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* The crew of [[Galactica type battlestar|battlestar]] ''{{RDM|Galactica}}'' have been on continuous alert for some 130.35 hours, during which time the Fleet has had to make an [[FTL|FTL jump]] every 33 minutes to escape their [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] pursuers shortly after their initial escape from [[Ragnar Anchorage]].
* The crew of [[Galactica type battlestar|battlestar]] ''{{RDM|Galactica}}'' have been on continuous alert for some 130.35 hours, during which time the Fleet has had to make an [[FTL|FTL jump]] every 33 minutes to escape their [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] pursuers shortly after their initial escape from [[Ragnar Anchorage]].
* Everyone in the Fleet is beginning to feel the strain – particularly [[Gaius Baltar]], who is also distracted by [[Number Six|Six's]] repeated conversations about [[God (RDM)|God]] having a plan for him, and also her wanting to have his children.
* Everyone in the Fleet is beginning to feel the strain – particularly [[Gaius Baltar]], who is also distracted by [[Number Six|Six's]] repeated conversations about [[God (RDM)|God]] having a plan for him, and also her wanting to have his children.
* Vessels in the Fleet are also beginning to feel the strain: Jump engines and their controlling computers are starting to breakdown or malfunction, requiring ''Galactica'' to linger longer and longer in the Cylon line of fire while the rest of the fleet complete their jumps.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.10, script p.5}}</ref> As reported in the [[Combat Information Center|CIC]], "ten [ships are] still reporting trouble with their FTL drives. Including Colonial One."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.9, script p.4}}</ref>
* Vessels in the Fleet are also beginning to feel the strain: Jump engines and their controlling computers are starting to breakdown or malfunction, requiring ''Galactica'' to linger longer and longer in the Cylon line of fire while the rest of the fleet complete their jumps.
*[[Anastasia Dualla]] finds time to visit a team of people who are [[Fleet registry|cataloging survivors]] in the Fleet. When she cannot leave her photos to aid in searching for her loved ones, she is amazed to see a corridor that has been [[Memorial hallway|converted into a makeshift memorial]].
*[[Anastasia Dualla]] finds time to visit a team of people who are [[Fleet registry|cataloging survivors]] in the Fleet. When she cannot leave her photos to aid in searching for her loved ones, she is amazed to see a corridor that has been [[Memorial hallway|converted into a makeshift memorial]].
* Elsewhere, [[Sharon Valerii|Sharon "Boomer" Valerii]] is having problems accepting her new [[ECO]], {{callsign|Crashdown}}, and is feeling guilty about leaving [[Karl Agathon|Karl "Helo" Agathon]] on {{RDM|Caprica}} to his fate.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.90, script p.85}}</ref>
* Elsewhere, [[Sharon Valerii|Sharon "Boomer" Valerii]] is having problems accepting her new [[ECO]], {{callsign|Crashdown}}, and is feeling guilty about leaving [[Karl Agathon|Karl "Helo" Agathon]] on {{RDM|Caprica}} to his fate.
* Following jump number 237, [[Laura Roslin|President Roslin]] receives word from a Dr. [[Amarak]] aboard the ''[[Olympic Carrier]]'' concerning information on how the Cylons overcame Colonial defenses.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.36, script p.31}}</ref>
* Following jump number 237, [[Laura Roslin|President Roslin]] receives word from a Dr. [[Amarak]] aboard the ''[[Olympic Carrier]]'' concerning information on how the Cylons overcame Colonial defenses.
* Overhearing the conversation, Baltar is worried: he knew Amarak at the [[Ministry of Defense]]. As Six points out, Amarak might have information on Baltar's complicity with the Cylon attack.
* Overhearing the conversation, Baltar is worried: he knew Amarak at the [[Ministry of Defense]]. As Six points out, Amarak might have information on Baltar's complicity with the Cylon attack.
* There is insufficient time before the next jump to bring Amarak aboard ''[[Colonial One]]'', but Roslin wants to see him directly after the jump has been completed.
* There is insufficient time before the next jump to bring Amarak aboard ''[[Colonial One]]'', but Roslin wants to see him directly after the jump has been completed.
