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| We look forward to your contributions to the community! | | We look forward to your contributions to the community! |
| --[[User:Mercifull|Mercifull]] <sup>([[User talk:Mercifull|Talk]]/[[Special:Contributions/Mercifull|Contribs]])</sup> 13:32, 10 October 2006 (CDT) | | --[[User:Mercifull|Mercifull]] <sup>([[User talk:Mercifull|Talk]]/[[Special:Contributions/Mercifull|Contribs]])</sup> 13:32, 10 October 2006 (CDT) |
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| ==Verb Tense==
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| Greetings. I appreciate your work at the [[New Caprica]] article, but I must point out that the wiki has standardized on the use of the present tense. Please see [[BW:SC|Standards & Conventions]] for more information. --[[User:April Arcus|April Arcus]] 17:06, 29 October 2006 (CST)
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| :I should also encourage you to be wary of overlinking - generally speaking, a term needs to be linked only once per page-worth of text. --[[User:April Arcus|April Arcus]] 17:14, 29 October 2006 (CST)
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| ::Agreed on the links. I removed most of them and it's much more readable now IMO.
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| ::Two more things: 1.) Don't capitalize the verb "jump" 2.) Ship names without articles are usually better. "Galactica jumps away" instead "The Galactica jumps away" --[[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 17:51, 29 October 2006 (CST)
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