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Terry: There has been a question as to what is your favorite scotch. | Terry: There has been a question as to what is your favorite scotch. | ||
RDM: Ah, that's a hard question to answer. [[w:Talisker|Talisker]] is one of my favorites. And err, [[w:Isle of Jura Single Malt|Jura]], that new one that I got from the professor at [[w:University of Southern California|USC]] is a new favorite. This one came from our friend [[John Hodgman]] who was here last night. | RDM: Ah, that's a hard question to answer. [[w:Talisker|Talisker]] is one of my favorites. And err, [[w:Isle of Jura Single Malt|Jura]], that new one that I got from the professor at [[w:University of Southern California|USC]] is a new favorite. This one came from our friend [[w:John Hodgman|John Hodgman]] who was here last night. | ||
Terry: Mr. PC. | Terry: Mr. PC. | ||
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RDM: It's very spooky. It's very [[w:Don't Look Now|"Don't Look Now,"]] the [[w:Nicolas Roeg|Nicolas Roeg]] picture in a lot of these shots and very very creepy and very effective. I like a lot of this a lot. Originally— we had always known that we wanted to do the trial of [[Gaius Baltar]] [[Season 3 (2006-07)|this season]]. And originally it was going to take place, I believe, around episode 12 or 13, after the [[Rapture|escape]] from the [[algae planet]]. And then as time went on we started talking about what the season finale was going to be, and I started getting more and more in love with the idea that the season finale was actually going to be the trial of Gaius Baltar. And that took a little bit of salesmanship, actually, with [[Sci Fi|the network]]. The network was not entirely convinced that we would— that a trial episode was really the best way to end the season. But I was really sold on it, and then went back to the writers' room and then said "OK, we have to really deliver, 'cause they're definitely skeptical this time about what— y'know, about our ability to pull this off." | RDM: It's very spooky. It's very [[w:Don't Look Now|"Don't Look Now,"]] the [[w:Nicolas Roeg|Nicolas Roeg]] picture in a lot of these shots and very very creepy and very effective. I like a lot of this a lot. Originally— we had always known that we wanted to do the trial of [[Gaius Baltar]] [[Season 3 (2006-07)|this season]]. And originally it was going to take place, I believe, around episode 12 or 13, after the [[Rapture|escape]] from the [[algae planet]]. And then as time went on we started talking about what the season finale was going to be, and I started getting more and more in love with the idea that the season finale was actually going to be the trial of Gaius Baltar. And that took a little bit of salesmanship, actually, with [[Sci Fi|the network]]. The network was not entirely convinced that we would— that a trial episode was really the best way to end the season. But I was really sold on it, and then went back to the writers' room and then said "OK, we have to really deliver, 'cause they're definitely skeptical this time about what— y'know, about our ability to pull this off." | ||
So as— so we developed this long arc that was going to culminate in the trial, which I've talked about before, with the [[Sagittaron]]s becoming a problem within the [[The Fleet (RDM)|Fleet]], and that's where the [[Helo]], "[[The Woman King]]" episode originated, to introduce the Sha- Sagittarons. Then we had more storylines with them, as sort of a sub-group within [[The Twelve Colonies | So as— so we developed this long arc that was going to culminate in the trial, which I've talked about before, with the [[Sagittaron]]s becoming a problem within the [[The Fleet (RDM)|Fleet]], and that's where the [[Helo]], "[[The Woman King]]" episode originated, to introduce the Sha- Sagittarons. Then we had more storylines with them, as sort of a sub-group within [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)|the Twelve Colonies]], and how they were the outcasts of the bunch that— y'know, the other colo— tribes tended to take advantage of them. And it was included in this— in the initial drafts of these two episodes and it was going to form a key part of the trial. And it wa— the plot was essentially that as bit by bit the defense team, Baltar's defense team, kicked the legs out from under the prosecution case as it was presented, there came a point where [[Lee Adama|Lee]], who at that point in our story was actually going to be the sole attorney for Gaius Baltar, Lee was going to come into possession of a video tape that was sold to him by somebody from the [[black market]], and the video tape was going to have on it actual footage of Baltar executing colonists on [[New Caprica]]. And it was him, it was there's Baltar, and he's pulling the trigger and he's killing people. And it was— it just had him dead to rights, and that's where this episode was going to end: with Lee coming into possession of that video tape and what was he going to do? | ||