* When the next jump is made, the ''Olympic Carrier'', complete with Dr. Amarak and 1,344 other souls, fails to appear with the rest of the Fleet.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.74, script p.69}}</ref> Six tries to convince Baltar that it is because God is watching over him.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.32, script p.27}}</ref>
* When the next jump is made, the ''Olympic Carrier'', complete with Dr. Amarak and 1,344 other souls, fails to appear with the rest of the Fleet. Six tries to convince Baltar that it is because God is watching over him.
* Thirty-three minutes later, the Fleet is ready to jump, but the Cylons don't appear. Adama orders a stand-down from the immediate alert, but the Fleet is to maintain a readiness to jump, in case the Cylons do return.
* Thirty-three minutes later, the Fleet is ready to jump, but the Cylons don't appear. Adama orders a stand-down from the immediate alert, but the Fleet is to maintain a readiness to jump, in case the Cylons do return.
* When Baltar continues to refuse the concept of God, the ''Olympic Carrier'' reappears; Commander [[William Adama|Adama]] orders the Fleet to [[Action Stations|Condition One alert]], fearing the worst. He orders the jump clocks reset in anticipation of the Cylons arriving.
* When Baltar continues to refuse the concept of God, the ''Olympic Carrier'' reappears; Commander [[William Adama|Adama]] orders the Fleet to [[Action Stations|Condition One alert]], fearing the worst. He orders the jump clocks reset in anticipation of the Cylons arriving.
*The [[Combat Air Patrol]] lead by {{callsign|Lee Adama}} intercepts the [[Intersun|starliner]]. Adama orders all communications with the ''Carrier'' jammed and the ''Carrier'' is ordered (through signal lamps) to remain at its current position. When the ''Carrier'' fails to heed orders not to approach the fleet, tensions rise, and a [[Radiological Alarm|radiological alarm]] reveals there is now a nuclear weapon on the liner.
*The [[Combat Air Patrol]] lead by {{callsign|Lee Adama}} intercepts the [[Intersun|starliner]]. Adama orders all communications with the ''Carrier'' jammed and the ''Carrier'' is ordered (through signal lamps) to remain at its current position. When the ''Carrier'' fails to heed orders not to approach the fleet, tensions rise, and a [[Radiological Alarm|radiological alarm]] reveals there is now a nuclear weapon on the liner.
*As the crisis deepens, the Cylons appear precisely 33 minutes after the return of the ''Carrier'', confirming that the ''Carrier'' was used somehow by the Cylons to track the Fleet. Adama wants to destroy the liner, but Roslin hesitates to give the order, as no one can be sure if the 1,345 people aboard the ''Carrier'' are still alive. Baltar is terrified she won't give the order for fear of Amarak's information.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.49, script p.44}}</ref>
*As the crisis deepens, the Cylons appear precisely 33 minutes after the return of the ''Carrier'', confirming that the ''Carrier'' was used somehow by the Cylons to track the Fleet. Adama wants to destroy the liner, but Roslin hesitates to give the order, as no one can be sure if the 1,345 people aboard the ''Carrier'' are still alive. Baltar is terrified she won't give the order for fear of Amarak's information.
*Six uses the hesitation to push Baltar into "repenting" before God. As soon as he does, Roslin gives the order to destroy the liner.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.49, script p.44}}</ref> Apollo and {{callsign|Starbuck}} (reluctantly) open fire, destroying the liner. After the Fleet makes a jump once more, the Cylons' relentless pursuit is halted.
*Six uses the hesitation to push Baltar into "repenting" before God. As soon as he does, Roslin gives the order to destroy the liner. Apollo and {{callsign|Starbuck}} (reluctantly) open fire, destroying the liner. After the Fleet makes a jump once more, the Cylons' relentless pursuit is halted.
*A day later, everyone is living with the consequences of their actions. Only [[Billy Keikeya]] has a small nugget of good news: at some point in the proceedings, a baby was born in the Fleet aboard ''[[Rising Star (TRS)|Rising Star]]''.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.52, script p.47}}</ref>
*A day later, everyone is living with the consequences of their actions. Only [[Billy Keikeya]] has a small nugget of good news: at some point in the proceedings, a baby was born in the Fleet aboard ''[[Rising Star (TRS)|Rising Star]]''.


