List of Deleted Scenes (Caprica) - Revision history

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: Text replacement - "Toressani" to "Torresani"

2021-10-11T23:30:55Z

Text replacement - "Toressani" to "Torresani"

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	After Serge does so, Zoe-R asks Serge if they [[Zoe Graystone\|miss her]]. Serge doesn't understand the question due to the new instructions Zoe-R gave it, and Zoe-R notes that "she probably hurt a lot of people," and Serge replies that he has "no reason to disagree" with that assessment. Zoe-R dismisses Serge, and she returns to working on the laptop.		After Serge does so, Zoe-R asks Serge if they [[Zoe Graystone\|miss her]]. Serge doesn't understand the question due to the new instructions Zoe-R gave it, and Zoe-R notes that "she probably hurt a lot of people," and Serge replies that he has "no reason to disagree" with that assessment. Zoe-R dismisses Serge, and she returns to working on the laptop.

	: ''Note: In the initial scene, [[:File:Caprica - Gravedancing - Deleted Scene - Zoe-R Stage Indicator.png\|a clear tube with multiple green LEDs (and one blue LED for the eye-line)]], is shown with the chyron "VFX - ADD ZOE-ROBOT." As the camera transitions beyond the worktable, [[Alessandra ~~Toressani~~]] appears as [[Zoe-R]]'s humanoid form as she speaks to [[Serge]], who is represented by a chroma-green stick with a singular blue LED eye-line indicator. After Serge is dismissed towards the end of the scene, a transition occurs using the worktable as a blocking mechanism to facilitate a switch-over to the Zoe-R as [[U-87]] reference point. As the transition occurs, the clear tube with LED indicators can be seen shaking from its placement on camera by a hidden stagehand.''		: ''Note: In the initial scene, [[:File:Caprica - Gravedancing - Deleted Scene - Zoe-R Stage Indicator.png\|a clear tube with multiple green LEDs (and one blue LED for the eye-line)]], is shown with the chyron "VFX - ADD ZOE-ROBOT." As the camera transitions beyond the worktable, [[Alessandra Torresani]] appears as [[Zoe-R]]'s humanoid form as she speaks to [[Serge]], who is represented by a chroma-green stick with a singular blue LED eye-line indicator. After Serge is dismissed towards the end of the scene, a transition occurs using the worktable as a blocking mechanism to facilitate a switch-over to the Zoe-R as [[U-87]] reference point. As the transition occurs, the clear tube with LED indicators can be seen shaking from its placement on camera by a hidden stagehand.''

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Gravedancing */ + Zoe-R & Serge

2020-09-14T00:07:03Z

Gravedancing: + Zoe-R & Serge

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 == Gravedancing ==
 [[File:Caprica - Gravedancing - Deleted Scene - Baxter Sarno and Picon Monologue.png|thumb|[[Baxter Sarno]]'s monologue discussing {{RDM|Picon}}'s demand of an apology from {{RDM|Caprica}}, prior to [[Daniel Graystone]]'s interview post-[[Maglev 23]] {{CAP|Gravedancing|del1=y}}.]]
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 He leads into his second and last joke about security being called to his studio for "bombing," but lacking the clarity in that he was the one "bombing" in his jokes. The audience boos in relation to the tone-deaf nature of the joke, while backstage [[Cyrus Xander]] notes that Graystone is about to be introduced on stage. Graystone knows and asks for a moment of composure, while [[Priyah Magnus]] sits by his side in the makeup room.
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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: + Gravedancing and Sarno

2020-09-13T23:43:50Z

+ Gravedancing and Sarno

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	: ''Note: This is [[Ruth]]'s only appearance in the episode, and so she is not credited in the episodes titles.''		: ''Note: This is [[Ruth]]'s only appearance in the episode, and so she is not credited in the episodes titles.''

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			== Gravedancing ==

			[[File:Caprica - Gravedancing - Deleted Scene - Baxter Sarno and Picon Monologue.png\|thumb\|[[Baxter Sarno]]'s monologue discussing {{RDM\|Picon}}'s demand of an apology from {{RDM\|Caprica}}, prior to [[Daniel Graystone]]'s interview post-[[Maglev 23]] {{CAP\|Gravedancing\|del1=y}}.]]

			An extended version of [[Baxter Sarno]]'s monologue before [[Daniel Graystone]] appears on stage in his first interview post-[[Maglev 23]] bombing. In the monologue, Sarno notes that {{RDM\|Picon}} demands {{RDM\|Caprica}} apologize for "raising the ambient level of terror in the colonies," to which he punctuates with the punchline that Caprica would agree to do so on the condition that Picon "apologize for being a prick." He adds that he mocks Picon because they are "barely a planet."

