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I like this article, but it could stand a bit of reworking to give its in-universe voice more zest, as well as lots of referencing and links. I'm marking it for cleanup for that reason. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 17:21, 21 June 2007 (CDT) | I like this article, but it could stand a bit of reworking to give its in-universe voice more zest, as well as lots of referencing and links. I'm marking it for cleanup for that reason. --[[User:Spencerian|Spencerian]] 17:21, 21 June 2007 (CDT) | ||