And then the [[Crossroads, Part II|second part of the episode]]— the second part of "Crossroads" was going to deal with what does he do with the video tape, how does— y'know, getting into the backstory of what happened on New Caprica, the idea was that the Sagittarons had sort of isolated themselves from the rest of the population, and there was a famine that had struck the food supplies, and people were in desperate straits, and the Sagittarons were refusing to share the food that they had carefully cultivated to themselves. And at some point Baltar— and the government sent in the troops and Baltar got involved in the situation, which at first looked on the video tape like he was a cold-blooded murderer, but as the case went on you discovered that actually— that he was more— it was more along the lines of the moment in [[w:Lawrence of Arabia (film)|"Lawrence of Arabia"]] where Lawrence has to shoot the man to save the larger situation between the two tribes. That storyline was present in these two episodes as we went to prep, but the problem was they were just— it just wasn't working, because I think when we read it, [[Michael Rymer]] was probably the first one to put his finger to it, that— y'know, it was making up this other storyline about something that had happened in the past, that the audience really never had investment on. Meanwhile, all the crimes that the audience was interested in, with Gaius Baltar, weren't really being addressed as effectively, and the trial wasn't about something they could really sink their teeth into. And I tend— and late in the game, I realized that he was right. And so I took a pass at the script, and as I was taking my pass at these two scripts I essentially dumped that plotline completely, and punted and said, "OK, we're going in a different direction." | And then the [[Crossroads, Part II|second part of the episode]]— the second part of "Crossroads" was going to deal with what does he do with the video tape, how does— y'know, getting into the backstory of what happened on New Caprica, the idea was that the Sagittarons had sort of isolated themselves from the rest of the population, and there was a famine that had struck the food supplies, and people were in desperate straits, and the Sagittarons were refusing to share the food that they had carefully cultivated to themselves. And at some point Baltar— and the government sent in the troops and Baltar got involved in the situation, which at first looked on the video tape like he was a cold-blooded murderer, but as the case went on you discovered that actually— that he was more— it was more along the lines of the moment in [[w:Lawrence of Arabia (film)|"Lawrence of Arabia"]] where Lawrence has to shoot the man to save the larger situation between the two tribes. That storyline was present in these two episodes as we went to prep, but the problem was they were just— it just wasn't working, because I think when we read it, [[Michael Rymer]] was probably the first one to put his finger to it, that— y'know, it was making up this other storyline about something that had happened in the past, that the audience really never had investment on. Meanwhile, all the crimes that the audience was interested in, with Gaius Baltar, weren't really being addressed as effectively, and the trial wasn't about something they could really sink their teeth into. And I tend— and late in the game, I realized that he was right. And so I took a pass at the script, and as I was taking my pass at these two scripts I essentially dumped that plotline completely, and punted and said, "OK, we're going in a different direction." | ||
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RDM: Act one. OK. This storyline here of the [[Raptor]] going back to drag the trail, looking for the [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylons]], was something that was in early drafts as we started to re— we knew that we wanted to bring the Cylon threat back into the show, here in <!-- 7:30 -->the last [[Crossroads, Part I|two]] [[Crossroads, Part II|episodes]]. We had been away from it for a while and we stayed away from it deliberately so that we could bring them back in a big way towards the end. And this notion that they had been following along for quite some time and that [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']] was taking precautions, just in case they were, but— and would leave this trailing Raptor behind to sit and wait and see if the Cylons would show up at their old position, and that this time [[William Adama|Adama]] decides to leave a Raptor for a longer period of time, was something that was always in the story from the early get-go. | RDM: Act one. OK. This storyline here of the [[Raptor]] going back to drag the trail, looking for the [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylons]], was something that was in early drafts as we started to re— we knew that we wanted to bring the Cylon threat back into the show, here in <!-- 7:30 -->the last [[Crossroads, Part I|two]] [[Crossroads, Part II|episodes]]. We had been away from it for a while and we stayed away from it deliberately so that we could bring them back in a big way towards the end. And this notion that they had been following along for quite some time and that [[Galactica (RDM)|''Galactica'']] was taking precautions, just in case they were, but— and would leave this trailing Raptor behind to sit and wait and see if the Cylons would show up at their old position, and that this time [[William Adama|Adama]] decides to leave a Raptor for a longer period of time, was something that was always in the story from the early get-go. | ||
<!-- 8:00 -->When I saw the first cut of this episode, which I really liked, I responded very strongly to the first cut of the show, this was how [[Andrew Seklir|Andy]], the editor, and [[Michael Rymer]] chose to open the show. You open straight into the courtroom with the opening statements, which I thought was really interest— an interesting journey. But ultimately, because the episodes were also extraordinarily long, they were like ten and, I think, twenty minutes over, respectively, there was a lot of reshuffling <!-- 8:30 -->that had to be done in the structure, and some things had to go to make room for others, and as a result the teaser reverted back to the way the teaser was actually scripted and structured initially and the opening arguments moved back to the top of act one. There is a significant lift here in her speech. She talks about loss and numbers and how they count up the people that live instead of the people that are dead, because of their particular situation, which I thought was a really intriguing idea <!