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| You wrote in several articles that Leoben (it's not actually Leoben, it's something else) tells Kara she's a Cylon. I went back and replayed and could not find this. Do you know approximately when in the episode you heard that?--[[User:Bradtem|Bradtem]] 04:25, 5 March 2007 (CST) | | You wrote in several articles that Leoben (it's not actually Leoben, it's something else) tells Kara she's a Cylon. I went back and replayed and could not find this. Do you know approximately when in the episode you heard that?--[[User:Bradtem|Bradtem]] 04:25, 5 March 2007 (CST) |
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| :Here's the relevant dialogue:
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| ::Kara: "Mama, something's about to happen, you know that thing you were trying to prepare me for, I don't know if I can do it.
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| ::Socrata: "Oh yes you can, Kara."
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| ::Kara: "How can you be sure?"
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| ::Socrata: "You're my daughter."
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| ::Leoben: "See there's nothing terrible about death, when you finally face it, it's beautiful. You're free now, to become who you really are."
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| ::Kara: "Get out Leoben."
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| ::Leoben: "You're a Cylon, I'm here to prepare you to pass through the next door, to discover what happens in the space between life and death."
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| :It's in the final flashback around the middle of act 4. -- [[User:Gordon Ecker|Gordon Ecker]] 19:31, 5 March 2007 (CST)
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| == Gratias ==
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| Thanks for reverting the vandalism on the Humanoid Cylon Speculation article. The annoying user has been sacked. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 22:58, 20 April 2007 (CDT)
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| == Specs ==
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| Just wanna drop in and say I enjoyed reading your speculations. The tid-bit about young Saul and Tigh being Baltar's father are very odd and way out there, though rather amusing. -- [[User:Veepz|Veepz]] 02:00, 27 July 2007 (CDT)
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| == Episode Guides ==
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| Good to see someone else writing episodes guides. But it would help a lot if you'd take a look at [[BW:SAC]]. The main point is: don't use first names unless you need to distinguish between people sharing a name. And don't use callsigns unless the action really takes place in the cockpit. If you'd take that into consideration right away, there would be a lot less work in cleaning it up and it's really not much more work when writing. :)
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| Otherwise, longer paragraphs are better. Generally one paragraph per scene is fine. Of course it depends on the scene length, but going by other guides, you break it down a bit too much. Aside from that, it's mostly fine :) -- [[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 11:58, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
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