===On Caprica===
===On Caprica===
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=== Episode Notes ===
=== Episode Notes ===


*Continuous jumping badly affects the FTL drives and management systems aboard commercial Colonial vessels, which are not as rugged as ''Galactica'''s military-issue drives.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.44, script p.39}}</ref> Colonel Tigh notes that "damned civilian crews" often don't begin jump preparation "until five minutes before the mark," while ''Galactica'' requires "ten minutes to calculate Jump coordinates [and] another five to program the computers."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.44, script p.39}}</ref>
*Continuous jumping badly affects the FTL drives and management systems aboard commercial Colonial vessels, which are not as rugged as ''Galactica'''s military-issue drives.
*The Cylons' FTL technology is more precise than the Colonials'. 238 times they manage to pounce on the Colonial fleet, arriving with precise momentum and trajectory to be able to close the distance and launch an attack. In the Season 2 episode "[[Lay Down Your Burdens, Part I]]," it is explained that the Cylons have far better navigational computers which allow more accurate jump plots and a greater range.
*The Cylons' FTL technology is more precise than the Colonials'. 238 times they manage to pounce on the Colonial fleet, arriving with precise momentum and trajectory to be able to close the distance and launch an attack. In the Season 2 episode "[[Lay Down Your Burdens, Part I]]," it is explained that the Cylons have far better navigational computers which allow more accurate jump plots and a greater range.
*According to [[Socinus]], there are 5,251 people in the Fleet from [[Sagittaron]].
*According to [[Socinus]], there are 5,251 people in the Fleet from [[Sagittaron]].
*The head count of Colonial citizens at the end of the episode is 47,973.
*The head count of Colonial citizens at the end of the episode is 47,973.
*At first glance, there appears to be an error with Billy Keikeya's math with the [[survivor count]]. The episode starts with the count being 50,298. He informs Roslin this is in error by 300 = 49,998 survivors. When the ''Olympic Carrier'' is destroyed (1,345 people), he reduces the total to 47,972 – that's a reduction of 2026, or 681 people ''more'' than listed on the ''Carrier''. However, in [[List of Deleted Scenes - Season 1 (RDM)#33|deleted scenes]] from this episode, Keikeya is actually reducing the survivor count additional times set between the beginning of the episode and the destruction of the ''Olympic Carrier''. These other deaths just occur off-screen.
*At first glance, there appears to be an error with Billy Keikeya's math with the [[survivor count]]. The episode starts with the count being 50,298. He informs Roslin this is in error by 300 = 49,998 survivors. When the ''Olympic Carrier'' is destroyed (1,345 people), he reduces the total to 47,972 – that's a reduction of 2026, or 681 people ''more'' than listed on the ''Carrier''. However, in [[List of Deleted Scenes - Season 1 (RDM)#33|deleted scenes]] from this episode, Keikeya is actually reducing the survivor count additional times set between the beginning of the episode and the destruction of the ''Olympic Carrier''. These other deaths just occur off-screen.
*The episode shows the devastating effects of sleep deprivation on the crew. In the script, [[Cally Tyrol|Cally]] is described as "mentally burnt, strung-out, right on the edge" while questioning "Why is it always thirty-three minutes?"<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.15, script p.10}}</ref> Commander Adama cuts himself while shaving due to "sleep deprivation and fatigue causing him to lose focus."<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.44, script p.39}}</ref>
*The Fleet's deteriorating condition is evident in Adama's reports of "twelve more cases of nervous exhaustion" bringing the total to "sixty-one total. Ten suicides," leading him to order stimulant injections for crew and pilots.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.69, script p.64}}</ref>


=== [[Continuity errors (TRS)|Continuity Errors and Retcons]] ===
=== [[Continuity errors (TRS)|Continuity Errors and Retcons]] ===
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*This episode won the [[Awards and Honors|2005 Hugo Award for Best Dramatic Presentation, Short Form]].
*This episode won the [[Awards and Honors|2005 Hugo Award for Best Dramatic Presentation, Short Form]].
*[[Cally Tyrol|Cally Henderson]]'s scenes were added during the Goldenrod revision phase in May 2004, as indicated by "Cally - ADDED" notation in the cast list, showing her role was expanded after initial script completion.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.9, cast list}}</ref>
*When Season 1 premiered in the United States, "33" and "[[Water]]" aired back-to-back as a two hour TV event. This was also the case when [[Season 3 (2006-07)|Season 3]] first aired in the United States with the episodes "[[Occupation]]" and "[[Precipice]]".   
