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=== April 13, 2004: Pink Revision ===
=== April 13, 2004: Pink Revision ===
Targeted revisions to 24 specific pages affecting key narrative sequences:
Targeted revisions to 24 specific pages: 8, 10, 12, 14, 18, 19, 21, 21A, 21B, 23, 24, 26, 27-28, 33, 35, 38, 39, 42, 44, 45, 47, 48, 49, 50. The creation of pages 21A and 21B suggests the expansion of scenes in Act One, likely refining the tension-building sequences as the Fleet prepares for jumps.
 
* '''Pages 8, 10:''' ''[[Colonial One]]'' [[FTL]] issues and hangar deck scenes with [[Cally Tyrol|Cally]]'s sleep-deprived questioning of the 33-minute pattern
* '''Page 12:''' [[Kara Thrace]] and [[Lee Adama]]'s dialogue about jump counts reaching "two thirty-seven"
* '''Page 14:''' [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s intimate scene with [[Messenger Six|Six]] in his house, establishing the "Time's up" motif
* '''Pages 18-19:''' Combat sequences with [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] attack aftermath and jump preparations
* '''Pages 21, 21A, 21B:''' Expansion of Act One scenes (new pages 21A and 21B suggest significant additions to character interactions)
* '''Pages 23-24:''' Post-jump sequences with ''Colonial One''{{'|s}} appearance and Baltar's transition between reality and his house visions
* '''Page 26:''' Baltar's philosophical conversation with Six about belief systems
* '''Page 33:''' Jump 237 completion and fleet status reports
* '''Page 35:''' End of Teaser with Baltar and Six's intimate moment as the clock ticks
* '''Pages 38-39:''' [[William Adama|Adama]] and [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]]'s conversation about fleet jump preparations and civilian crew delays 
* '''Page 42:''' [[Memorial hallway]] sequence showing [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]]'s emotional encounter with the wall of missing persons
* '''Pages 44-45:''' [["Lest We Forget"]] photo presentation to [[Laura Roslin|President Roslin]] and Baltar's conversation with Six about having children
* '''Pages 47-50:''' Dr. [[Amarak]] introduction, Baltar's panic about potential exposure, and the setup for ''[[Olympic Carrier]]'' plot
 
The creation of pages 21A and 21B suggests significant expansion of early Act One material, likely enhancing character development and tension-building sequences.


=== April 16, 2004: Yellow Revision ===
=== April 16, 2004: Yellow Revision ===
Extensive changes to 31 pages with significant scene expansions:
Extensive changes to 31 pages: 2, 3, 5, 7, 8, 10, 12, 12A, 13, 15, 18, 19, 20, 21, 21A, 21B, 48, 49, 50, 50A, 51, 52, 53. The addition of pages 12A and 50A indicates expanded scenes, with page 12A likely enhancing the Viper pilot dialogue sequences and 50A potentially expanding the episode's resolution.
 
* '''Pages 2-3:''' Opening [[Viper (RDM)|Viper]] squadron sequences and [[Lee Adama]]'s countdown dialogue in his cockpit
* '''Page 5:''' [[Combat Information Center|CIC]] scenes with [[William Adama|Adama]], [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]], [[Felix Gaeta|Gaeta]], and [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]] monitoring jump preparations
* '''Pages 7-8:''' ''[[Colonial One]]'' [[FTL]] computer issues and [[Laura Roslin]]'s attempts to maintain confidence
* '''Page 10:''' [[Cally Tyrol|Cally]]'s sleep-deprived questioning about the 33-minute pattern on the [[hangar deck]]
* '''Pages 12, 12A:''' Expanded Viper pilot dialogue with new page 12A adding [[Lee Adama]] and [[Kara Thrace]]'s conversation about jump counts reaching 237
* '''Pages 13, 15:''' [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s house sequences and transition between reality and his visions
* '''Pages 18-20:''' Extended combat aftermath and CIC activity during [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] attacks
* '''Pages 21, 21A, 21B:''' Continued expansion of Act One character development scenes
* '''Pages 48-50, 50A:''' ''[[Olympic Carrier]]'' plot development with new page 50A likely expanding the resolution sequences
* '''Pages 51-53:''' Final act sequences including the aftermath of the ''Olympic Carrier'' destruction
 
The addition of pages 12A and 50A indicates significant scene expansions at crucial narrative moments - the Viper pilot interactions and the episode's conclusion.


=== April 19, 2004: Green Revision ===
=== April 19, 2004: Green Revision ===
Focused changes to 6 pages for final dialogue polish and technical adjustments:
Focused changes to 6 pages: 18, 23, 29, 30, 33, 45. This targeted revision suggests final dialogue polish and technical adjustments to key dramatic moments, including scenes involving Cylon attacks and character interactions.
 
* '''Page 18:''' Combat sequences and Cylon attack aftermath refinements
* '''Page 23:''' Post-jump sequences with ''Colonial One''{{'|s}} appearance and fleet regrouping
* '''Pages 29-30:''' Mid-episode character development and plot progression moments
* '''Page 33:''' Jump 237 completion and critical fleet status reports
* '''Page 45:''' Dr. [[Amarak]] introduction and [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s growing panic about potential exposure
 
This targeted revision suggests final dialogue polish and technical adjustments to key dramatic moments, including scenes involving Cylon attacks, jump completions, and character interactions.


