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Hello, and welcome to the podcast. I'm [[Ronald D. Moore]], executive producer and developer of [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)|the new ''Battlestar Galactica'']], and this week we're here to discuss episode thirteen, "[[The Woman King]]." Coming to you from a small cabin in the [[w:Russian River (California)|Russian River]]. [[Terry Dresbach|Terry]] and I are ensconced for a few days. But the podcast must be served, so here we are. There's no Scotch for this particular gathering. I'm having actual [[w:Absinthe|absinthe]], from a secret location overseas. You can actually get this fine substance in the United States, despite rumors to the contrary. And so absinthe is the drink. (Takes a drink.) From my [[w:Carnivàle|Carnivàle]] days, gave me a taste for it. And we won't discuss- be discussing the smokes this week. | Hello, and welcome to the podcast. I'm [[Ronald D. Moore]], executive producer and developer of [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)|the new ''Battlestar Galactica'']], and this week we're here to discuss episode thirteen, "[[The Woman King]]." Coming to you from a small cabin in the [[w:Russian River (California)|Russian River]]. [[Terry Dresbach|Terry]] and I are ensconced for a few days. But the podcast must be served, so here we are. There's no Scotch for this particular gathering. I'm having actual [[w:Absinthe|absinthe]], from a secret location overseas. You can actually get this fine substance in the United States, despite rumors to the contrary. And so absinthe is the drink. (Takes a drink.) From my [[w:Carnivàle|Carnivàle]] days, gave me a taste for it. And we won't discuss- be discussing the smokes this week. | ||
Ok. Thirteen. "The Woman King." This episode came essentially out of our desire to do a couple of different things. One was to setup a long-running plot line that was supposed to last from here until the end of [[Season 3 (2006-07)|the season]] that had to do with the [[The Twelve Colonies | Ok. Thirteen. "The Woman King." This episode came essentially out of our desire to do a couple of different things. One was to setup a long-running plot line that was supposed to last from here until the end of [[Season 3 (2006-07)|the season]] that had to do with the [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)#Sagittaron|Sagittarons]]. Ultimately that one did not pan out the way that we anticipated, initially, about what we were gonna do with the Sagittarons as a people. It was going to figure prominently in [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s trial, by the end of the season, and this episode was designed in part to get those storylines going. However, once we actually got into the meat of Baltar's trial, beyond even the first draft. I mean, we did a first draft that had the Saggitarions featured prominently, and what they were doing, and then dropped it in subsequent drafts. And I'll talk more about that as the show goes on. | ||
So here we are in the tease. This sequence of [[Karl Agathon|Helo]] having trouble sleeping was shot much later. We didn't initially have this as the opening to the episode. Initially what we were gonna- what we had was this fly- the pilot banter and chatter of them flying out (phone rings) and of course it has to be a podcast because there's a phone ringing, but I can turn it off here, so, there we go. Anyway it was gonna have pilot stuff going on and people on a mission, chitchat back and forth, giving each other limericks, and so on. And then that didn't really seem like the most effective opening, 'cause it's- it really is a show about Helo. And so I wanted to- start with Helo and let's get into his mindset, right from the get-go. 'Cause one of the things that we wanted to do about the ep- about this show in designing it was to give ourselves a "Helo story." A full-blown story about Helo and his life, to an extent. In a large part this episode is a follow-up- (phone rings) Somebody just keeps calling. And look. It might be my wife so I will actually put this on pause here for a moment, something I never do. And I'm back. It was nothing important, just [[Sci Fi Channel|the network]] with the pickup call. No, no. I'm just joking. But it was really the network. | So here we are in the tease. This sequence of [[Karl Agathon|Helo]] having trouble sleeping was shot much later. We didn't initially have this as the opening to the episode. Initially what we were gonna- what we had was this fly- the pilot banter and chatter of them flying out (phone rings) and of course it has to be a podcast because there's a phone ringing, but I can turn it off here, so, there we go. Anyway it was gonna have pilot stuff going on and people on a mission, chitchat back and forth, giving each other limericks, and so on. And then that didn't really seem like the most effective opening, 'cause it's- it really is a show about Helo. And so I wanted to- start with Helo and let's get into his mindset, right from the get-go. 'Cause one of the things that we wanted to do about the ep- about this show in designing it was to give ourselves a "Helo story." A full-blown story about Helo and his life, to an extent. In a large part this episode is a follow-up- (phone rings) Somebody just keeps calling. And look. It might be my wife so I will actually put this on pause here for a moment, something I never do. And I'm back. It was nothing important, just [[Sci Fi Channel|the network]] with the pickup call. No, no. I'm just joking. But it was really the network. | ||