*When Season 1 premiered in the United States, "33" and "[[Water]]" aired back-to-back as a two hour TV event. This was also the case when [[Season 3 (2006-07)|Season 3]] first aired in the United States with the episodes "[[Occupation]]" and "[[Precipice]]".   
*When the first few episodes of the series began airing in the US on the [[Sci Fi Channel]], title cards were shown at the beginning of each episode, i.e. "33" or "Water" flashing in white letters on a black screen, and then the episode would begin. These episode titles stopped midway in Season 1.
*When the first few episodes of the series began airing in the US on the [[Sci Fi Channel]], title cards were shown at the beginning of each episode, i.e. "33" or "Water" flashing in white letters on a black screen, and then the episode would begin. These episode titles stopped midway in Season 1.
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*While waiting to film a Viper sequence for this episode at 11 or 12 o'clock at night, [[Katee Sackhoff]] fell asleep inside the Viper cockpit.<ref group="production" name="bassom_sackhoff_viper_sleep">{{cite book|last=Bassom|first=David|year=2005|title=[[Battlestar Galactica: The Official Companion]]|page=44|editor=ed. Adam "Adama" Newell|publisher=Titan Books|id=ISBN 1-84576-0972}}</ref>
*While waiting to film a Viper sequence for this episode at 11 or 12 o'clock at night, [[Katee Sackhoff]] fell asleep inside the Viper cockpit.<ref group="production" name="bassom_sackhoff_viper_sleep">{{cite book|last=Bassom|first=David|year=2005|title=[[Battlestar Galactica: The Official Companion]]|page=44|editor=ed. Adam "Adama" Newell|publisher=Titan Books|id=ISBN 1-84576-0972}}</ref>
*To add realism to the sleep deprivation motif, Olmos enlisted the aid of a sleep deprivation expert and also curtailed his sleeping habits to a maximum of three hours per night, noting how it affected him. With the help of this expert, he relayed to the rest of the crew how deprivation affects the human body and mind. Additionally, director [[Michael Rymer]] told the actors to choose one symptom to play, so as to avoid distracting repetition.<ref group="production" name="bassom_sleep_deprivation_expert">{{cite book|last=Bassom|first=David|year=2005|title=[[Battlestar Galactica: The Official Companion]]|page=46|editor=ed. Adam "Adama" Newell|publisher=Titan Books|id=ISBN 1-84576-0972}}</ref>
*To add realism to the sleep deprivation motif, Olmos enlisted the aid of a sleep deprivation expert and also curtailed his sleeping habits to a maximum of three hours per night, noting how it affected him. With the help of this expert, he relayed to the rest of the crew how deprivation affects the human body and mind. Additionally, director [[Michael Rymer]] told the actors to choose one symptom to play, so as to avoid distracting repetition.<ref group="production" name="bassom_sleep_deprivation_expert">{{cite book|last=Bassom|first=David|year=2005|title=[[Battlestar Galactica: The Official Companion]]|page=46|editor=ed. Adam "Adama" Newell|publisher=Titan Books|id=ISBN 1-84576-0972}}</ref>
== Script Revisions ==
The "33" script underwent extensive revisions during production, with six distinct revision cycles spanning over a month of pre-production work.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.4, revision history}}</ref>
=== April 2, 2004: White Pages (1-62) ===
Initial complete script draft encompassing the full 62-page teleplay, establishing the basic structure of the episode across four acts plus teaser.
=== April 12, 2004: Full Blue Revision (1-55) ===
Comprehensive rewrite reducing the script length by 7 pages, indicating significant structural changes. This major revision likely involved cutting entire scenes or consolidating sequences to tighten the narrative pacing.
