Editing Murder on the Rising Star/Deleted scenes
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* When Guard #1 walks into Starbuck's cell to check on the inoperative scanner, Starbuck says, | * When Guard #1 walks into Starbuck's cell to check on the inoperative scanner, Starbuck says, | ||
:: '''Starbuck''': "I've never seen equipment this bad. It must've been made by Krelps..." | :: '''Starbuck''': "I've never seen equipment this bad. It must've been made by Krelps..." (The script has a key which defines Krelps as "the dumbest people in universe") | ||
* After Starbuck escapes, we go to a scene: FADE IN GALACTICA - ESTABLISHING SHOT - CLOSE ON ADAMA - HIS QUARTERS - He is furious. As he speaks, we pull back to see Solon sitting across the desk from him... calmly listening. | * After Starbuck escapes, we go to a scene: FADE IN GALACTICA - ESTABLISHING SHOT - CLOSE ON ADAMA - HIS QUARTERS - He is furious. As he speaks, we pull back to see Solon sitting across the desk from him... calmly listening. | ||
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:: '''Apollo''': (whisper) "He'll head for a viper. I'll take Alpha launch bay. You take Beta." | :: '''Apollo''': (whisper) "He'll head for a viper. I'll take Alpha launch bay. You take Beta." | ||
:: '''Boomer''': "Gotcha." | :: '''Boomer''': "Gotcha." | ||
They both race out. BACK ON SOLON AND ADAMA. | |||
:: '''Adama''': "You wanted my answer, Solon." | :: '''Adama''': "You wanted my answer, Solon." | ||
:: '''Solon''': "It won't be necessary, sir. I withdraw my objection. (beat) But this escape should erase any doubt in your mind as to Starbuck's guilt." | :: '''Solon''': "It won't be necessary, sir. I withdraw my objection. (beat) But this escape should erase any doubt in your mind as to Starbuck's guilt." | ||
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:: '''Chella''': "Without Starbuck in there, I'm bound to lose." | :: '''Chella''': "Without Starbuck in there, I'm bound to lose." | ||
:: '''Elias''': "If you didn't wager, you wouldn't have to worry about it." | :: '''Elias''': "If you didn't wager, you wouldn't have to worry about it." | ||
Pallon stops them, points. | |||
:: '''Pallon''': "Good Lord!" | :: '''Pallon''': "Good Lord!" | ||
THEIR POINT OF VIEW - Ortega's arm is protruding from the partially open doorway. | |||
* Another alternate scene: In the launch bay, Apollo is standing on Starbuck's viper and Starbuck has lowered the canopy. They have to shout to be heard through the canopy. | * Another alternate scene: In the launch bay, Apollo is standing on Starbuck's viper and Starbuck has lowered the canopy. They have to shout to be heard through the canopy. | ||