle face. "Up oh. I'll just walk over here. Excuse me," is just great. And then Eddie... Eddie just looks at her, and he's hoping she's not gonna pick up on it, hoping she's not gonna say anything, she's... she said it. She said the magic words. Oh, great. No my day just got much, much longer.
Act 2[edit]
Act- act of the second. I like all this political stuff. I think it's interesting to see the factionaliztion and almost tribalization within the Fleet. That there are different cultures represented within the rag-tag fleet. That they have different points of view. And this idea, that P- Sarah Porter and the Gemonese were gonna come a'callin because of their support to Laura, when she needed it, when Laura rose up against Adama way back when and declared herself a prophet earlier in the season. There was the implication then, Zarek saw it coming, ironically enough. Zarek was the guy who looked down the road and said, "This is a mistake. This is going to come back to- to bite you in the ass." And that Zarek was right. That Zarek is a smart political animal. He knows how these things work. And Ba- and Zarek as the secularist saw the dangers of this, saw that the religious people, fundamentalist crowd, as it were, within the Fleet, were going to want something for their support and there was a political reality to that. And I thought there was something very interesting about seeing Laura caught in that vice, where she needed their- their support. She wanted their support. And then their support came at- at a price. And how does she reconcile those two ideas? And her first instinct is, "No, I'm not banning abortion. Fuck that. I'm- I'm- that's not who I'm about. That's not what I'm about." And then sh- there's this little scene. Adama sits down, and Laura knows, "Ok. What's up? What's on the Admiral's mind?" It's interesting just to see their body language and the nature of their relationship at this point, the way these two characters have changed over the course of- of almost two seasons now. They are more intimate with each other. They're easier with each other. Adama knows this is a political issue. It's kinda the first time Adama's stepping out of his role as military commander and actually injecting himself into a political idea, and bringing something to- to Laura's attention.
I like this line and I don't like this line that's coming up. "I have- I have fought for a woman's right to control her own body her whole political life." It's true. It's a needed line. I was never happy with it in terms of the elegance of it. It's an inelegant line, 'cause the line that- that you wanna here is, "I fought for a woman's right to choose my whole political life." That's the more natural line. That's the line that you're ready to hear. And that's just one of those subjective calls where, in that particular case, the "right to choose" is such a specific contemporary reference to a contemporary political argument that I- I just pulled back from it and didn't feel like I really wanted to go there and wanted to change it slightly. And it's inconsistent. I play- sometimes I- I let them say things that are very contemporary and very familiar and other times they strike my ear oddly and I shift away from it. And there's really not any rhyme or reason for that except for my own sense of what sounds correct in the show and what does not. And ultimately that's my role. I have to- I have to play the show in the key I think it plays the best. It's- it's- it's music. And sometimes the music sounds right to me and sometimes the music doesn't sound right to me. And you need somebody- the showrunner's job is to essentially do that. It's to maintain the voice of the show, as it were. The show has a voice. And it's my voice. And I have to play questions like that as I hear them best.
This whole bit about the distress call fragment, and her sussing it out and figuring out what it means was part of a larger ongoing plotline that we ultimately cut down for time.