=== April 13, 2004: Pink Revision ===
Targeted revisions to 24 specific pages affecting key narrative sequences:
* '''Pages 8, 10:''' ''[[Colonial One]]'' [[FTL]] issues and hangar deck scenes with [[Cally Tyrol|Cally]]'s sleep-deprived questioning of the 33-minute pattern
* '''Page 12:''' [[Kara Thrace]] and [[Lee Adama]]'s dialogue about jump counts reaching "two thirty-seven"
* '''Page 14:''' [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s intimate scene with [[Messenger Six|Six]] in his house, establishing the "Time's up" motif
* '''Pages 18-19:''' Combat sequences with [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] attack aftermath and jump preparations
* '''Pages 21, 21A, 21B:''' Expansion of Act One scenes (new pages 21A and 21B suggest significant additions to character interactions)
* '''Pages 23-24:''' Post-jump sequences with ''Colonial One''{{'|s}} appearance and Baltar's transition between reality and his house visions
* '''Page 26:''' Baltar's philosophical conversation with Six about belief systems
* '''Page 33:''' Jump 237 completion and fleet status reports
* '''Page 35:''' End of Teaser with Baltar and Six's intimate moment as the clock ticks
* '''Pages 38-39:''' [[William Adama|Adama]] and [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]]'s conversation about fleet jump preparations and civilian crew delays 
* '''Page 42:''' [[Memorial hallway]] sequence showing [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]]'s emotional encounter with the wall of missing persons
* '''Pages 44-45:''' [["Lest We Forget"]] photo presentation to [[Laura Roslin|President Roslin]] and Baltar's conversation with Six about having children
* '''Pages 47-50:''' Dr. [[Amarak]] introduction, Baltar's panic about potential exposure, and the setup for ''[[Olympic Carrier]]'' plot
The creation of pages 21A and 21B suggests significant expansion of early Act One material, likely enhancing character development and tension-building sequences.
=== April 16, 2004: Yellow Revision ===
Extensive changes to 31 pages with significant scene expansions:
* '''Pages 2-3:''' Opening [[Viper (RDM)|Viper]] squadron sequences and [[Lee Adama]]'s countdown dialogue in his cockpit
* '''Page 5:''' [[Combat Information Center|CIC]] scenes with [[William Adama|Adama]], [[Saul Tigh|Tigh]], [[Felix Gaeta|Gaeta]], and [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]] monitoring jump preparations
* '''Pages 7-8:''' ''[[Colonial One]]'' [[FTL]] computer issues and [[Laura Roslin]]'s attempts to maintain confidence
* '''Page 10:''' [[Cally Tyrol|Cally]]'s sleep-deprived questioning about the 33-minute pattern on the [[hangar deck]]
* '''Pages 12, 12A:''' Expanded Viper pilot dialogue with new page 12A adding [[Lee Adama]] and [[Kara Thrace]]'s conversation about jump counts reaching 237
* '''Pages 13, 15:''' [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s house sequences and transition between reality and his visions
* '''Pages 18-20:''' Extended combat aftermath and CIC activity during [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] attacks
* '''Pages 21, 21A, 21B:''' Continued expansion of Act One character development scenes
* '''Pages 48-50, 50A:''' ''[[Olympic Carrier]]'' plot development with new page 50A likely expanding the resolution sequences
* '''Pages 51-53:''' Final act sequences including the aftermath of the ''Olympic Carrier'' destruction
The addition of pages 12A and 50A indicates significant scene expansions at crucial narrative moments - the Viper pilot interactions and the episode's conclusion.
=== April 19, 2004: Green Revision ===
Focused changes to 6 pages for final dialogue polish and technical adjustments:
* '''Page 18:''' Combat sequences and Cylon attack aftermath refinements
* '''Page 23:''' Post-jump sequences with ''Colonial One''{{'|s}} appearance and fleet regrouping
* '''Pages 29-30:''' Mid-episode character development and plot progression moments
* '''Page 33:''' Jump 237 completion and critical fleet status reports
* '''Page 45:''' Dr. [[Amarak]] introduction and [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s growing panic about potential exposure
This targeted revision suggests final dialogue polish and technical adjustments to key dramatic moments, including scenes involving Cylon attacks, jump completions, and character interactions.
