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Analysis Section in this episode has been done differently. Just wanted to make a note about it so it can be fixed later. Also, the analysis needs a rewrite. --[[User:Gougef|FrankieG]] 11:36, 18 September 2006 (CDT)
Analysis Section in this episode has been done differently. Just wanted to make a note about it so it can be fixed later. Also, the analysis needs a rewrite. --[[User:Gougef|FrankieG]] 11:36, 18 September 2006 (CDT)
:Maybe slap a <nowiki>{{Cleanup}}</nowiki> at the top? --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 11:43, 18 September 2006 (CDT)
:Maybe slap a <nowiki>{{Cleanup}}</nowiki> at the top? --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 11:43, 18 September 2006 (CDT)
::Duh! on me. thanks. --[[User:Gougef|FrankieG]] 12:35, 18 September 2006 (CDT)
:::Well we certainly don't utilize those as much around here as, say, Wikipedia. Actually over at "Big W" I think they even have "section level" templates ("This section has been marked for cleanup") though I think that may be overkill, especially with the explanation (provided above). --[[User:Steelviper|Steelviper]] 13:07, 18 September 2006 (CDT)
::::I cleaned up the "format" of the Analysis section, but think that it could use a rewrite also. --[[User:Gougef|FrankieG]] 14:45, 23 September 2006 (CDT)
I shorted the Analysis paragraphs a lot while still retaining their meaning. It also reads better as the sentences had a tendency to run on too long. A moved about three points to Notes (Cally's role, visibility of the civilian fleet, Boxey's role) where I think they belong better.
What might be moved to Analysis instead is the part about the retcon of the ''Astral Queen''. --[[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 11:03, 28 December 2006 (CST)

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