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| **"Because there's really nothing going on here," -> "There's really nothing going on here" | | **"Because there's really nothing going on here," -> "There's really nothing going on here" |
| **"be prepared for the things that are going to come in tonight's episode" -> "be prepared for the things that are to come in tonight's episode" | | **"be prepared for the things that are going to come in tonight's episode" -> "be prepared for the things that are to come in tonight's episode" |
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| **"where supposed to be in the teaser, along with all the other stories" -> "were supposed to be in the teaser, along with all the other little stories"
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| **"which is a valid choice" -> "which is, I think, a valid choice"
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| **"there's this little bit here" -> "this is a little bit here"
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| **"A note on the card game:" -> "A note on the game, the game that they're playing, the card game:"
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| **"racquet-ball slash basketball that" -> "racquet-ball slash basketball game that"
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| **"the demon on his shoulder, who knows, the whatever" -> "the demon on his shoulder, the ghost, the whatever"
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| **"Well, I think that James" -> "But, I think that James"
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| **"he kind of redirects to line back" -> "he kind of redirects the line back"
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| **"given the fact that he's the only genius" -> "given the fact he's the only genius"
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| **"forced to give him" -> "forced to have to give him"
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| **"amount of control on his body" -> "amount of control over his body"
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| **"which was a really interesting device" -> "which I thought was a really interesting device"
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| **"Michael and Andy Cooper" -> "Michael and Dany Cooper"
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| :Looks fine to me, I wouldn't bother with this list if I was you. Oh, and next time, I'll change my spell check from English (Australian) to English (United States) (you spell favourite like favorite and spectre like specter? Silly Americans :) ) --[[User:Undc23|Undc23]] 18:50, 1 February 2006 (EST)
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| ::I was just following the letter of the law. In the future I'll just document anything that's iffy. I figured I was wrestling with the Queen's English. We doe juste fine overe here withoute alle those extrae e's ande u's, thanke youe verye muche. ;) --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 21:46, 1 February 2006 (EST)
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