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==[http://www.scifi.com/battlestar/downloads/podcast/mp3/216/bsg_ep216_1of5.mp3 Teaser]== | ==[http://www.scifi.com/battlestar/downloads/podcast/mp3/216/bsg_ep216_1of5.mp3 Teaser]== | ||
Hello, and welcome to the podcast of episode sixteen, I believe, this is now ep- "[[Sacrifice]]". [[Season 2 (2005-06)|Season two]]. I'm [[Ronald D. Moore]], executive producer and developer of the new [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)|Battlestar Galactica series]]. This is also an episode I had certain issues with. It's not my favorite episode of the season. I don't openly dislike it, though, you may be relieved to know, like I did openly dislike "[[Black Market]]" a couple of weeks ago. My problem with "Black Market" was that I felt that it- ultimately fell short of what the show is about in terms of what type of story we were trying to tell and that ultimately it was just | Hello, and welcome to the podcast of episode sixteen, I believe, this is now ep- "[[Sacrifice]]". [[Season 2 (2005-06)|Season two]]. I'm [[Ronald D. Moore]], executive producer and developer of the new [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)|Battlestar Galactica series]]. This is also an episode I had certain issues with. It's not my favorite episode of the season. I don't openly dislike it, though, you may be relieved to know, like I did openly dislike "[[Black Market]]" a couple of weeks ago. My problem with "Black Market" was that I felt that it- ultimately fell short of what the show is about in terms of what type of story we were trying to tell and that ultimately it was just to conventional- for what we we're- what I think the show does best. This- this- this show, I think, works in parts. I think it has a lot of interesting ideas in it. I think there's specific places where I think we stumble and don't quite deliver on all- on all that the show can be, and I'll try to identify those as we go through. But o- overall I think this show works, and there's things about it that I think are quite nice. Maybe a word is- is worth mentioning here about just the nature of these podcasts. I was unaware about how widely these podcasts are listened to within the- the show itself. A lot of people that work on the show do listen to these podcasts, as well as executives, and so on, and it's worth reiterating that flaws and things that I try to point out in these episodes, things that I'm not satisfied with or are not happy with, ultimately re- redown to me. I'm the- I'm the showrunner. (Chuckles.) I'm the executive producer. A lot of these things are decisions I either made myself or decisions I was aware of and signed off on, so none of this is really meant as criticism to my- to my team, who I value immensely. | ||
Okay. Here in the open. In the scripted version and in the original cut we opened this sequence with an open scene. That is, a scene that takes you someplace other than what the main characters and you're just starting in mid-story, and that was the sequence, this sequence, right here that you're watching with [[Sesha Abinell|Sesha]]'s [[Ray Abinell|husband]]. It opened with him working in that corridor, finishing up some repair duty, getting on the phone, telling his wife that he was going to be home very soon, and then suddenly the [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] attack breaks out and he's- the ship, the [[Greenleaf|freighter]] is damage and he's pulled out into space. It di- it wasn't that satisfying an opening, and I think it's always been a problematic aspect of this particular episode for, for again, what are script reasons. Here's a guy who we kill in the opening moments who we have no- no connection to and the only thing that really matters about him is that he's her husband, in that it drives her obsession and radicalization through the course of the episode. But, the- the pro- it doesn't quite work because it happens so quickly, you don't know who he is, you don't really care, then he's gone, and then we're- we're building a lot on your identi- identification with her emotional trauma, trying to make that the basis for what drives her into taking these extreme actions. And it doesn't quite work. We- we salvage it a little bit by concentrating more on [[Dana Delany|Dana]] in those opening shots where you're really more with her and you realize that she has a backstory, that somebody mattered to her, that died, but you're really a little bit more with that character than you are with him. And that helps a little bit. It's still not a perfect- a perfect solution. We probably should have tried to work in a different- either a different motivation for her or really gotten a little bit more in depth to what that relationship was about, made us care a little bit more for- to what she lost. | Okay. Here in the open. In the scripted version and in the original cut we opened this sequence with an open scene. That is, a scene that takes you someplace other than what the main characters and you're just starting in mid-story, and that was the sequence, this sequence, right here that you're watching with [[Sesha Abinell|Sesha]]'s [[Ray Abinell|husband]]. It opened with him working in that corridor, finishing up some repair duty, getting on the phone, telling his wife that he was going to be home very soon, and then suddenly the [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] attack breaks out and he's- the ship, the [[Greenleaf|freighter]] is damage and he's pulled out into space. It di- it wasn't that satisfying an opening, and I think it's always been a problematic aspect of this particular episode for, for again, what are script reasons. Here's a guy who we kill in the opening moments who we have no- no connection to and the only thing that really matters about him is that he's her husband, in that it drives her obsession and radicalization through the course of the episode. But, the- the pro- it doesn't quite work because it happens so quickly, you don't know who he is, you don't really care, then he's gone, and then we're- we're building a lot on your identi- identification with her emotional trauma, trying to make that the basis for what drives her into taking these extreme actions. And it doesn't quite work. We- we salvage it a little bit by concentrating more on [[Dana Delany|Dana]] in those opening shots where you're really more with her and you realize that she has a backstory, that somebody mattered to her, that died, but you're really a little bit more with that character than you are with him. And that helps a little bit. It's still not a perfect- a perfect solution. We probably should have tried to work in a different- either a different motivation for her or really gotten a little bit more in depth to what that relationship was about, made us care a little bit more for- to what she lost. | ||