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Initially the structure of this episode actually began with- we were gonna start at the end of the show. [[Michael Angeli]], who wrote this episode, had structured a draft where in the tease- was going to open with [[Karl Agathon|Helo]] in a confrontation with [[William Adama|Adama]] and [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]] and [[Cottle]] about [[Michael Robert|Doc Robert]] and making his accusations and essentially being shut down and told to knock it off and that they didn't believe him and he had to go somewhere else to deal with his personal issues, which is what everybody thought was driving him to make these accusations and then he left the room, and then he had the confrontation with Tigh and they had a battle- or Ti- not a battle, they had a fight. And that was the end of the tease. And then it was like, start act one three days earlier. It's valid structure and we've used that structure many times. Usually we do that in post when we're trying to jazz up an episode. Michael did it in the draft, and just because we're perverse, we decided not to that this episode and to make it a little bit more linear and a little bit more straight-line, to take you along the away and walk you through the parameters of what was happening. | Initially the structure of this episode actually began with- we were gonna start at the end of the show. [[Michael Angeli]], who wrote this episode, had structured a draft where in the tease- was going to open with [[Karl Agathon|Helo]] in a confrontation with [[William Adama|Adama]] and [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]] and [[Cottle]] about [[Michael Robert|Doc Robert]] and making his accusations and essentially being shut down and told to knock it off and that they didn't believe him and he had to go somewhere else to deal with his personal issues, which is what everybody thought was driving him to make these accusations and then he left the room, and then he had the confrontation with Tigh and they had a battle- or Ti- not a battle, they had a fight. And that was the end of the tease. And then it was like, start act one three days earlier. It's valid structure and we've used that structure many times. Usually we do that in post when we're trying to jazz up an episode. Michael did it in the draft, and just because we're perverse, we decided not to that this episode and to make it a little bit more linear and a little bit more straight-line, to take you along the away and walk you through the parameters of what was happening. | ||
The idea of the illness and the illness that the [[The Twelve Colonies | The idea of the illness and the illness that the [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)#Sagittarons|Sagittarons]] brought aboard and are spreading, even though it's treatable, was a late-developing idea as we struggled with the Sagittarons and what their beliefs were and why they were different, why they were the victims of prejudice from some of the other [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)|colonies]]. There is this developing idea this season of something that we had been talking about within the civilian world for a long time, and had never really- now we bring to the forefront was this idea that there were class structures and hierarchies and different, if not racial, then at least tribal feelings among [[The Fleet (RDM)|the Fleet]] that- what- which colony you were from had meaning within the Twelve Colony structure and that as they were out on their journey, post- the post-[[Fall of the Twelve Colonies|apocalyptic]] journey, that eventually those feelings and rivalries and prejudices would rise to the fore as well, and so we had always been looking for ways to start indicating that and this story with the Sagittarons, like I said a couple of times, was intended to eventually illuminate and be part of the backstory that actually happened on [[New Caprica]] during the missing year. And during that time there was an incident. There was a massacre. There was like a whole complicated backstory of what the Sagittarons had done and had done to them. They had essentially isolated themselves on New Caprica, had done their own thing while everyone else was doing something else, and essentially there came a crisis point and people were killed, and I won't give you the whole thing. But [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]] was directly involved with it, so was [[Tom Zarek|Zarek]]. [[Felix Gaeta|Gaeta]] was around. And it was gonna figure- eventually there was a secret within that that was going to figure prominently in Baltar's trial. So we were laying a lot of this pipe to set up who the Sagittarons were and what was going on. | ||
