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=== April 13, 2004: Pink Revision === | === April 13, 2004: Pink Revision === | ||
Targeted revisions to 24 specific pages | Targeted revisions to 24 specific pages: 8, 10, 12, 14, 18, 19, 21, 21A, 21B, 23, 24, 26, 27-28, 33, 35, 38, 39, 42, 44, 45, 47, 48, 49, 50. The creation of pages 21A and 21B suggests the expansion of scenes in Act One, likely refining the tension-building sequences as the Fleet prepares for jumps. | ||
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=== April 16, 2004: Yellow Revision === | === April 16, 2004: Yellow Revision === | ||
Extensive changes to 31 pages | Extensive changes to 31 pages: 2, 3, 5, 7, 8, 10, 12, 12A, 13, 15, 18, 19, 20, 21, 21A, 21B, 48, 49, 50, 50A, 51, 52, 53. The addition of pages 12A and 50A indicates expanded scenes, with page 12A likely enhancing the Viper pilot dialogue sequences and 50A potentially expanding the episode's resolution. | ||
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=== April 19, 2004: Green Revision === | === April 19, 2004: Green Revision === | ||
Focused changes to 6 pages | Focused changes to 6 pages: 18, 23, 29, 30, 33, 45. This targeted revision suggests final dialogue polish and technical adjustments to key dramatic moments, including scenes involving Cylon attacks and character interactions. | ||
This targeted revision suggests final dialogue polish and technical adjustments to key dramatic moments, including scenes involving Cylon attacks | |||
=== May 10, 2004: Goldenrod Revision === | === May 10, 2004: Goldenrod Revision === | ||
Final pre-production changes to 4 pages | Final pre-production changes to 4 pages: 3, 3A, 4, 4A. The addition of pages 3A and 4A represents last-minute scene additions or expansions, likely fine-tuning the opening sequences of the episode. This revision occurred just four days before the final script compilation on May 14, 2004. | ||
The addition of pages 3A and 4A represents last-minute scene additions or expansions | |||
=== Notable Omissions and Plot Changes === | === Notable Omissions and Plot Changes === | ||
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The final script shows significant content removal that affected key character development and world-building elements: | The final script shows significant content removal that affected key character development and world-building elements: | ||
'''Scenes 46-63 (End of Act One):''' These 18 omitted scenes originally followed the establishment of Dr. | '''Scenes 46-63 (End of Act One):''' These 18 omitted scenes originally followed the establishment of Dr. Amarak's importance and Baltar's growing panic.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.50, script p.45}}</ref> Based on the surviving content, this likely included extended character interactions and setup for the memorial hallway sequence. | ||
'''Memorial Hallway Sequence:''' The script contains detailed scenes showing | '''Memorial Hallway Sequence:''' The script contains detailed scenes showing Dualla's visit to a communications office where she attempts to locate missing family members from Sagittaron, learning that 5,251 survivors from her home colony have been accounted for.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.45, script p.40}}</ref> This leads to the powerful memorial hallway scene where "the sheer number of the faces...hits Dualla in the chest" as she encounters the improvised memorial wall covered with "photos, descriptions of loved ones, small drawings, tributes" where crew members are "putting up photos, touching the faces of missing loved ones, praying, or just staring at the faces."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.47, script p.42}}</ref> | ||
'''Pilots' Ready Room "Lest We Forget" Photo:''' The script provides extensive detail about the iconic photo that pilots touch before missions, describing it as showing "a Colonial soldier with his back to the camera, standing on a rooftop, looking out over a city. Dark clouds of smoke rise up from the city. A Colonial flag ripples in the breeze above his head."<ref | '''Pilots' Ready Room "Lest We Forget" Photo:''' The script provides extensive detail about the iconic photo that pilots touch before missions, describing it as showing "a Colonial soldier with his back to the camera, standing on a rooftop, looking out over a city. Dark clouds of smoke rise up from the city. A Colonial flag ripples in the breeze above his head."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.46, script p.41}}</ref> | ||
'''Scenes 87-93 (Act Two):''' Seven consecutive scenes were omitted between the patrol setup and | '''Scenes 87-93 (Act Two):''' Seven consecutive scenes were omitted between the patrol setup and Laura's exhausted late-night work session.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.91, script p.86}}</ref> These likely contained additional character development showing the psychological toll of the relentless Cylon pursuit. | ||
'''Scene 68 (Act Three):''' A single omitted scene at the beginning of Act Three,<ref | '''Scene 68 (Act Three):''' A single omitted scene at the beginning of Act Three,<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.73, script p.68}}</ref> likely involving setup for the discovery of the Olympic Carrier's disappearance. | ||
'''Character Development Elements:''' The revisions particularly affected scenes showing the human cost of the crisis, including Dualla's personal search for family members, detailed casualty reports mentioning specific numbers of "nervous exhaustion" cases and suicides, and extended sequences showing crew members coping with grief and loss through the memorial wall. | '''Character Development Elements:''' The revisions particularly affected scenes showing the human cost of the crisis, including Dualla's personal search for family members, detailed casualty reports mentioning specific numbers of "nervous exhaustion" cases and suicides, and extended sequences showing crew members coping with grief and loss through the memorial wall. | ||