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[[David Eick]] is actually responsible for getting [[Dana Delany|Dana]] on the show. He knew Dana personally and had approached her- approached her actually, I think, last season and started talking to her about doing an appearance on the show and then this season sh- we managed to to- to actually work out her schedule and ours and get her interested in material, and she agreed to do it, which was a delight. I'm just so happy that we had her on the show. It was a thrill to meet her. I'd been a fan of hers- her work for many years. "[http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0094433/ China Beach]", obviously. She was also fantastic in a- in a- in a movie called "[http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0108358/ Tombstone]" which is one of my personal favorites where i just think she is ravishing and just charming and amazing and all this. And when this show was beeing shot- when this particular episode was being shot my children had just discovered a film called, oh shoot, now I'm going to blank on the name of the stupid film. It's the film where Dan- it's a film about the little girl that- her and her father, who is played by [ | [[David Eick]] is actually responsible for getting [[Dana Delany|Dana]] on the show. He knew Dana personally and had approached her- approached her actually, I think, last season and started talking to her about doing an appearance on the show and then this season sh- we managed to to- to actually work out her schedule and ours and get her interested in material, and she agreed to do it, which was a delight. I'm just so happy that we had her on the show. It was a thrill to meet her. I'd been a fan of hers- her work for many years. "[http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0094433/ China Beach]", obviously. She was also fantastic in a- in a- in a movie called "[http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0108358/ Tombstone]" which is one of my personal favorites where i just think she is ravishing and just charming and amazing and all this. And when this show was beeing shot- when this particular episode was being shot my children had just discovered a film called, oh shoot, now I'm going to blank on the name of the stupid film. It's the film where Dan- it's a film about the little girl that- her and her father, who is played by [http://us.imdb.com/name/nm0001099/ Jeff Daniels], construct a lighter than air- lighter than air- a small aircraft, and they guide these Canadian Geese south from Canada on to do a migration. What is the name of that movie? Well, you'll all figure it out. [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0116329/ Go look it up online]. But she- Dana Delany is in that movie as the mother, and while this episode was being film my kids were becoming obsessed with that movie, watching it over and over again. So I was watching Dana dailies and watching- and then she was also, like, on this other movie at home. | ||
This whole subplot, or not even subplot, this whole little thing here with [[Lee Adama|Lee]] and the O<sub>2</sub> sensor is a classic bit of Trek-like [[technobabble]] that we tried to keep to a bare minimum. It's- it's a notion that is- is and again this is an imperfect piece in the show. The idea being that, okay, they've closed the pressure door to the- to the bar. If anyone's going to have a hope of getting inside that pressure door, without blowing it up and potentially killing everyone inside, what they need to do is get that pressure door opened. And so Lee comes up with a method of having them open the door himself, which is, he takes- he takes the drink, he puts the- has dry ice in in it. The CO<sub>2</sub> triggers the sensor and they think that they're losing oxygen. That's- it's kind of okay. It doesn't make entirely a lot of sense but it kind of works as you go through it. | This whole subplot, or not even subplot, this whole little thing here with [[Lee Adama|Lee]] and the O<sub>2</sub> sensor is a classic bit of Trek-like [[technobabble]] that we tried to keep to a bare minimum. It's- it's a notion that is- is and again this is an imperfect piece in the show. The idea being that, okay, they've closed the pressure door to the- to the bar. If anyone's going to have a hope of getting inside that pressure door, without blowing it up and potentially killing everyone inside, what they need to do is get that pressure door opened. And so Lee comes up with a method of having them open the door himself, which is, he takes- he takes the drink, he puts the- has dry ice in in it. The CO<sub>2</sub> triggers the sensor and they think that they're losing oxygen. That's- it's kind of okay. It doesn't make entirely a lot of sense but it kind of works as you go through it. | ||
