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About the "Residents" section, I think it looks better to have a paragraph about it rather than a bulleted list, since the only residents we know of are relatives of Sharon. It flows better than saying, "the following is a list of residents" followed by a sentence about the people whose names we have not read yet. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] 10:03, 12 September 2005 (EDT) | About the "Residents" section, I think it looks better to have a paragraph about it rather than a bulleted list, since the only residents we know of are relatives of Sharon. It flows better than saying, "the following is a list of residents" followed by a sentence about the people whose names we have not read yet. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] 10:03, 12 September 2005 (EDT) | ||