Editing Podcast:Exodus, Part I
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There goes [[James Lyman|Jammer]]. Jammer, interestingly enough, in early drafts Jammer was killed in that sequence. He died in the firefight and then there was even a draft where Jammer died a little bit later on. And I ultimately decided not to do that. And- for reasons that will become clear in future episodes. | There goes [[James Lyman|Jammer]]. Jammer, interestingly enough, in early drafts Jammer was killed in that sequence. He died in the firefight and then there was even a draft where Jammer died a little bit later on. And I ultimately decided not to do that. And- for reasons that will become clear in future episodes. | ||
This is also a pickup. This little pickup here of [[Connor]] finding the map was another little piece that we didn't have that we had to go back and recreate later for this key thing of- when he walks up and says that he's found the map and it was on a skinjob, we didn't really have the shot of when that occured. Sergeant [[ | This is also a pickup. This little pickup here of [[Connor]] finding the map was another little piece that we didn't have that we had to go back and recreate later for this key thing of- when he walks up and says that he's found the map and it was on a skinjob, we didn't really have the shot of when that occured. Sergeant [[Mathias]] is named aft- Gunnery Sergeant Mathias. Again, I wanted it to be a woman, for whatever reason, and someone in her forties that looked like she'd been around the block a few times. And she's actually named after the high school superintendent that preceded my father at Chowchilla Union High. His name was Jim Mathias and I just decided to name it after him. | ||
Terry: Does your father know that? | Terry: Does your father know that? | ||
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Terry: Oh. | Terry: Oh. | ||
RDM: | RDM: Terry doesn't want to really watch the show. | ||
Terry: I do too. I just, like every other audience member- it's just- | Terry: I do too. I just, like every other audience member- it's just- | ||
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Another great matte painting, or matte shot. I don't know if they call them paintings anymore. | Another great matte painting, or matte shot. I don't know if they call them paintings anymore. | ||
[[Kara Thrace|Kara]] and [[ | [[Kara Thrace|Kara]] and [[Kacey]]. I like the little echoes here of- there's a sense, a feeling in the production design that is reminicent of that dark little apartment that we saw of Kara's on Cylon-occupied [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)#Caprica|Caprica]]. There's not really a direct correlation between the two but there are echoes of it. There's the- something about the staircase and the way it's set-decked and the way it's shot makes me feel like it's Kara's home as well, in a very twisted reality. | ||
Very tricky to get interesting performances out of child actors. This | Very tricky to get interesting performances out of child actors. This one- oh, I think I said this last week. But this is one of the better child actors that I've dealt with. And the key is usually just giving them very little- the younger they are, the simpler you have to make the material. If you're asking them to say a lot of lines and emote and give you specific reaction shots and looking at a certain way, looking in fear. It becomes very hard to coax it out of them on the set because they're just little kids. And they're overwhelmed by the environment. So you have to- if they're very young you have to almost think of them as props. And that you're just moving them from place to place and you're looking for little, key little bits and you're not asking very much of them as actors. | ||
Again, all this was shot to go into the tease. Amanda Plummer is our oracle, who's coming up, which was a, just a great little piece of casting. She's always been one of my favorite actresses. It was great to have her on the show. | Again, all this was shot to go into the tease. Amanda Plummer is our oracle, who's coming up, which was a, just a great little piece of casting. She's always been one of my favorite actresses. It was great to have her on the show. | ||
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RDM: It might even be the oracle. Oracle is, like, her title. Her name is Sellona- [[Dodona Selloi|Selloi Dodona]]. Which is the name of an [[Wikipedia:Dodona|actual oracle]] from ancient Greece, I believe. Who is actually someone you can look up on the internet and learn all about. So I borrowed her name, the name of that oracle, to use as our own. | RDM: It might even be the oracle. Oracle is, like, her title. Her name is Sellona- [[Dodona Selloi|Selloi Dodona]]. Which is the name of an [[Wikipedia:Dodona|actual oracle]] from ancient Greece, I believe. Who is actually someone you can look up on the internet and learn all about. So I borrowed her name, the name of that oracle, to use as our own. | ||
This concept- I liked the idea that the two theologies of faith, the polytheistic and the monotheistic, that they were starting to have certain points of crossover. That the oracle of the [[Religion in the Twelve Colonies|Colonials' religion]] was actually gonna get a message from the [[ | This concept- I liked the idea that the two theologies of faith, the polytheistic and the monotheistic, that they were starting to have certain points of crossover. That the oracle of the [[Religion in the Twelve Colonies|Colonials' religion]] was actually gonna get a message from the [[God]] of the Cylon religion and pass through, as a conduit, to D'anna. And that there was some kind of common point between the two. That the both religions and both faiths had some glimpse of the truth, had some idea of the eternal but neither one was exactly right. But that there were paths that each side could take or be on that would eliminate the truth of the universe to them. | ||
And then we- and this was, I thought, a nice way to dive back into the storyline of [[Hera]], of the little girl. Again, this was all gonna start in "Occupation" but it was just too many storylines moving simultaneously. And this starts a arc that we're gonna play with D'anna of- for many episodes. And D'anna's journey and her arc as a character begins here. Her starting to dream about the child. What does the child symbolize? What is the meaning of God to D'anna? Why is she questioning God? What is she questing? What is she looking for? All those things propel her in subsequent episodes. | And then we- and this was, I thought, a nice way to dive back into the storyline of [[Hera]], of the little girl. Again, this was all gonna start in "Occupation" but it was just too many storylines moving simultaneously. And this starts a arc that we're gonna play with D'anna of- for many episodes. And D'anna's journey and her arc as a character begins here. Her starting to dream about the child. What does the child symbolize? What is the meaning of God to D'anna? Why is she questioning God? What is she questing? What is she looking for? All those things propel her in subsequent episodes. | ||