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I wish we had a few more scenes like this, in the show, where [[Sesha Abinell|Sesha]] is talking to [[William Adama|Adama]] on the phone, because I think this is when the show does work the best. It's like- the conversations between Dana Delany and [[Edward James Olmos]] are interesting because they're two really good actors and they're selling you this material and you're starting to get engaged with what's going on with the stakes and with the thought with the politics what's going on. I just wish we had played this a little bit more in the show, like I said at the outset, given us a little more detail work on what was going on. | I wish we had a few more scenes like this, in the show, where [[Sesha Abinell|Sesha]] is talking to [[William Adama|Adama]] on the phone, because I think this is when the show does work the best. It's like- the conversations between Dana Delany and [[Edward James Olmos]] are interesting because they're two really good actors and they're selling you this material and you're starting to get engaged with what's going on with the stakes and with the thought with the politics what's going on. I just wish we had played this a little bit more in the show, like I said at the outset, given us a little more detail work on what was going on. | ||
Early drafts of the episode featured much, much, much more conflict between [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]] and Adama. I talked about last season that we were intrigued by the idea of getting to a place where Tigh and Adama were at loggerheads. That these two very close friends and trusted comrades got to a point where they were shoo- pointing guns at each other was something we were going to try in Season One and ultimately, ironically, that became "[[Tigh Me Up, Tigh Me Down]]", the comedy. This season we tried to go down that road again. We tried to play a little bit more of that here, and again, just ran into the same believability factor that was a part of me and I think that it was shared by everyone that just didn't believe the point that, well in this ep- I should explain- what we were trying, what we were going to go for in this episode was the idea that Adama's refusal to turn over [[Sharon Valerii (Caprica copy)|Sharon]] was putting [[Ellen Tigh|Ellen]]'s life in danger and that there came a point where Tigh simply was not going to allow his wife to die for the sake of a machine, and it came to a violent confrontation where Tigh was going to hand her over, and Adama didn't want him to and you had the two men going toe to toe. It just- it rang false. It didn't work and you never believed that Tigh could actually buy into the notion that giving the- the- the hostage takers what they wanted- to give the terrorists what they want, even if it was just a machine, was actually a good idea. It just seemed like, he's smart enough, and he's experienced enough to know that that's a bad- a bad move, no matter what his personal feelings were and that he couldn't quite get to a place where Ellen was really so important to his life, even in concept, that he would throw away everything in order to retrieve her. And it just- we just weren't able to pull it off but th- you can kind of see the- again, there's still shadows of that leftover in that their attitudes are still colored by this idea that Tigh is like, "You're doing all this stuff with Sharon and she's a machine and you're losing sight of that." That bit by bit, Adama, even though Adama was shot by | Early drafts of the episode featured much, much, much more conflict between [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]] and Adama. I talked about last season that we were intrigued by the idea of getting to a place where Tigh and Adama were at loggerheads. That these two very close friends and trusted comrades got to a point where they were shoo- pointing guns at each other was something we were going to try in Season One and ultimately, ironically, that became "[[Tigh Me Up, Tigh Me Down]]", the comedy. This season we tried to go down that road again. We tried to play a little bit more of that here, and again, just ran into the same believability factor that was a part of me and I think that it was shared by everyone that just didn't believe the point that, well in this ep- I should explain- what we were trying, what we were going to go for in this episode was the idea that Adama's refusal to turn over [[Sharon Valerii (Caprica copy)|Sharon]] was putting [[Ellen Tigh|Ellen]]'s life in danger and that there came a point where Tigh simply was not going to allow his wife to die for the sake of a machine, and it came to a violent confrontation where Tigh was going to hand her over, and Adama didn't want him to and you had the two men going toe to toe. It just- it rang false. It didn't work and you never believed that Tigh could actually buy into the notion that giving the- the- the hostage takers what they wanted- to give the terrorists what they want, even if it was just a machine, was actually a good idea. It just seemed like, he's smart enough, and he's experienced enough to know that that's a bad- a bad move, no matter what his personal feelings were and that he couldn't quite get to a place where Ellen was really so important to his life, even in concept, that he would throw away everything in order to retrieve her. And it just- we just weren't able to pull it off but th- you can kind of see the- again, there's still shadows of that leftover in that their attitudes are still colored by this idea that Tigh is like, "You're doing all this stuff with Sharon and she's a machine and you're losing sight of that." That bit by bit, Adama, even though Adama was shot by [Sharon Valerii (Galactica copy)|a version of Sharon]] sh- Adama has- keeps calling her "the thing" and keeps her in the brig and is very, very wary of her, that there is definitely a part of Adama that is simultaneously drawn to Sharon. That he does look to her for information and he- there is an emotional connection between the two as we saw in "[[Resurrection Ship, Part I|Resurrection Ship]]" and that Tigh is much more skeptical of that connection and doesn't believe it's leading any of them to- to a good place. | ||
