Needs minor editing and a couple of paragraph markers. After lunch though. Huh? 11:17, 23 May 2006 (CDT)
- Looks good! Let me know when you're ready for "verification" and I'll start into it. --Steelviper 11:21, 23 May 2006 (CDT)
Cameo?
"So there's David and Bradley, who wrote the episode." So were they actually in this episode? That's stated in act 1 at the top of the second paragraph. If somebody could take a look at the ep and see if they see anything, it'd help sate my curiousity on the matter. --Steelviper 12:01, 29 September 2006 (CDT)
Pyro Tigh
"There was something great about him getting ready to light his own medals on fire with the lighter fluid and I wanted to convey this idea that he might- the whole place might go up but didn't q- we weren't able to quite convey that." -RDM from this podcast
- I definitely got that impression (that the whole place might go up, and that it was a borderline suicidal moment about to go down). A pretty effective (and disturbing) little bit. --Steelviper 08:27, 5 October 2006 (CDT)