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Terry: That's what I thought it was. | Terry: That's what I thought it was. | ||
RDM: Yeah. Now it is here. It's also interesting, this little beat there with her with | RDM: Yeah. Now it is here. It's also interesting, this little beat there with her with Jake. As scripted, she was integrated with that whole plot with the dog and the dog bowl. She knew Jake. She liked to pet him, and that was something that neither Tyrol nor Gaeta were aware of and when the shit hit the fan in "[[Precipice]]" and Gaeta was coming out to try to warn Tyrol, he turned over the dog bowl, left the message, and then D'anna happened by, saw Jake, petted him- | ||
Terry: I saw that one. | Terry: I saw that one. | ||
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Love [[Cottle]]. Love [[Donnelly Rhodes]]. He's just so great in this role. | Love [[Cottle]]. Love [[Donnelly Rhodes]]. He's just so great in this role. | ||
Terry: You know, I remember him when he played the young stud on | Terry: You know, I remember him when he played the young stud on ''The Young and the Restless'', in like 1971, or whenever, ''Young and Restless'' first... | ||
RDM: And I know him from | RDM: And I know him from ''Soap''. He was one of my favorite characters in ''Soap'', which was a great, great series. | ||
And this is a nice little bit of business here where | And this is a nice little bit of business here where he's describing that he was lying in the sun and that he had to- there's that thing about he had to, like, open his own carotid. | ||
I also like- this was like an interesting little touch. Just to start implying that the more they download, the less pleasant it becomes. And that there's a sense of, like, pain. And that there's a sense of losing something. That each t- that these downloads are not just so free and easy for them. That they pay a little bit of a price in that doing it multiple times would start have an impact on them as people. That- 'cause I just figure you can't experience death over and over again without it, in fact, impacting you in some way. | I also like- this was like an interesting little touch. Just to start implying that the more they download, the less pleasant it becomes. And that there's a sense of, like, pain. And that there's a sense of losing something. That each t- that these downloads are not just so free and easy for them. That they pay a little bit of a price in that doing it multiple times would start have an impact on them as people. That- 'cause I just figure you can't experience death over and over again without it, in fact, impacting you in some way. | ||
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Now this- that line about resources being stretched to the max is not a complete bullshit line. There's also, like, an implication that they're doing something else out there, is part of the rationale what's going on. It's also a rationale for why the baseships were pulled away, and so on. The Cylons are actually doing something. They are actually out there doing something else that is pulling resources from this little experiment on [[New Caprica]]. That it's not the only thing that they've got going. | Now this- that line about resources being stretched to the max is not a complete bullshit line. There's also, like, an implication that they're doing something else out there, is part of the rationale what's going on. It's also a rationale for why the baseships were pulled away, and so on. The Cylons are actually doing something. They are actually out there doing something else that is pulling resources from this little experiment on [[New Caprica]]. That it's not the only thing that they've got going. | ||
Here we are with [[Sharon Agathon|Sharon]] and [[Samuel Anders|Anders]]. There's certain questions that logically arise about the | Here we are with [[Sharon Agathon|Sharon]] and [[Samuel Anders|Anders]]. There's certain questions that logically arise about the Cylons and reaction among themselves. What can Sharon access and when? Under what circumstances? But those are the kinds of details that I prefer to leave mysterious, 'cause I think they're more interesting. There are rationales for why she can get information and when she can't, but I don't think those are the kinds of things that are good to spell out in a show 'cause I think that they have more power by being opaque. | ||
And now, what's gonna happen, | And now, what's gonna happen, Ellen? Which I don't think is resolved this week, as I recall. | ||
Terry: I have to watch this again. | Terry: I have to watch this again. | ||
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RDM: This is a good one. This one moves pretty- I mean this one just is kinda relentless. Just going and going and going and going. There's not a lot of moments here to take a break. | RDM: This is a good one. This one moves pretty- I mean this one just is kinda relentless. Just going and going and going and going. There's not a lot of moments here to take a break. | ||
This beat here with | This beat here with Hera and, oh and I can't remember Hera's adoptive mother's name right now, but this little beat with Anders and Laura is out of sequence. This was shot to be much earlier and now it's much later in the show. There was a- I talked about this in the podcast for last week, there was a whole running storyline about Laura in the schoolhouse and them trying to hide Hera and that Simon had come to look for Hera and then Simon was kidnapped and as a result of that Laura decided to put Hera into more protective cover. And this is a scene that was really an outgrowth of that idea. That this- after the Simon incident, which now no longer exists, they had moved Hera into the caves and then- or into the tunnel and then she was asking Anders to take care of her and hide her and be very careful of what was gonna become of her. But it lives comfortably in this place too, because it doesn't really disrupt the narrative and now it just feels like we're following that storyline. And you find that ofttimes in editing. In editorial you discover that you can move pieces around much more freely than you thought that they would work on the page, 'cause they just hit you differently. And you don't realize the discontinuities, 'cause you're not really- you don't read the film the same way that you read the script. | ||
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