Captain Thrace. So, this is again. Now we're playing out the- the- the bit of the plot where they realize that Lee's giving them an opportunity to get the door open, to get somebody on the inside. A- the- the- a perfectly valid, logical, question is why don't they use that nifty little side-passage that Lee was using to get in through the back- back door of the bathroom, and go in that way, and I guess my answer to that is it's just too small in there it'd be hard for them to carry all those rifles and they might bump their heads and get bruises or something, so they'd rather not go that way (chuckles). The- the logi- the internal justification in the show is that passage didn't lead anywhere. That that was a dead end that only went around the back and that it was very difficult and we had all kinds of, like, "Yada yada yada," ex- expo lines as they looked at various schematics and diagrams and debated different points of entry and why that this one wasn't going to work, why that one wasn't going to work and they all get cut for time but they leave it feeling like it's a bit of a hole. Er- it is- it is a bit of a hole. | Captain Thrace. So, this is again. Now we're playing out the- the- the bit of the plot where they realize that Lee's giving them an opportunity to get the door open, to get somebody on the inside. A- the- the- a perfectly valid, logical, question is why don't they use that nifty little side-passage that Lee was using to get in through the back- back door of the bathroom, and go in that way, and I guess my answer to that is it's just too small in there it'd be hard for them to carry all those rifles and they might bump their heads and get bruises or something, so they'd rather not go that way (chuckles). The- the logi- the internal justification in the show is that passage didn't lead anywhere. That that was a dead end that only went around the back and that it was very difficult and we had all kinds of, like, "Yada yada yada," ex- expo lines as they looked at various schematics and diagrams and debated different points of entry and why that this one wasn't going to work, why that one wasn't going to work and they all get cut for time but they leave it feeling like it's a bit of a hole. Er- it is- it is a bit of a hole. | ||
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==[http://www.scifi.com/battlestar/downloads/podcast/mp3/216/bsg_ep216_5of5.mp3 Act 4]== | ==[http://www.scifi.com/battlestar/downloads/podcast/mp3/216/bsg_ep216_5of5.mp3 Act 4]== | ||
It's worth mentioning that at the previous "act out" on | It's worth mentioning that at the previous "act out" on Eddie where he- he hangs up the phone and says, "Cut the wire," and we go to black. I don't know what the hell that means. (Laughs.) I really don't. It's not even scripted. It was something Eddie said. He was in one of his takes- it's just a line that he threw out there as he put it down. It's like the equivalent of cut the phone line to the hostage takers. It doesn't really mean anything in context, except, "Hang up the phone," which he just did. But he said it with such authority and it's really weird. It's, like, dramatically it works and when we saw it I was, like, "Well, let's use that." I mean, it's a great "act out" even if you're not quite sure what what the hell that means. It's just a really, really intriguing moment. | ||
This is- this whole end finale- you just wish you had- I... again, I wish we had more time. I wish we had been able to construct a more elaborate and more choreographed entry of the | This is- this whole end finale- you just wish you had- I... again, I wish we had more time. I wish we had been able to construct a more elaborate and more choreographed entry of the Marines into the bar. And h- essentially at this point in the show what you want are all the little disparate threads that you've been playing through the show to now be tied together and really come to the fore as- when the Marines are coming in, and the body's there and Dana's doing- Sesha's doing her thing, Adama's plan is moving forward, then Billy sees the gun and everyone in the bar's in a specific discrete place and as he's reaching for his gun, he's reaching for that, and then she's bl-. It's like you want all these layers of complexity to- to play themselves out and- and again it just becomes one of those things that you know what you need to do in concept, but executing it becomes very complicated and we even had to go back and do pick ups and reshoots and- and try to construct more pieces of this final takedown to make it work. And it's not- it's still not quite there. It's still kind of, like- it's still- it's disappointing and I- I- I wish that it was a little bit more satisfying. | ||
But, you d- you do have moments like this. I love this little beat where Dana just raises that gun and shoots her right in the head. I mean, that's like, "Whoah! What's- what's up with that?" I think that's a great, powerful, emotional moment and it's shocking and it's- it says volumes about who she is and what she came here to do, and that that's really all it's about. But then you're past that moment so now you're starting- start put people into their places and doing what they gotta do. Those shots of the Marines are actually stolen shots | But, you d- you do have moments like this. I love this little beat where Dana just raises that gun and shoots her right in the head. I mean, that's like, "Whoah! What's- what's up with that?" I think that's a great, powerful, emotional moment and it's shocking and it's- it says volumes about who she is and what she came here to do, and that that's really all it's about. But then you're past that moment so now you're starting- start put people into their places and doing what they gotta do. Those shots of the Marines are actually stolen shots and (chuckles) they're shots that we actually stole from "[[Bastille Day]]." If you look carefully you can see some of the cages of "Bastille Day" in the background. 'Cause we were desperate to find shots of Marines doing something. There's another shot from "Bastille Day" implying that there's this movement and- now that's- that's in this show. And they come in through the door and all this happens quickly. | ||