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User talk:Serenity

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Questions on "Hero" and "The Passage"

Thanks for editing the questions I added -- your shortened wording is much clearer and better. Ka-Ping Yee 03:18, 13 February 2008 (CST)

No problem. With the "Hero" question is was not so much length but tense. "The Passage" strayed somewhat into analysis with the elaboration. Usually questions should be one to two short sentences. I could have moved it upwards, but even shortened the point still gets across. -- Serenity 04:48, 13 February 2008 (CST)