This scene, for instance, with Zarek and [[Laura Roslin|Laura]], which I think is a nice scene. It's nice to see [[Richard Hatch|Richard]] back and it's nice to have Tom Zarek back among us, even for a little bit. There was a scene, a follow-up to this scene later in the show, where Zarek went to see Baltar. And when Zarek went to see Baltar he basically was feeling him out to see what he was gonna say, what he wouldn't say, how he could help, under the guise of helping him, and Baltar was essentially gonna get wise to why Tom Zarek was really there, which was to cover his own ass, and that Zarek was involved in the Sagittarion incident- Sagittaron incident on New Caprica and was worried that Baltar might implicate him at a trial, and it was starting to setup the shifting political agendas and these shifting mysteries to raise the idea that there was something up here, that you would be following this for subsequent episodes. | This scene, for instance, with Zarek and [[Laura Roslin|Laura]], which I think is a nice scene. It's nice to see [[Richard Hatch|Richard]] back and it's nice to have Tom Zarek back among us, even for a little bit. There was a scene, a follow-up to this scene later in the show, where Zarek went to see Baltar. And when Zarek went to see Baltar he basically was feeling him out to see what he was gonna say, what he wouldn't say, how he could help, under the guise of helping him, and Baltar was essentially gonna get wise to why Tom Zarek was really there, which was to cover his own ass, and that Zarek was involved in the Sagittarion incident- Sagittaron incident on New Caprica and was worried that Baltar might implicate him at a trial, and it was starting to setup the shifting political agendas and these shifting mysteries to raise the idea that there was something up here, that you would be following this for subsequent episodes. | ||
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Here we are, back in [[Joe's bar]]. I love the fact that we're back in Joe's. Ooh, [[Margaret Edmondson|Racetrack]] out of [[uniforms (RDM)|uniform]]. Racetrack out of uniform looks fantastic. Good to see [[Charlie Connor|Connor]] again. Connor from [[New Caprica Resistance|the resistance]], all of you remember. And this is us starting to use the bar a little bit more. This was another of the justifications for having- for setting up Joe's bar at all was that we could get back to these kind of scenes a little easier if they're on [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']] than you ever could on ''[[Cloud 9]]''. Of course, we'd always had the rec room. Pilots and people were always hanging out in the rec room to an extent, but it's nice to have a change of pace. | Here we are, back in [[Joe's bar]]. I love the fact that we're back in Joe's. Ooh, [[Margaret Edmondson|Racetrack]] out of [[uniforms (RDM)|uniform]]. Racetrack out of uniform looks fantastic. Good to see [[Charlie Connor|Connor]] again. Connor from [[New Caprica Resistance|the resistance]], all of you remember. And this is us starting to use the bar a little bit more. This was another of the justifications for having- for setting up Joe's bar at all was that we could get back to these kind of scenes a little easier if they're on [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']] than you ever could on ''[[Cloud 9]]''. Of course, we'd always had the rec room. Pilots and people were always hanging out in the rec room to an extent, but it's nice to have a change of pace. | ||
In this scene I feel like- I think we pushed a little too hard in terms of the racial animosity from [[Galen Tyrol|Tyrol]] and some of the other guys towards the [[The Twelve Colonies | In this scene I feel like- I think we pushed a little too hard in terms of the racial animosity from [[Galen Tyrol|Tyrol]] and some of the other guys towards the [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)#Sagittaron|Sagittarons]], especially as it was something that we had never really said in the show. So I think that's- we pushed a little too hard here, but we had to push hard here because had to make point of it because it was a new idea in the show. So it's one of those damned if we do, damned if we don't kinda things. | ||
