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==Massive Rewrite in Progress== | ==Massive Rewrite in Progress== | ||
I started to work on this article. I'm hoping to phase out the "missions" list by incorporating the relevant missions into the bio narrative. The same may go with the other subcategories. Hopefully, this article will end up looking as similar as possible to [[Kara Thrace]], such that the look and feel of the TOS main characters are uniform. Granted, Kara has a lot more material to draw from, but that means I can be a little more verbose in the bio narrative without running into size restrictions. I'll also need to find some good pics to insert inline like Kara's. --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 16:57, 15 February 2006 (EST) | I started to work on this article. I'm hoping to phase out the "missions" list by incorporating the relevant missions into the bio narrative. The same may go with the other subcategories. Hopefully, this article will end up looking as similar as possible to [[Kara Thrace]], such that the look and feel of the TOS main characters are uniform. Granted, Kara has a lot more material to draw from, but that means I can be a little more verbose in the bio narrative without running into size restrictions. I'll also need to find some good pics to insert inline like Kara's. --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 16:57, 15 February 2006 (EST) | ||
==Gender Mixup== | ==Gender Mixup== | ||
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Most of the paragraphs in the Bio narrative start with "Starbuck". If somebody could come up with literary devices to avoid that (like the Kara thrace article), that'd be cool. --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 11:37, 16 February 2006 (EST) | Most of the paragraphs in the Bio narrative start with "Starbuck". If somebody could come up with literary devices to avoid that (like the Kara thrace article), that'd be cool. --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 11:37, 16 February 2006 (EST) | ||
:Done. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 11:55, 16 February 2006 (EST) | :Done. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 11:55, 16 February 2006 (EST) | ||