			He leads into his second and last joke about security being called to his studio for "bombing," but lacking the clarity in that he was the one "bombing" in his jokes. The audience boos in relation to the tone-deaf nature of the joke, while backstage [[Cyrus Xander]] notes that Graystone is about to be introduced on stage. Graystone knows and asks for a moment of composure, while [[Priyah Magnus]] sits by his side in the makeup room.

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: + Ruth and Joseph on Justice

2020-09-13T22:55:01Z

+ Ruth and Joseph on Justice

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	: ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED denoting Serge's "eye line." As the scene was cut, CGI work was not composited for this scene, even in pre-visualization form. Additionally, the chroma-stick was radio control (RC) operated, likely added upon a modified RC-car chassis, which can be heard in this scene as "Serge" leaves the camera shot.''		: ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED denoting Serge's "eye line." As the scene was cut, CGI work was not composited for this scene, even in pre-visualization form. Additionally, the chroma-stick was radio control (RC) operated, likely added upon a modified RC-car chassis, which can be heard in this scene as "Serge" leaves the camera shot.''

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			=== Ruth Presses Joseph to Further Embrace his Tauron Heritage ===

			[[File:Caprica - Reins of a Waterfall - Deleted Scene - Ruth and Joseph Adama.png\|thumb\|[[Ruth]] asks [[Joseph Adama]] if he's [[Tauron]] or {{RDM\|Caprica}}n {{CAP\|Reins of a Waterfall\|del1=y}}.]]

			[[Ruth]] {{inlineref\|meatprep\|cuts up meat\|bold=N}} in the kitchen while [[Joseph Adama]] drinks from a cup. The topic for discussion is justice for [[Shannon Adama]] and [[Tamara Adama]]. Joseph assures Ruth that justice shall be done as it should be, which Ruth replies that "those fancy court rooms just get in the way" of justice.

			Joseph replies that there has to be order, and Ruth scoffs that "Order's nice, if it's on your side." She presses on, saying that he needs to start thinking about "who you are," and asks if he is a [[Tauron]], invoking the Tauron pronunciation of his name in the inquiry. After asking the question again, Joseph ponders the answer and the scene ends.

			: ''Note: This is [[Ruth]]'s only appearance in the episode, and so she is not credited in the episodes titles.''

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Zoe-R Asks Serge for Help in Building a Holoband Interface */ LED light is a bit redundant...

2020-09-13T22:36:01Z

Zoe-R Asks Serge for Help in Building a Holoband Interface: LED light is a bit redundant...

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	=== Zoe-R Asks Serge for Help in Building a Holoband Interface ===		=== Zoe-R Asks Serge for Help in Building a Holoband Interface ===

	[[File:Caprica - Reins of a Waterfall - Deleted Scene - Zoe-R and Serge.png\|thumb\|[[Zoe-R]] asks [[Serge]] for help {{CAP\|Reins of a Waterfall\|del1=y}}. ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED ~~light~~ denoting Serge's "eye line."'']]		[[File:Caprica - Reins of a Waterfall - Deleted Scene - Zoe-R and Serge.png\|thumb\|[[Zoe-R]] asks [[Serge]] for help {{CAP\|Reins of a Waterfall\|del1=y}}. ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED denoting Serge's "eye line."'']]

	Unable to wear a standard [[holoband]] in her [[U-87\|robotic form]], [[Zoe-R]] asks [[Serge]] for help. In the discussion that follows in [[Daniel Graystone]]'s home workshop, Zoe gives Serge a shopping list of her needs, including a [[wireless mobile pack]] from her old room, a set of tools, and privacy.		Unable to wear a standard [[holoband]] in her [[U-87\|robotic form]], [[Zoe-R]] asks [[Serge]] for help. In the discussion that follows in [[Daniel Graystone]]'s home workshop, Zoe gives Serge a shopping list of her needs, including a [[wireless mobile pack]] from her old room, a set of tools, and privacy.
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	Serge asks if he should lock the residence in "maximum security mode," but Zoe-R specifically asks to be notified when anyone comes down stairs. He replies using her name, which pleases her; Serge replies that it's nice to "have her home."		Serge asks if he should lock the residence in "maximum security mode," but Zoe-R specifically asks to be notified when anyone comes down stairs. He replies using her name, which pleases her; Serge replies that it's nice to "have her home."