We had other tales of [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]] as Sagittaron. There was a whole other story where it was more of a "Dee story", where Dualla was really the one leading this episode and really- or leading a story. It wasn't even this episode. It was really- we had one that was much more strongly about Dualla as a Sagittaron and her conflicted feelings of being in the [[Colonial Fleet (RDM)|military]], 'cause Sagittarons didn't join the military, and that was seen as a betrayal by her people, and then she was forced to deal with them in a crisis, and ultimately that story went away too, 'cause we- again, we were looking for many ways to enhance the tale of the Sagittarons, overall in [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)|the series]]. | We had other tales of [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]] as Sagittaron. There was a whole other story where it was more of a "Dee story", where Dualla was really the one leading this episode and really- or leading a story. It wasn't even this episode. It was really- we had one that was much more strongly about Dualla as a Sagittaron and her conflicted feelings of being in the [[Colonial Fleet (RDM)|military]], 'cause Sagittarons didn't join the military, and that was seen as a betrayal by her people, and then she was forced to deal with them in a crisis, and ultimately that story went away too, 'cause we- again, we were looking for many ways to enhance the tale of the Sagittarons, overall in [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)|the series]]. | ||
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Anyway, Helo then goes to [[Cottle]]'s office. This we did have to go back and reshoot later. We didn't have all of this during the time that we shot the episode, so a lot of this material was shot weeks later, well out of sequence. It was important to get this idea of Helo going through- this is where it moves into classic procedural territory, where Helo goes through the files, looks up information. This is your hero moment, hero Helo moment, of him getting the clues, putting it together. This is fill in the blank- [[w:Walker, Texas Ranger|''Walker, Texas Ranger'']] here. Helo- there's a good possibility he might jump up on that desk and drop kick Cottle when he comes into the room. | Anyway, Helo then goes to [[Cottle]]'s office. This we did have to go back and reshoot later. We didn't have all of this during the time that we shot the episode, so a lot of this material was shot weeks later, well out of sequence. It was important to get this idea of Helo going through- this is where it moves into classic procedural territory, where Helo goes through the files, looks up information. This is your hero moment, hero Helo moment, of him getting the clues, putting it together. This is fill in the blank- [[w:Walker, Texas Ranger|''Walker, Texas Ranger'']] here. Helo- there's a good possibility he might jump up on that desk and drop kick Cottle when he comes into the room. | ||
I'm trying to recall. There were other versions of the backstory and what [[Michael Robert|Robert]] had done. Some of them- there were quite a bit of things back in [[New Caprica]]. There were details of what Robert had done on New Caprica. Also in regards to the [[The Twelve Colonies | I'm trying to recall. There were other versions of the backstory and what [[Michael Robert|Robert]] had done. Some of them- there were quite a bit of things back in [[New Caprica]]. There were details of what Robert had done on New Caprica. Also in regards to the [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)#Sagittarons|Sagittarons]] and how far back his theories of eugenics that been seeded. But, again, a lot of that we had cut back significantly or at least deemphasized because that plotline about the Sagittarons on New Caprica ultimately went away. | ||
I like- it's nice to use Cottle as a bit of a foil here. It's nice to see that Cottle is not really interested in what Helo has to say. That Cottle is tired. Everyone on this ship is tired. There's a bit of- there's a hint here of Cottle having been fed up with Helo. 'Cause I think we, in earlier drafts, or at least in discussion, I know, we had talked about the fact that Helo had come to Cottle in the past on various reasons, again, as part of that [[w:The Boy Who Cried Wolf|''Boy Who Cried Wolf'']] story, and Cottle was fed up with him at this point too. And every- essentially there was this story that everyone on the ship was looking at Helo and going, "This guy- I don't know what's up with this guy, but he's looking to prove somethin' to somebody." And everybody was getting sick of it. So that was also why Cottle got so hot here. But it's nice to just have the officer turn to someone who just says, "You know what? Fuck you. Get out of my office," and "I don't need this shit." And this- and this decision. This thing here of Cottle, of Cottle lying and saying that he's done the autopsy and just flat out lying to Helo is an interesting thing to do because your characters don't typically just lie. Just cover up shit because they're tired and they don't want to deal with you and they just lie to you to get your sorry ass out of their office. I really like that. It's such a small