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: I actually pared it down a bit, and made it more chronologically correct. Any hint of analysis or reasoning in the Summary's content is not my doing -- I try to keep a very sterile "This happened, then that" approach in writing. I'm sure that a few "steps" can be condensed further, but looking it over at this point, it looks like it describes what transcended fairly well. -- [[User:Hawke|Hawke]] 20:56, 28 January 2006 (EST)
: I actually pared it down a bit, and made it more chronologically correct. Any hint of analysis or reasoning in the Summary's content is not my doing -- I try to keep a very sterile "This happened, then that" approach in writing. I'm sure that a few "steps" can be condensed further, but looking it over at this point, it looks like it describes what transcended fairly well. -- [[User:Hawke|Hawke]] 20:56, 28 January 2006 (EST)
::Got rid of a few analysis points myself, looks a lot better now. --[[User:Bane Grievver|Bane Grievver]] 16:10, 29 January 2006 (EST)
: Got rid of a few analysis points myself, looks a lot better now. --[[User:Bane Grievver|Bane Grievver]] 16:10, 29 January 2006 (EST)


I don't know if the flashbacks of Apollo's relationship from before the attack should be characterized as an "interesting turn."  "Contrived" would make more sense.  We've heard next to nothing about Apollo's relationships for 26 episodes, not to mention the miniseries, and all of a sudden he has a pregnant girlfriend that he misses terribly?  I can excuse someone like Wallace Grey appearing out of nowhere, but this is just too much, and I think the analysis should reflect that.  --[[User:Drumstick|Drumstick]] 13:37, 29 January 2006 (EST)
I don't know if the flashbacks of Apollo's relationship from before the attack should be characterized as an "interesting turn."  "Contrived" would make more sense.  We've heard next to nothing about Apollo's relationships for 26 episodes, not to mention the miniseries, and all of a sudden he has a pregnant girlfriend that he misses terribly?  I can excuse someone like Wallace Grey appearing out of nowhere, but this is just too much, and I think the analysis should reflect that.  --[[User:Drumstick|Drumstick]] 13:37, 29 January 2006 (EST)

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