	: ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED ~~light~~ denoting Serge's "eye line." As the scene was cut, CGI work was not composited for this scene, even in pre-visualization form. Additionally, the chroma-stick was radio control (RC) operated, likely added upon a modified RC-car chassis, which can be heard in this scene as "Serge" leaves the camera shot.''		: ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED denoting Serge's "eye line." As the scene was cut, CGI work was not composited for this scene, even in pre-visualization form. Additionally, the chroma-stick was radio control (RC) operated, likely added upon a modified RC-car chassis, which can be heard in this scene as "Serge" leaves the camera shot.''

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: + Zoe-R and Serge

2020-09-13T22:09:51Z

+ Zoe-R and Serge

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	Lowe reports that not only have demands for refunds from [[Caprica Buccaneers]] ticket holders spiked, but also that players from the team wish to be traded out. Bahara himself suggests that [[Daniel Graystone]] step away from the team until the matter is cleared up for the good of the team and {{RDM\|pyramid\|the sport}} in general.		Lowe reports that not only have demands for refunds from [[Caprica Buccaneers]] ticket holders spiked, but also that players from the team wish to be traded out. Bahara himself suggests that [[Daniel Graystone]] step away from the team until the matter is cleared up for the good of the team and {{RDM\|pyramid\|the sport}} in general.

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			=== Zoe-R Asks Serge for Help in Building a Holoband Interface ===

			[[File:Caprica - Reins of a Waterfall - Deleted Scene - Zoe-R and Serge.png\|thumb\|[[Zoe-R]] asks [[Serge]] for help {{CAP\|Reins of a Waterfall\|del1=y}}. ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED light denoting Serge's "eye line."'']]

			Unable to wear a standard [[holoband]] in her [[U-87\|robotic form]], [[Zoe-R]] asks [[Serge]] for help. In the discussion that follows in [[Daniel Graystone]]'s home workshop, Zoe gives Serge a shopping list of her needs, including a [[wireless mobile pack]] from her old room, a set of tools, and privacy.

			Serge asks if he should lock the residence in "maximum security mode," but Zoe-R specifically asks to be notified when anyone comes down stairs. He replies using her name, which pleases her; Serge replies that it's nice to "have her home."

			: ''Note: [[Alessandra Torresani]] is speaking to a chroma-stick stand-in for Serge, featuring a blue-colored LED light denoting Serge's "eye line." As the scene was cut, CGI work was not composited for this scene, even in pre-visualization form. Additionally, the chroma-stick was radio control (RC) operated, likely added upon a modified RC-car chassis, which can be heard in this scene as "Serge" leaves the camera shot.''

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: + Reins of a Waterfall & Pyramid Tonight

2020-09-13T21:41:19Z

+ Reins of a Waterfall & Pyramid Tonight

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	Willow continues on, being called out by [[Ben-A\|an avatar]] of [[Ben Stark]] deeper in the throng. Willow tells him that she prayed that he would be found in the [[V-World]]. He replies that "their prayers have been answered" and they embrace. Unseen by Willow, {{inlineref\|Ben-A\|bold=N}} menacingly stares on beyond her should during the embrace.		Willow continues on, being called out by [[Ben-A\|an avatar]] of [[Ben Stark]] deeper in the throng. Willow tells him that she prayed that he would be found in the [[V-World]]. He replies that "their prayers have been answered" and they embrace. Unseen by Willow, {{inlineref\|Ben-A\|bold=N}} menacingly stares on beyond her should during the embrace.

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			== Reins of a Waterfall ==

			=== "Pyramid Tonight" Segment on Maglev 23 Revelations ===

			[[File:Caprica - Reins of a Waterfall - Deleted Scene - Pyramid Tonight Reaction.png\|thumb\|[[Abasi Lowe]] and [[Steve Bahara]] discuss the affect the [[Maglev 23]] bombing revelations have had on the [[Caprica Buccaneers]] {{CAP\|Reins of a Waterfall\|del1=y}}.]]

			"[[Pyramid Tonight]]"'s commentators [[Abasi Lowe]] and [[Steve Bahara]] discuss the ramifications of [[Amanda Graystone]]'s bombshell confession regarding [[Zoe Graystone\|her daughter]]'s role in the [[Maglev 23]] bombing {{CAP\|Rebirth}}.

			Lowe reports that not only have demands for refunds from [[Caprica Buccaneers]] ticket holders spiked, but also that players from the team wish to be traded out. Bahara himself suggests that [[Daniel Graystone]] step away from the team until the matter is cleared up for the good of the team and {{RDM\|pyramid\|the sport}} in general.

