Talk:Tory Foster/Archive 1 - Revision history

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Minor text corrections and tense edits */ reply

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Minor text corrections and tense edits: reply

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	There were some minor text corrections in word choice that were made for simple proofreading. Also edited the tense from present tense to past tense to make it read more like a biographical entry and not something that is going on currently. Also changed names in certain instances to make it more clear who was being referred to in the description rather than just leaving it as a pronoun or last name only. I hope these changes are acceptable for an otherwise well-written article. [[User:Wjclerk\|Wjclerk]] 17:48, 3 October 2013 (EDT)		There were some minor text corrections in word choice that were made for simple proofreading. Also edited the tense from present tense to past tense to make it read more like a biographical entry and not something that is going on currently. Also changed names in certain instances to make it more clear who was being referred to in the description rather than just leaving it as a pronoun or last name only. I hope these changes are acceptable for an otherwise well-written article. [[User:Wjclerk\|Wjclerk]] 17:48, 3 October 2013 (EDT)

			: The text corrections are much appreciated! As for the tense, this article should be in present tense, per the Standards and Conventions: ([[BW:SAC#Tense\|link]]) -- [[User:Joe Beaudoin Jr.\|Joe Beaudoin]] <sup>[[User talk:Joe Beaudoin Jr.\|So say we all]] - [[Battlestar Wiki:Site support\|Donate]]</sup> 21:23, 3 October 2013 (EDT)

Wjclerk: /* Minor text corrections and tense edits */ new section

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Minor text corrections and tense edits: new section

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	:Oh, and you should sign your comments. You probably don't know how to do that. After you've finished a comment, type SPACE two hyphens SPACE four tildes. -- [[User:Noneofyourbusiness\|Noneofyourbusiness]] 18:09, 5 March 2010 (UTC)		:Oh, and you should sign your comments. You probably don't know how to do that. After you've finished a comment, type SPACE two hyphens SPACE four tildes. -- [[User:Noneofyourbusiness\|Noneofyourbusiness]] 18:09, 5 March 2010 (UTC)

			== Minor text corrections and tense edits ==

			There were some minor text corrections in word choice that were made for simple proofreading. Also edited the tense from present tense to past tense to make it read more like a biographical entry and not something that is going on currently. Also changed names in certain instances to make it more clear who was being referred to in the description rather than just leaving it as a pronoun or last name only. I hope these changes are acceptable for an otherwise well-written article. [[User:Wjclerk\|Wjclerk]] 17:48, 3 October 2013 (EDT)

Noneofyourbusiness at 18:09, 5 March 2010

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	:It's not pedantic at all. You're supposed to notice and correct these typos. You don't need to bring it up on Talk Page, though. The "Be Bold" policy is there to encourage you to correct an error yourself when you notice it, unless you're unsure if it's an error and it requires discussion, which isn't the case here. I'll fix it. -- [[User:Noneofyourbusiness\|Noneofyourbusiness]] 18:02, 5 March 2010 (UTC)		:It's not pedantic at all. You're supposed to notice and correct these typos. You don't need to bring it up on Talk Page, though. The "Be Bold" policy is there to encourage you to correct an error yourself when you notice it, unless you're unsure if it's an error and it requires discussion, which isn't the case here. I'll fix it. -- [[User:Noneofyourbusiness\|Noneofyourbusiness]] 18:02, 5 March 2010 (UTC)

			:Oh, and you should sign your comments. You probably don't know how to do that. After you've finished a comment, type SPACE two hyphens SPACE four tildes. -- [[User:Noneofyourbusiness\|Noneofyourbusiness]] 18:09, 5 March 2010 (UTC)

Noneofyourbusiness at 18:02, 5 March 2010

2010-03-05T18:02:56Z

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	The fact that they are able to travel at relativistic but still subluminal speed (slower than a tachyon) helps make it clear why the Final 5 are 2 late to prevent the 1st Cylon war.		The fact that they are able to travel at relativistic but still subluminal speed (slower than a tachyon) helps make it clear why the Final 5 are 2 late to prevent the 1st Cylon war.

			:It's not pedantic at all. You're supposed to notice and correct these typos. You don't need to bring it up on Talk Page, though. The "Be Bold" policy is there to encourage you to correct an error yourself when you notice it, unless you're unsure if it's an error and it requires discussion, which isn't the case here. I'll fix it. -- [[User:Noneofyourbusiness\|Noneofyourbusiness]] 18:02, 5 March 2010 (UTC)

Socrates17: /* Minor Correction of Terms. */ new section

2010-03-05T17:41:38Z

Minor Correction of Terms.: new section

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	Please, take note of [[Talk:Timeline_(RDM)#BCE_occurences\|this issue]]. [[User:Str1977\|Str1977]] 09:57, 31 March 2009 (UTC)		Please, take note of [[Talk:Timeline_(RDM)#BCE_occurences\|this issue]]. [[User:Str1977\|Str1977]] 09:57, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

			== Minor Correction of Terms. ==

			Biography PP2, 1st line should be "subluminal speed" not "subliminal speed". Writer may have typed "subluminal" but changed it to "subliminal" because "subluminal", while being a perfectly legitimate word in relativistic physics, isn't in the baseline spell-check dictionary. I added it to mine.

