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::And again I marked for cleanup. The Temple of Five stuff is still wordy and repetitive of episode data. Needs only her perspective and not a full explanation, IMO. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 14:45, 16 August 2007 (CDT) | ::And again I marked for cleanup. The Temple of Five stuff is still wordy and repetitive of episode data. Needs only her perspective and not a full explanation, IMO. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 14:45, 16 August 2007 (CDT) | ||
:::I removed some parts about the initial quest and the arrival at the temple and cut just about everything about the standoff above the algae planet, as that's really the least important part, even if a Three comes to ''Galactica''. What I left pretty much intact is the vision she receives in the temple and the boxing as that | :::I removed some parts about the initial quest and the arrival at the temple and cut just about everything about the standoff above the algae planet, as that's really the least important part, even if a Three comes to ''Galactica''. What I left pretty much intact is the vision she receives in the temple and the boxing as that the key about that part. All in all, it's length is comparable to other sections now. Feel free to remove more though if you want. --[[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 15:50, 16 August 2007 (CDT) | ||
:::Looks much better, thanks. I've removed the tag. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 09:02, 17 August 2007 (CDT) | :::Looks much better, thanks. I've removed the tag. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 09:02, 17 August 2007 (CDT) | ||