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| bookno= 5
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| author=[[Richard Hatch]] and [[Brad Linaweaver]]
| author=[[Richard Hatch]] and Brad Linaweaver
| published= July 1, 2003
| published= July 1, 2003
| isbn=0743474414
| isbn=0743474414
| prev= ''[[Rebellion]]''
| prev= [[Rebellion]]
| next= ''[[Destiny (book)|Destiny]]''
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Now, panting in the darkness of his quarters, Baltar tries to reassure himself that it is only a dream. But he knows better—he has always known better. The nightmare images that have plagued him throughout their time on Paradis have finally coalesced into one great, menacing, undeniable message that he can no longer ignore or rationalize away. The message is simple, direct, and terrifying in its implications for everything the fleet has struggled to achieve: the Cylons are coming.<ref name="PAR241" />
Now, panting in the darkness of his quarters, Baltar tries to reassure himself that it is only a dream. But he knows better—he has always known better. The nightmare images that have plagued him throughout their time on Paradis have finally coalesced into one great, menacing, undeniable message that he can no longer ignore or rationalize away. The message is simple, direct, and terrifying in its implications for everything the fleet has struggled to achieve: the Cylons are coming.<ref name="PAR241" />
== Behind the Scenes ==
=== Development and Collaboration ===
''Paradis'' was the first novel in the collaboration between [[Richard Hatch]] and Brad Linaweaver, marking the beginning of their three-book partnership.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_paradis_beginning">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=This%20opportunity%20was%20provided%20by%20the%20grandfather%20of%20DRAGON%20CON|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> The collaboration came about through Edward E. Kramer, who connected Linaweaver with Hatch after buying numerous short stories from Linaweaver for various anthologies and co-editing the libertarian science fiction anthology ''Free Space'' with him for Tor Books.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_paradis_beginning" /> Kramer believed Linaweaver could bring more to Hatch's novels than his previous collaborators.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_paradis_beginning" />
The initial meeting took place at Hatch's apartment in Studio City in 2003, during which Hatch presented Linaweaver with his extensive master outline for what would become ''Paradis''.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_first_meeting">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=I%20only%20partly%20understood%20the%20special%20quality%20Richard%20had%20with%20the%20series|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Linaweaver recalled that Hatch's outlines were epic in scope, demonstrating how seriously he took the novels.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_outlines">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=Let%20me%20tell%20you%20about%20Richard%20and%20his%20outlines|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref>
=== Writing Method ===
The collaborative method that would define all three novels was established with ''Paradis''. Hatch excelled at constructing elaborate plots through his detailed outlines, while Linaweaver focused on going deeper into the characters, enriching the dialogue, and providing narrative flow.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_method">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=His%20plots.%20My%20narrative%20flow|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Linaweaver promised Hatch never to turn a chunk of his beloved master outline into a quick first draft simply to cash a check, committing to treating the media tie-in novels as actual novels rather than commercial product.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_method" />
The two writers would meet to review each chapter together, fixing problems and refining content.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_process">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=We%27d%20meet%20and%20go%20over%20each%20chapter|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Hatch could always politely decline to include material if it didn't work, giving Linaweaver freedom to experiment.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_process" />
=== Content Additions ===
For ''Paradis'', which primarily takes place on a planet where the heroes are temporarily marooned, Linaweaver asked if he could add a chapter featuring a giant monster, reasoning that being on another planet without a giant monster missed an opportunity.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_monster">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=I%20asked%20if%20I%20could%20add%20a%20chapter%20with%20a%20giant%20monster|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Hatch agreed to let him try, and ultimately liked the result enough to include it in the final novel.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_monster" />
The collaboration also addressed the adult approach to sex that had been part of the original movie-quality episodes.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_sex">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=We%27d%20already%20had%20a%20meeting%20of%20minds%20on%20something%20more%20important|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Hatch's novels pushed the envelope, and Linaweaver wanted to develop this aspect further, with the heroes and heroines spending as much time wrestling with passionate emotions as with each other.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_sex" />
Linaweaver's contribution included transforming brief outline elements into detailed prose. He provided an example from the novel where a brief outline note about the Colonials coming down to the planet became an elaborate passage describing the dismantling of ships in orbit, the creative use of heat shields and mini-thrusters, and the burial of the dead in the earth of the new world, including the body of {{TOS-RH|Cain}}.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_detail">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=Another%20thing%20that%20came%20out%20of%20the%20first%20of%20our%20novels|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref>
=== Publication and Convention Appearances ===
''Paradis'' was published by ibooks and distributed by Simon & Schuster.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_publication">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=This%20opportunity%20was%20provided%20by%20the%20grandfather%20of%20DRAGON%20CON|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Like the subsequent novels in the series, it suffered from production issues, as the publisher never allowed Hatch to review galleys before publication, resulting in copy editing and proofreading errors.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galleys">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=ibooks%20never%20let%20Richard%20see%20the%20galleys|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> Hatch openly shared this information with fans at conventions rather than keeping it secret.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galleys" />
The novel was celebrated at GALACTICON, held October 24-26, 2003 at the Sheraton Universal in Los Angeles, which coincided with California wildfires.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galacticon">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=Along%20with%20appearances%20at%20DRAGON%20CON|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> The 25th anniversary event featured many celebrities from the early, expensive days of ''Battlestar Galactica'', and the wildfires kept some notables from leaving prematurely.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galacticon" /> Linaweaver had the recently published ''Paradis'' in hand and collected as many autographs as possible.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galacticon" />
During a panel at GALACTICON, Hatch and Linaweaver gave each other credit for their respective contributions to ''Paradis'', which the fans appreciated.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galacticon_panel">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=Doing%20a%20panel%20with%20him%20at%20the%20event|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref> One fan pointed out that the copy editing and proofreading on ''Paradis'' was terrible, and Linaweaver noted that none of the fans assumed it was the authors' fault—they correctly blamed ibooks.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galacticon_panel" /> Linaweaver took the opportunity to express hope that ibooks would do better on future books.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_galacticon_panel" />
The success of ''Paradis'' led directly to the subsequent collaborations on ''[[Destiny (TOS-RH)|Destiny]]'' and ''[[Redemption (TOS-RH)|Redemption]]'', establishing a working relationship and friendship between Hatch and Linaweaver that would continue until Hatch's death in 2017.<ref group="external" name="linaweaver_mondocult_friendship">{{cite web|url=http://www.mondocult.com/articles/Linaweaver/Hatch/hatch.html#:~:text=The%20way%20we%20worked%20led%20to%20a%20friendship|title=A Man for All Reasons: A Personal Tribute to Richard Hatch|author=Brad Linaweaver|publisher=Mondo Cult|date=November 2009|accessdate=November 2, 2025}}</ref>


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