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Scene 137: Clarice Willow Discovers an Avatar of Ben Stark */ tweak

2020-09-13T20:25:23Z

Scene 137: Clarice Willow Discovers an Avatar of Ben Stark: tweak

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	In the throng of [[V-Club]] revelers, [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] bid each other farewell after Lacy notices her phone is ringing in the real world.		In the throng of [[V-Club]] revelers, [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] bid each other farewell after Lacy notices her phone is ringing in the real world.

	Willow continues on, being called out by [[Ben-A\|an avatar]] of [[Ben Stark]] deeper in the throng. Willow tells him that she prayed that he would be found in the [[V-World]]. He replies that "their prayers have been answered" and they embrace. Unseen by Willow, Ben-A menacingly stares on beyond her should during the embrace.		Willow continues on, being called out by [[Ben-A\|an avatar]] of [[Ben Stark]] deeper in the throng. Willow tells him that she prayed that he would be found in the [[V-World]]. He replies that "their prayers have been answered" and they embrace. Unseen by Willow, {{inlineref\|Ben-A\|bold=N}} menacingly stares on beyond her should during the embrace.

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: + 137

2020-09-13T20:20:38Z

+ 137

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	In the [[V-Club]], [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] make their way to [[Zoe-A]]'s sanctum, only to find her absent. Willow desires to see more of this place, to which Rand replies that "there's some rough stuff" in the virtual simulation. {{inlineref\|slums\|bold=N\|Willow retorts}} that she grew up on the slums of [[Sagittaron]]: "believe me, there's nothing in the [[Twelve Colonies of Kobol\|Twelve Worlds]] that can shock me."		In the [[V-Club]], [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] make their way to [[Zoe-A]]'s sanctum, only to find her absent. Willow desires to see more of this place, to which Rand replies that "there's some rough stuff" in the virtual simulation. {{inlineref\|slums\|bold=N\|Willow retorts}} that she grew up on the slums of [[Sagittaron]]: "believe me, there's nothing in the [[Twelve Colonies of Kobol\|Twelve Worlds]] that can shock me."

			: ''Note: This is the only time a Sagittaron connection in her past is noted. In the [[Caprica (series)\|series proper]], all other information about her youth is based around [[Gemenon]], suggesting that this scene was discarded due to both this backstory revision and the abandonment of the [[Ben-A]] subplot.

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			=== Scene 137: Clarice Willow Discovers an Avatar of Ben Stark ===

			[[File:Caprica Pilot - Deleted Scene - 137.png\|thumb\|[[Ben-A]] stares outward during his embrace with [[Clarice Willow]] {{CAP\|Pilot (Caprica)\|del1=y}}.]]

			In the throng of [[V-Club]] revelers, [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] bid each other farewell after Lacy notices her phone is ringing in the real world.

			Willow continues on, being called out by [[Ben-A\|an avatar]] of [[Ben Stark]] deeper in the throng. Willow tells him that she prayed that he would be found in the [[V-World]]. He replies that "their prayers have been answered" and they embrace. Unseen by Willow, Ben-A menacingly stares on beyond her should during the embrace.

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Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Scene 124-135: Lacy Rand leads Sister Clarice Willow to Zoe-A's Sanctum */ + inlineref

2020-09-13T19:59:23Z

Scene 124-135: Lacy Rand leads Sister Clarice Willow to Zoe-A's Sanctum: + inlineref

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	[[File:Caprica Pilot - Deleted Scene - 124-135.png\|thumb\|[[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]]'s entry into [[Zoe-A]]'s [[V-Club]] sanctum {{CAP\|Pilot (Caprica)\|del1=y}}.]]		[[File:Caprica Pilot - Deleted Scene - 124-135.png\|thumb\|[[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]]'s entry into [[Zoe-A]]'s [[V-Club]] sanctum {{CAP\|Pilot (Caprica)\|del1=y}}.]]

	In the [[V-Club]], [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] make their way to [[Zoe-A]]'s sanctum, only to find her absent. Willow desires to see more of this place, to which Rand replies that "there's some rough stuff" in the virtual simulation. Willow retorts that she grew up on the slums of [[Sagittaron]]: "believe me, there's nothing in the [[Twelve Colonies of Kobol\|Twelve Worlds]] that can shock me."		In the [[V-Club]], [[Lacy Rand]] and [[Clarice Willow]] make their way to [[Zoe-A]]'s sanctum, only to find her absent. Willow desires to see more of this place, to which Rand replies that "there's some rough stuff" in the virtual simulation. {{inlineref\|slums\|bold=N\|Willow retorts}} that she grew up on the slums of [[Sagittaron]]: "believe me, there's nothing in the [[Twelve Colonies of Kobol\|Twelve Worlds]] that can shock me."

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