			"Subliminal speed" doesn't make any sense and I've been burned too often to trust spell-check.

			If this sounds like, and quite possibly is, almost offensively pedantic, in my defense the only reason I bring it up at all is that in Crossroads 2 the music that clues Saul, Galen, Sam, and Tory into the fact that they're Cylons (and which Saul originally thinks is Cylon sabotage in Galactica but which nobody else can hear) is in point of fact truly and legitimately "subliminal" and it's important to recognize that.

			The fact that they are able to travel at relativistic but still subluminal speed (slower than a tachyon) helps make it clear why the Final 5 are 2 late to prevent the 1st Cylon war.

Str1977 at 09:57, 31 March 2009

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			==Tory==

	I'd like to know where someone got 'Tory Foster' from. Was it in the closing credits? I aks, because I know her first name was spelled 'Tori' based on the subtitles during the episode. If anyone has a better source, then show it. --Ltcrashdown 08:27, 18 February 2006 (EST)		I'd like to know where someone got 'Tory Foster' from. Was it in the closing credits? I aks, because I know her first name was spelled 'Tori' based on the subtitles during the episode. If anyone has a better source, then show it. --Ltcrashdown 08:27, 18 February 2006 (EST)
	:Okay, i saw the note about being in the credits. I changed it back and modified the main page with 'Tory' instead of 'Tori'. --Ltcrashdown 08:30, 18 February 2006 (EST)		:Okay, i saw the note about being in the credits. I changed it back and modified the main page with 'Tory' instead of 'Tori'. --Ltcrashdown 08:30, 18 February 2006 (EST)

			==Tigh's advice==

	"The four newly discovered Cylons try to keep their nature hidden from those around them, while trying to come to terms it. When they brainstorm ideas about the still missing final Cylon, Colonel Tigh suggests that Foster sleep with Gaius Baltar to gain access to the knowledge he acquired while living among the Cylons..."		"The four newly discovered Cylons try to keep their nature hidden from those around them, while trying to come to terms it. When they brainstorm ideas about the still missing final Cylon, Colonel Tigh suggests that Foster sleep with Gaius Baltar to gain access to the knowledge he acquired while living among the Cylons..."
	He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.		He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.
	[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]		[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]

			==BCE==

			Please, take note of [[Talk:Timeline_(RDM)#BCE_occurences\|this issue]]. [[User:Str1977\|Str1977]] 09:57, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Serenity: Reverted edits by Panpon (Talk); changed back to last version by FrakkinToasterLover

2008-04-27T16:21:40Z

Reverted edits by Panpon (Talk); changed back to last version by FrakkinToasterLover

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	He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.		He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.
	[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]		[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]

	~~I HATE TORY SOO FRAKKIN' MUCH! THE TOASTERBITCH KILLED CALLY! AGH!~~

Panpon at 16:19, 27 April 2008

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	He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.		He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.
	[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]		[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]

			I HATE TORY SOO FRAKKIN' MUCH! THE TOASTERBITCH KILLED CALLY! AGH!

FrakkinToasterLover at 10:56, 15 April 2008

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	"The four newly discovered Cylons try to keep their nature hidden from those around them, while trying to come to terms it. When they brainstorm ideas about the still missing final Cylon, Colonel Tigh suggests that Foster sleep with Gaius Baltar to gain access to the knowledge he acquired while living among the Cylons..."		"The four newly discovered Cylons try to keep their nature hidden from those around them, while trying to come to terms it. When they brainstorm ideas about the still missing final Cylon, Colonel Tigh suggests that Foster sleep with Gaius Baltar to gain access to the knowledge he acquired while living among the Cylons..."
	He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I corrected it.		He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I've corrected it.
			[[User:FrakkinToasterLover\|FrakkinToasterLover]]







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FrakkinToasterLover at 10:55, 15 April 2008

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	I'd like to know where someone got 'Tory Foster' from. Was it in the closing credits? I aks, because I know her first name was spelled 'Tori' based on the subtitles during the episode. If anyone has a better source, then show it. --Ltcrashdown 08:27, 18 February 2006 (EST)		I'd like to know where someone got 'Tory Foster' from. Was it in the closing credits? I aks, because I know her first name was spelled 'Tori' based on the subtitles during the episode. If anyone has a better source, then show it. --Ltcrashdown 08:27, 18 February 2006 (EST)
	:Okay, i saw the note about being in the credits. I changed it back and modified the main page with 'Tory' instead of 'Tori'. --Ltcrashdown 08:30, 18 February 2006 (EST)		:Okay, i saw the note about being in the credits. I changed it back and modified the main page with 'Tory' instead of 'Tori'. --Ltcrashdown 08:30, 18 February 2006 (EST)

			"The four newly discovered Cylons try to keep their nature hidden from those around them, while trying to come to terms it. When they brainstorm ideas about the still missing final Cylon, Colonel Tigh suggests that Foster sleep with Gaius Baltar to gain access to the knowledge he acquired while living among the Cylons..."
			He didn't suggest that she sleeps with him, he said "You don't have to get on your back for him", he meant she should flirt with him to find out something. I corrected it.








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