Talk:Razor/Archive2

For older discussion see Talk:Razor/Archive1

The first Hybrid's "children"

I can think of several possibilities:

• The Guardians
• The humanoid Cylons
• The other Hybrids
• Cylons in general

-- Gordon Ecker 20:27, 25 November 2007 (CST)

To-do list

Most major things have been done already, but there are some left (add if you can think of anything):

• Updating Peter Laird
• Finding out who Riggs and Frank Bruno are and updating the articles
• Adding some other lines to Noteworthy Dialogue
• Adding such dialogue to Razor Flashbacks. Not much to go on, but the "nothing but the rain" exchange between Adama and McGavin is good.

Razor analysis and questions will probably be done without much effort. The most major thing is getting pictures, but we better wait for DVD to do that. --Serenity 03:07, 26 November 2007 (CST)

Razor Acts and Teaser

I've finished writing the Pegasus timeline for Razor. I know it's pretty long, but keep in mind that not only is it a double-episode, the content is extremely compressed, so it was hard to shorten it up. For future reference, I have added an invisible note at the bottom of the Razor summary detailing the Razor Teaser, and a breakdown of where each act begins and ends. Additionally, I am including another copy here.

Teaser

• We see only Shaw’s hand as she opens and closes Cain’s knife. She rubs her fingers along the blade, careful not to get hurt. She talks about the importance of living with your decisions, and the cycle of life, and how there are no second chances. The word “RAZOR” flashes across the screen.
• We now see a series of flashbacks, periodically edited in with shots of Shaw caressing Cain’s knife. The first to appear is the discovery of the Pegasus by the Fleet (Pegasus). We then see Gina being whipped by Thorne (a new scene), and we hear Baltar’s voice comforting her, telling her that what she needs is justice. Next we see Gina holding the gun to Cain’s head. We hear the gun go off, and then we immediately see her funeral, with Fisk giving the eulogy (Resurrection Ship, Part II). Next we see Fisk being garroted and then Adama and Tigh talking about promoting Garner (Black Market). Next we see the scene where the enemy baseships jump ahead of the Pegasus, and Garner dies saving the ship. We see Apollo promoted to commander (The Captain's Hand).
• Finally we hear Shaw again, talking about how you are the choices you make in life, followed by the opening titles.

Don't use things like "we see". If anything write "the viewer sees". But best is a more neutral voice like "Shaw says" or "Shaw's hand". The rest isn't really needed at all. I don't think it's necessary to summarize the flashbacks designed to bring viewers up to speed. Shaw's monologue should be enough. --Serenity 04:29, 26 November 2007 (CST)

Act 1

• Begins after opening titles.
• Ends after Shaw is promoted to major.

Act 2

• Begins as Shaw is drilling Colonial Marines on rifle assembly aboard Pegasus.
• Ends as the Pegasus crew is shouting “So Say We All!”

Act 3

• Begins as the Pegasus senior staff is discussing the communication relay.
• Ends as the first Cylon salvos strike Pegasus.

Act 4

• Begins as Belzen is being taken to the morgue.
• Ends after the First Cylon War flashback, as Adama and Roslin look over the original Cylon Raider.

Act 5

• Begins as Roslin, Apollo and Adama discuss the Guardian basestar.
• Ends after the massacre aboard the Scylla.

Act 6

• Begins as the Scylla boarding party is leaving the ship.
• Ends as the Centurion Model 0005’s are coordinating with each other aboard the Cylon Raider.

Act 7

• Begins as Red Squad is floating in space.
• Ends after the Guardian basestar explodes.

Act 8

• Begins as Apollo and Adama are discussing Cain and Shaw posthumously.
• Ends at credits.

--OrionFour 03:52, 26 November 2007 (CST)

Alright I've taken that part out. --OrionFour 04:39, 26 November 2007 (CST)

Re-imagined Series definition: the process of using the FTL engines to make an near-instantaneous apparent faster-than-light transport of a ship from one point in space to another