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This might be self-pimping, since the article was my idea, but I think all in all, it's a very good example of a technical article. It recounts facts from the show without retelling whole episode, has many sources from throughout the show and contains some extrapolation without wild speculation (such as in some of the other science articles now and then).
As for improvement, there are two or three real-world references in the "point defense gun" and "Viper and Raptor cannons" section that should probably be moved to footnotes and be removed respectively. --Serenity 17:01, 21 May 2007 (CDT)
- Very nice article. JubalHarshaw 00:12, 2 June 2007 (CDT)