=== May 10, 2004: Goldenrod Revision ===
Final pre-production changes to 4 pages with last-minute scene additions:
* '''Pages 3, 3A:''' Opening episode sequences with new page 3A expanding [[Lee Adama]]'s [[Viper (RDM)|Viper]] cockpit scenes and the countdown to the jump
* '''Pages 4, 4A:''' Early teaser material with new page 4A likely expanding [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s house sequences and [[Messenger Six|Six]]'s philosophical discussions about [[God (RDM)|God]]'s plan
The addition of pages 3A and 4A represents last-minute scene additions or expansions to the opening sequences of the episode. This revision occurred just four days before the final script compilation on May 14, 2004, suggesting final refinements to the crucial opening moments that establish the episode's tone and the 33-minute cycle premise.
=== Notable Omissions and Plot Changes ===
The final script shows significant content removal that affected key character development and world-building elements:
'''Scenes 46-63 (End of Act One):''' These 18 omitted scenes originally followed the establishment of Dr. [[Amarak]]'s importance and [[Gaius Baltar|Baltar]]'s growing panic.<ref name="moore_33_script_omitted_scenes_act_one">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.50, script p.45}}</ref> Based on the surviving content, this likely included extended character interactions and setup for the memorial hallway sequence.
'''Memorial Hallway Sequence:''' The script contains detailed scenes showing [[Anastasia Dualla|Dualla]]'s visit to a communications office where she attempts to locate missing family members from [[Sagittaron]], learning that 5,251 survivors from her home colony have been accounted for.<ref name="moore_33_script_dualla_sagittaron_survivors">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.45, script p.40}}</ref> This leads to the powerful [[memorial hallway]] scene where "the sheer number of the faces...hits Dualla in the chest" as she encounters the improvised memorial wall covered with "photos, descriptions of loved ones, small drawings, tributes" where crew members are "putting up photos, touching the faces of missing loved ones, praying, or just staring at the faces."<ref name="moore_33_script_memorial_wall_description">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.47, script p.42}}</ref>
'''Pilots' Ready Room "Lest We Forget" Photo:''' The script provides extensive detail about the iconic photo that pilots touch before missions, describing it as showing "a Colonial soldier with his back to the camera, standing on a rooftop, looking out over a city. Dark clouds of smoke rise up from the city. A Colonial flag ripples in the breeze above his head."<ref name="moore_33_script_lest_we_forget_photo_description">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.46, script p.41}}</ref>
'''Scenes 87-93 (Act Two):''' Seven consecutive scenes were omitted between the patrol setup and [[Laura Roslin]]'s exhausted late-night work session.<ref name="moore_33_script_omitted_scenes_act_two">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.91, script p.86}}</ref> These likely contained additional character development showing the psychological toll of the relentless [[Cylons (RDM)|Cylon]] pursuit.
'''Scene 68 (Act Three):''' A single omitted scene at the beginning of Act Three,<ref name="moore_33_script_omitted_scene_68">{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.73, script p.68}}</ref> likely involving setup for the discovery of the ''[[Olympic Carrier]]''{{'|s}} disappearance.
'''Character Development Elements:''' The revisions particularly affected scenes showing the human cost of the crisis, including Dualla's personal search for family members, detailed casualty reports mentioning specific numbers of "nervous exhaustion" cases and suicides, and extended sequences showing crew members coping with grief and loss through the memorial wall.


== Analysis ==
== Analysis ==
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*''[[Gaius Baltar]] is having a vision of climbing into bed with [[Messenger Six]]:''
*''[[Gaius Baltar]] is having a vision of climbing into bed with [[Messenger Six]]:''
:'''Six:''' You know you're not safe.
:'''Six:''' You know you're not safe.
:'''Baltar:''' No, course not.  The Cylons will follow us again, as they have the last two hundred and thirty seven times.<ref>{{cite script|writer=Ronald D. Moore|script=33|title="33" Script|url=https://en.battlestarwiki.org/Sources:33|pages=PDF p.36, script p.31}}</ref>
:'''Baltar:''' No, course not.  The Cylons will follow us again, as they have the last two hundred and thirty seven times.
:'''Six:''' You're right, you know. There are limits. Eventually you'll make a mistake.
:'''Six:''' You're right, you know. There are limits. Eventually you'll make a mistake.
:'''Baltar:''' And then you'll kill us all. Yes. Yes, I know, but... not for another thirty-three minutes.
:'''Baltar:''' And then you'll kill us all. Yes. Yes, I know, but... not for another thirty-three minutes.

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