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RDM: Yeah, and she's totally disconnected from everybody else.
RDM: Yeah, and she's totally disconnected from everybody else.


This [[Lee Adama|Lee]]-[[William Adama|Adama]] stuff... this was pretty much always there. I'm trying to remember... I don't recall going through a lot of revisions on these scenes. It was nice the way- well, it's not nice. It's a trick. I needed still cover some other exposition for later events and so I made Adama get up and walk out of the room, and he's walking out of the room to avoid talking to his son. So Lee is continuing to go at him, but basically I used this as a chance to get some exposition out, because as Adama's walking away he's talking about the fact, "Oh, and did you know that the [[Cylon Centurion|Centurion]]s are- can't distinguish between the [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylons]] and that they did this deliberately because they were worried about their own Cylon up- their own machine uprising." And that's essentially only in the show because you gotta set up the fact that when [[Sharon Agathon|Sharon]] walks into the detention center later, to get the codes, which is actually in a much later episode, but- (Laughs.) Anyway. Actually, no, it does play in this. You need to know that. I needed to setup something about Sharon, and the fact that the Centurions could not tell our Sharon from any of the other Sharons, and so I used this little moment to get Adama to say that. But it worked in the scene because emotionally he's trying to get away from Lee and he's walking away from him and he's trying to change the subject. He's trying to talk about something else, so he does this, what seems to be a meaningless piece of exposition about, "Oh the Centurions," and what they can do and what they can't do. And it never takes you out of the scene, and we still get to the same end point where Lee changes his mind and gets Adama to see that he's asking too much. It still gets to the same place, but it's a nice way of slipping this card in at some earlier part in the script where later, when Sharon does need to get past a Centurion, and- without getting caught, you've laid in the predicate for it. You've established why she can get past that Centurion. And you did it in this very offhand way earlier in the script. It's just a trick. It's just one of the little tricks of screenwriting. You find little ways to set- it's all about laying down cards and picking them up later. So you lay down this card here in this scene about how- seemingly meaningless talk, Adama says, "Sharon can go do this thing," and then later you pick that card up. 'Cause the audience remembers. If the audience watches, they remember almost everything. It's really surprising. It's just little references and little tweaks early in the show. If you pay 'em off correctly later, they all fit together and the audience appreciates the fact that they're rewarded for following along.
This [[Lee Adama|Lee]]-[[William Adama|Adama]] stuff... this was pretty much always there. I'm trying to remember... I don't recall going through a lot of revisions on these scenes. It was nice the way- well, it's not nice. It's a trick. I needed still cover some other exposition for later events and so I made Adama get up and walk out of the room, and he's walking out of the room to avoid talking to his son. So Lee is continuing to go at him, but basically I used this as a chance to get some exposition, because as Adama's walking away he's talking about the fact, "Oh, and did you know that the [[Cylon Centurion|Centurion]]s are- can't distinguish between the [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylons]] and that they did this deliberately because they were worried about their own Cylon up- their own machine uprising." And that's essentially only in the show because you gotta set up the fact that when [[Sharon Agathon|Sharon]] walks into the detention center later, to get the codes, which is actually in a much later episode, but- (Laughs.) Anyway. Actually, no, it does play in this. You need to know that. I needed to setup something about Sharon, and the fact that the Centurions could not tell our Sharon from any of the other Sharons, and so I used this little moment to get Adama to say that. But it worked in the scene because emotionally he's trying to get away from Lee and he's walking away from him and he's trying to change the subject. He's trying to talk about something else, so he does this, what seems to be a meaningless piece of exposition about, "Oh the Centurions," and what they can do and what they can't do. And it never takes you out of the scene, and we still get to the same end point where Lee changes his mind and gets Adama to see that he's asking too much. It still gets to the same place, but it's a nice way of slipping this card in at some earlier part in the script where later, when Sharon does need to get past a Centurion, and- without getting caught, you've laid in the predicate for it. You've established why she can get past that Centurion. And you did it in this very offhand way earlier in the script. It's just a trick. It's just one of the little tricks of screenwriting. You find little ways to set- it's all about laying down cards and picking them up later. So you lay down this card here in this scene about how- seemingly meaningless talk, Adama says, "Sharon can go do this thing," and then later you pick that card up. 'Cause the audience remembers. If the audience watches, they remember almost everything. It's really surprising. It's just little references and little tweaks early in the show. If you pay 'em off correctly later, they all fit together and the audience appreciates the fact that they're rewarded for following along.


In early drafts of this, this was different. The plan was different. I'm trying to recall what we- what we originally did, but I don't think- it wasn't that Adama- the idea that Adama sends [[Pegasus (RDM)|''Pegasus'']] off was something we did much later. I'm trying to recall, in fact I'll look up here on  my computer what it was I did in the first draft in the Adama-Lee stuff. [[Margaret Edmondson|Racetrack]]... [[Galen Tyrol|Tyrol]]... Leoben... Yeah, there's nothing better than listening me to me look around on my computer for information. Well, I won't even try it. Essentially, the difference is that ''Pegasus'' was actually going to go, and do the rescue mission, and not [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']]. And that that explains certain things that will happen in later episodes. But the whole idea that Adama sends ''Pegasus'' off with the [[The Fleet (RDM)|civilian Fleet]] to safeguard the remnants of humanity in case they fail then goes back and fights the Cylons on his own, is not what initially happened. We were always talking about having ''Pegasus'' back there, originally, then it would be they were transferring people onto ''Pegasus'' because ''Pegasus'' was the most powerful battlestar and it was the strongest battlestar and you would send the strongest ship into the fight and that'd explain why ''Pegasus'' was there, when it needs to be there in "[[Exodus]]" and not ''Galactica''. But that didn't really play. It didn't play as strongly and it was confusing and the idea that Adama lays down the law to- or Lee lays down the law to Adama, and he listens to him, is more provocative.
In early drafts of this, this was different. The plan was different. I'm trying to recall what we- what we originally did, but I don't think- it wasn't that Adama- the idea that Adama sends [[Pegasus (RDM)|''Pegasus'']] off was something we did much later. I'm trying to recall, in fact I'll look up here on  my computer what it was I did in the first draft in the Adama-Lee stuff. [[Margaret Edmondson|Racetrack]]... [[Galen Tyrol|Tyrol]]... Leoben... Yeah, there's nothing better than listening me to me look around on my computer for information. Well, I won't even try it. Essentially, the difference is that ''Pegasus'' was actually going to go, and do the rescue mission, and not [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']]. And that that explains certain things that will happen in later episodes. But the whole idea that Adama sends ''Pegasus'' off with the [[The Fleet (RDM)|civilian Fleet]] to safeguard the remnants of humanity in case they fail then goes back and fights the Cylons on his own, is not what initially happened. We were always talking about having ''Pegasus'' back there, originally, then it would be they were transferring people onto ''Pegasus'' because ''Pegasus'' was the most powerful battlestar and it was the strongest battlestar and you would send the strongest ship into the fight and that'd explain why ''Pegasus'' was there, when it needs to be there in "[[Exodus]]" and not ''Galactica''. But that didn't really play. It didn't play as strongly and it was confusing and the idea that Adama lays down the law to- or Lee lays down the law to Adama, and he listens to him, is more provocative.

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