Editing User talk:Spencerian/Shortbio

== Format and Comments ==

I stripped much of the narrative, leaving the points crucial to defining Adama. It's still long, but not dramatically so. The "Background" holds past episode data. The "Currently" header should show recent episode (two or three episodes, more if an arc) information. Eventually we'd have to remove older points, but still it should allow flexibility in keeping the essence of the character and his motivations throughout the series history. Comments? --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 16:13, 18 June 2006 (CDT)
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 I stripped much of the narrative, leaving the points crucial to defining Adama. It's still long, but not dramatically so. The "Background" holds past episode data. The "Currently" header should show recent episode (two or three episodes, more if an arc) information. Eventually we'd have to remove older points, but still it should allow flexibility in keeping the essence of the character and his motivations throughout the series history. Comments? --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 16:13, 18 June 2006 (CDT)
-:If we're looking to cut some length, is there any way we could turn the Skyone summary into a one-sentence summary, with a link to a Source: namespace with the whole shebang for those interested. It's background info of questionable canon value, but it's taking up (relatively) a lot of space. --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 10:35, 19 June 2006 (CDT)
-::Agreed. Try striking or adjusting it (make a link to a source test page if necessary). --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 12:03, 19 June 2006 (CDT)
-This is an excellent start. I'll try to read through it and add suggestions soon. --[[User:April Arcus|April Arcus]] 12:38, 19 June 2006 (CDT)
-Hey...almost forgot about this what with recent events. Anyone have additional comments? I may move this page's content to the actual article once there's sufficient commentary and delete the extended bio I made as well. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 14:38, 28 June 2006 (CDT)
-:OK, will be moving this version to replace the existing article. I'll attempt to add any edits of note from the original article back to this. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 09:43, 13 July 2006 (CDT)