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:I think the intent of the article was to cover the entire fracture of the fleet from the prison break to the portion of the fleet that jumps away...all the way through Home Part II. However I think it was put together piecemeal and so it's as fractured as the fleet :) I'm going to mark it for cleanup rather than create a new article. I think of the whole thing as one big event.--[[User:RUSnooky|RUSnooky]] 22:05, 17 July 2007 (CDT)
:I think the intent of the article was to cover the entire fracture of the fleet from the prison break to the portion of the fleet that jumps away...all the way through Home Part II. However I think it was put together piecemeal and so it's as fractured as the fleet :) I'm going to mark it for cleanup rather than create a new article. I think of the whole thing as one big event.--[[User:RUSnooky|RUSnooky]] 22:05, 17 July 2007 (CDT)
::Agreed. Keeping both in one article makes sense. But it could be restructed to flow more naturally. --[[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 07:40, 18 July 2007 (CDT)
::Agreed. Keeping both in one article makes sense. But it could be restructed to flow more naturally. --[[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 07:40, 18 July 2007 (CDT)
I restructured the article a bit, by moving the part about the escape plan and the people involved further up, thus it's really about the people and their actions. I also expanded the retelling of the escape a bit as it's spread over several episodes. Tigh's and Baltar's action are truly analysis and get a separate section.<br/>
The overly technical composition of the Fleet is really secondary, but doesn't need an own article --[[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 07:40, 14 August 2007 (CDT)

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