-- 9:00 -->that was in [[Michael Taylor|Taylor]]'s script, but initially she wrote the number of the entire [[The Twelve Colonies | <!-- 8:00 -->When I saw the first cut of this episode, which I really liked, I responded very strongly to the first cut of the show, this was how [[Andrew Seklir|Andy]], the editor, and [[Michael Rymer]] chose to open the show. You open straight into the courtroom with the opening statements, which I thought was really interest— an interesting journey. But ultimately, because the episodes were also extraordinarily long, they were like ten and, I think, twenty minutes over, respectively, there was a lot of reshuffling <!-- 8:30 -->that had to be done in the structure, and some things had to go to make room for others, and as a result the teaser reverted back to the way the teaser was actually scripted and structured initially and the opening arguments moved back to the top of act one. There is a significant lift here in her speech. She talks about loss and numbers and how they count up the people that live instead of the people that are dead, because of their particular situation, which I thought was a really intriguing idea <!-- 9:00 -->that was in [[Michael Taylor|Taylor]]'s script, but initially she wrote the number of the entire [[The Twelve Colonies (RDM)|Twelve Colonies]] up on that whiteboard in the background, which was like fif— I can't remember what the number was. I'll probably get it wrong if I quote it. But I think it was like fifty-one billion, or something. And she had this big number, and then from that there was a series of subtractions of people lost in the [[Fall of the Twelve Colonies|initial attack]], and then the people lost down through the years, all the way down to [[New Caprica]]. And it was a chain of reasoning that led her all the way to the crimes of [[Gaius Baltar]], which was <!-- 9:30 -->very effective, but it just took too long to get there. And in fact, we had to digitally remove the original numbers from the top of that chart, because the old numbers were up there as well, and so we had to go in and ask [[Gary Hutzel]] and— Gary Hutzel and friends, our new variety show, to remove the old numbers from the board. [[Cassidy]], the prosecutor, in the sh— in early script and definitely in the story, was a man, was an older man, he was a bit of a professor. But as we got close to casting the <!-- 10:00 -->part we started to feel that we hadn't had another strong female character in the show in a while and we wanted to bring another voice into the courtroom and make the opponent a woman. Which I thought was a good choice. | ||
This beat— you'll notice that [[Laura Roslin|Laura]] is gone from the courtroom there. There was a sequence that was cut where Laura— you saw Laura get up and have to leave the courtroom at a certain point, and she goes into the officer's head by herself, and she's in there <!-- 10:30 -->splashing water on her face 'cause she's not feeling well, so it was another clue in her storyline, what's going on with Laura. And while she's in there, [[Sharon Agathon|Sharon]] comes out of one of the stalls and they have a moment together where Sharon— in my dra— when I took a pass at it, I had Sharon actually confront her and say something to her, 'cause she had never been in a room with Laura since the dis— since she learned that Laura had stolen [[Hera|her baby]]. And I had her say something like, "Just remember that a Cylon let you walk out of here alive," or something, <!-- 11:00 -->and then she walked out. And everybody thought that was cr— too much and that Laura— y'know, that it was too dangerous, and it was too overt, and so I cut it back. But there was a scene shot where Laura was in the bathroom and she and Sharon just looked at each other. And it was a lovely scene, and it'll probably end up in the deleted scenes on the DVD or on the website, because [[Mary McDonnell|Mary]] did this great thing of leaning her head against the faucet. The coolness of the metal cooling her forehead, and then Sharon came out, and they looked at each other just for a moment, and it was meant to <!-- 11:30-->evoke the idea that they had reco— they had seen each other in the dream sequence, but weren't ready to really verbally acknowledge that to one another. | This beat— you'll notice that [[Laura Roslin|Laura]] is gone from the courtroom there. There was a sequence that was cut where Laura— you saw Laura get up and have to leave the courtroom at a certain point, and she goes into the officer's head by herself, and she's in there <!-- 10:30 -->splashing water on her face 'cause she's not feeling well, so it was another clue in her storyline, what's going on with Laura. And while she's in there, [[Sharon Agathon|Sharon]] comes out of one of the stalls and they have a moment together where Sharon— in my dra— when I took a pass at it, I had Sharon actually confront her and say something to her, 'cause she had never been in a room with Laura since the dis— since she learned that Laura had stolen [[Hera|her baby]]. And I had her say something like, "Just remember that a Cylon let you walk out of here alive," or something, <!-- 11:00 -->and then she walked out. And everybody thought that was cr— too much and that Laura— y'know, that it was too dangerous, and it was too overt, and so I cut it back. But there was a scene shot where Laura was in the bathroom and she and Sharon just looked at each other. And it was a lovely scene, and it'll probably end up in the deleted scenes on the DVD or on the website, because [[Mary McDonnell|Mary]] did this great thing of leaning her head against the faucet. The coolness of the metal cooling her forehead, and then Sharon came out, and they looked at each other just for a moment, and it was meant to <!-- 11:30-->evoke the idea that they had reco— they had seen each other in the dream sequence, but weren't ready to really verbally acknowledge that to one another. | ||