=== May 10, 2004: Goldenrod Revision ===
=== May 10, 2004: Goldenrod Revision ===
Final pre-production changes to 4 pages with last-minute scene additions:
Final pre-production changes to 4 pages: 3, 3A, 4, 4A. The addition of pages 3A and 4A represents last-minute scene additions or expansions, likely fine-tuning the opening sequences of the episode. This revision occurred just four days before the final script compilation on May 14, 2004.
 
* '''Pages 3, 3A:''' Opening episode sequences with new page 3A expanding [[Lee Adama]]'s [[Viper (RDM)|Viper]] cockpit scenes and the countdown to the jump
* '''Pages 4, 4A:''' Early teaser material with new page 4A likely expanding [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s house sequences and [[Messenger Six|Six]]'s philosophical discussions about [[God (RDM)|God]]'s plan
 
The addition of pages 3A and 4A represents last-minute scene additions or expansions to the opening sequences of the episode. This revision occurred just four days before the final script compilation on May 14, 2004, suggesting final refinements to the crucial opening moments that establish the episode's tone and the 33-minute cycle premise.


=== Notable Omissions and Plot Changes ===
=== Notable Omissions and Plot Changes ===
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The final script shows significant content removal that affected key character development and world-building elements:
The final script shows significant content removal that affected key character development and world-building elements:


'''Scenes 46-63 (End of Act One):''' These 18 omitted scenes originally followed the establishment of Dr. [[Amarak]]'s importance and [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s growing panic.<ref name="moore_33_script_omitted_scenes_act_one">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.50, script p.45}}</ref> Based on the surviving content, this likely included extended character interactions and setup for the memorial hallway sequence.
'''Scenes 46-63 (End of Act One):''' These 18 omitted scenes originally followed the establishment of Dr. Amarak's importance and Baltar's growing panic.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.50, script p.45}}</ref> Based on the surviving content, this likely included extended character interactions and setup for the memorial hallway sequence.


'''Memorial Hallway Sequence:''' The script contains detailed scenes showing [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]]'s visit to a communications office where she attempts to locate missing family members from [[Sagittaron]], learning that 5,251 survivors from her home colony have been accounted for.<ref name="moore_33_script_dualla_sagittaron_survivors">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.45, script p.40}}</ref> This leads to the powerful [[memorial hallway]] scene where "the sheer number of the faces...hits Dualla in the chest" as she encounters the improvised memorial wall covered with "photos, descriptions of loved ones, small drawings, tributes" where crew members are "putting up photos, touching the faces of missing loved ones, praying, or just staring at the faces."<ref name="moore_33_script_memorial_wall_description">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.47, script p.42}}</ref>
'''Memorial Hallway Sequence:''' The script contains detailed scenes showing Dualla's visit to a communications office where she attempts to locate missing family members from Sagittaron, learning that 5,251 survivors from her home colony have been accounted for.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.45, script p.40}}</ref> This leads to the powerful memorial hallway scene where "the sheer number of the faces...hits Dualla in the chest" as she encounters the improvised memorial wall covered with "photos, descriptions of loved ones, small drawings, tributes" where crew members are "putting up photos, touching the faces of missing loved ones, praying, or just staring at the faces."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.47, script p.42}}</ref>


'''Pilots' Ready Room "Lest We Forget" Photo:''' The script provides extensive detail about the iconic photo that pilots touch before missions, describing it as showing "a Colonial soldier with his back to the camera, standing on a rooftop, looking out over a city. Dark clouds of smoke rise up from the city. A Colonial flag ripples in the breeze above his head."<ref name="moore_33_script_lest_we_forget_photo_description">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.46, script p.41}}</ref>
'''Pilots' Ready Room "Lest We Forget" Photo:''' The script provides extensive detail about the iconic photo that pilots touch before missions, describing it as showing "a Colonial soldier with his back to the camera, standing on a rooftop, looking out over a city. Dark clouds of smoke rise up from the city. A Colonial flag ripples in the breeze above his head."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.46, script p.41}}</ref>


'''Scenes 87-93 (Act Two):''' Seven consecutive scenes were omitted between the patrol setup and [[Laura Roslin]]'s exhausted late-night work session.<ref name="moore_33_script_omitted_scenes_act_two">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.91, script p.86}}</ref> These likely contained additional character development showing the psychological toll of the relentless [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] pursuit.
'''Scenes 87-93 (Act Two):''' Seven consecutive scenes were omitted between the patrol setup and Laura's exhausted late-night work session.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.91, script p.86}}</ref> These likely contained additional character development showing the psychological toll of the relentless Cylon pursuit.


'''Scene 68 (Act Three):''' A single omitted scene at the beginning of Act Three,<ref name="moore_33_script_omitted_scene_68">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.73, script p.68}}</ref> likely involving setup for the discovery of the ''[[Olympic Carrier]]''{{'|s}} disappearance.
'''Scene 68 (Act Three):''' A single omitted scene at the beginning of Act Three,<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.73, script p.68}}</ref> likely involving setup for the discovery of the Olympic Carrier's disappearance.


'''Character Development Elements:''' The revisions particularly affected scenes showing the human cost of the crisis, including Dualla's personal search for family members, detailed casualty reports mentioning specific numbers of "nervous exhaustion" cases and suicides, and extended sequences showing crew members coping with grief and loss through the memorial wall.
'''Character Development Elements:''' The revisions particularly affected scenes showing the human cost of the crisis, including Dualla's personal search for family members, detailed casualty reports mentioning specific numbers of "nervous exhaustion" cases and suicides, and extended sequences showing crew members coping with grief and loss through the memorial wall.

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