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There were some minor text corrections in word choice that were made for simple proofreading. Also edited the tense from present tense to past tense to make it read more like a biographical entry and not something that is going on currently. Also changed names in certain instances to make it more clear who was being referred to in the description rather than just leaving it as a pronoun or last name only. I hope these changes are acceptable for an otherwise well-written article. [[User:Wjclerk|Wjclerk]] 17:48, 3 October 2013 (EDT) | There were some minor text corrections in word choice that were made for simple proofreading. Also edited the tense from present tense to past tense to make it read more like a biographical entry and not something that is going on currently. Also changed names in certain instances to make it more clear who was being referred to in the description rather than just leaving it as a pronoun or last name only. I hope these changes are acceptable for an otherwise well-written article. [[User:Wjclerk|Wjclerk]] 17:48, 3 October 2013 (EDT) | ||