character thing but it's- that's what human beings do. Sometimes human beings lie for dumb reasons. And sometimes human beings lie just because you're being a pain in the ass and they don't want to talk to you anymore and they just tell you some shit to get you out of their office. And in this case it had- potentially has a huge repurccussion. I- we're not being fair to Cottle on some level because we don't see the moment on camera when he dec- he has second thoughts and goes back realizes that, "Well, shit. I really didn't do that. I should look it up and do my job and I am a doctor, after all." And yeah, you can say that's a flaw but it's not his show. You do have to make these kinds of decisions and I think it's just fine. It works just as well. You've set it up. You've established the conversation, and so later on when Cottle does come back and says, "Ok. I was lying. I went back and checked it," it doesn't feel like you've really cheated the audience. | I like- it's nice to use Cottle as a bit of a foil here. It's nice to see that Cottle is not really interested in what Helo has to say. That Cottle is tired. Everyone on this ship is tired. There's a bit of- there's a hint here of Cottle having been fed up with Helo. 'Cause I think we, in earlier drafts, or at least in discussion, I know, we had talked about the fact that Helo had come to Cottle in the past on various reasons, again, as part of that [[w:The Boy Who Cried Wolf|''Boy Who Cried Wolf'']] story, and Cottle was fed up with him at this point too. And every- essentially there was this story that everyone on the ship was looking at Helo and going, "This guy- I don't know what's up with this guy, but he's looking to prove somethin' to somebody." And everybody was getting sick of it. So that was also why Cottle got so hot here. But it's nice to just have the officer turn to someone who just says, "You know what? Fuck you. Get out of my office," and "I don't need this shit." And this- and this decision. This thing here of Cottle, of Cottle lying and saying that he's done the autopsy and just flat out lying to Helo is an interesting thing to do because your characters don't typically just lie. Just cover up shit because they're tired and they don't want to deal with you and they just lie to you to get your sorry ass out of their office. I really like that. It's such a small character thing but it's- that's what human beings do. Sometimes human beings lie for dumb reasons. And sometimes human beings lie just because you're being a pain in the ass and they don't want to talk to you anymore and they just tell you some shit to get you out of their office. And in this case it had- potentially has a huge repurccussion. I- we're not being fair to Cottle on some level because we don't see the moment on camera when he dec- he has second thoughts and goes back realizes that, "Well, shit. I really didn't do that. I should look it up and do my job and I am a doctor, after all." And yeah, you can say that's a flaw but it's not his show. You do have to make these kinds of decisions and I think it's just fine. It works just as well. You've set it up. You've established the conversation, and so later on when Cottle does come back and says, "Ok. I was lying. I went back and checked it," it doesn't feel like you've really cheated the audience. | ||
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RDM: Ok. And we're back. I think there was a bigger role for [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]] in this, also, even within this episode. There was a longer discussion of her and her position as a bridge between people on [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']] and the people on that- the people down in [[Dogsville]]. And her going to Doctor [[Robert]] was a bigger character turn with her, 'cause it meant she was embracing some of the older be- some of her family- some of her people's belief systems and was willing to see herself as a [[The Twelve Colonies | RDM: Ok. And we're back. I think there was a bigger role for [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]] in this, also, even within this episode. There was a longer discussion of her and her position as a bridge between people on [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']] and the people on that- the people down in [[Dogsville]]. And her going to Doctor [[Robert]] was a bigger character turn with her, 'cause it meant she was embracing some of the older be- some of her family- some of her people's belief systems and was willing to see herself as a [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)#Sagittaron|Sagittaron]] and go to Doctor Robert, who every Sagittaron was afraid of. So it had- there were a few layers of character work involved with what we were doing with her, but those scenes just kept getting dropped and the script was ridiculously long- | ||
Terry: Oh my god! [[Bruce Davison]]! | Terry: Oh my god! [[Bruce Davison]]! | ||