Battlestar Galactica: Ghosts 1 - Revision history

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: Text replacement - "Image:" to "File:"

2024-01-22T02:26:03Z

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	== Notes ==		== Notes ==

	[[~~Image~~:Ghosts 1 - Mulong loves Rayann.jpg\|thumb\|A "hidden" message written in the starfield on page 30 of the issue.]]		[[File:Ghosts 1 - Mulong loves Rayann.jpg\|thumb\|A "hidden" message written in the starfield on page 30 of the issue.]]

	* As writer [[Brandon Jerwa]] noted, the Ghosts were intended to be stationed aboard ''[[Pegasus (RDM)\|Pegasus]]'', as was noted in his original pitch. This piece is later picked up in the marketing for the book, but is erroneous, as this was changed during scripting.<ref>{{cite_web\|url=http://www.newsarama.com/comics/080715-BSGGhosts.html\|title=Jerwa: The Ghosts of Battlestar Galactica\|date=2008-07-15\|accessdate=2008-10-12\|last=Brady\|first=Matt\|format=\|language=}}</ref>		* As writer [[Brandon Jerwa]] noted, the Ghosts were intended to be stationed aboard ''[[Pegasus (RDM)\|Pegasus]]'', as was noted in his original pitch. This piece is later picked up in the marketing for the book, but is erroneous, as this was changed during scripting.<ref>{{cite_web\|url=http://www.newsarama.com/comics/080715-BSGGhosts.html\|title=Jerwa: The Ghosts of Battlestar Galactica\|date=2008-07-15\|accessdate=2008-10-12\|last=Brady\|first=Matt\|format=\|language=}}</ref>

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: Text replacement - "Colonial Fleet (RDM)" to "Colonial Fleet (TRS)"

2023-03-13T00:52:57Z

Text replacement - "Colonial Fleet (RDM)" to "Colonial Fleet (TRS)"

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	* Despite orders to land, ''Sword'' executes a [[jump]], landing them square in the Ghosts's sights. Landry and Castall order ''Sword'' to stand down, while Dyson tries to stall.		* Despite orders to land, ''Sword'' executes a [[jump]], landing them square in the Ghosts's sights. Landry and Castall order ''Sword'' to stand down, while Dyson tries to stall.
	* In ''Therion''{{'\|s}} [[CIC]], Regus furnishes pictures of the ship and the stolen medical supply truck to Burkett. Having positively identified the ship, Burkett relays this new information to the Ghosts; Captain Chen orders ''Sword''{{'\|s}} crew to surrender or they'll be blown out of the sky.		* In ''Therion''{{'\|s}} [[CIC]], Regus furnishes pictures of the ship and the stolen medical supply truck to Burkett. Having positively identified the ship, Burkett relays this new information to the Ghosts; Captain Chen orders ''Sword''{{'\|s}} crew to surrender or they'll be blown out of the sky.
	* Behind Chen, ''Orion'' jumps in, disorienting Chen. As Chen attempts to recover, Burkett relays orders for their return to ''Therion'', notifying them that the Colonies are being attacked and that Admiral [[Nagala]] has taken charge of the [[Colonial Fleet (~~RDM~~)\|Colonial Fleet]], ordering all ships to regroup and assist in the fight. As the Ghosts head back to ''Therion'', three Cylon [[basestar (RDM)\|basestar]]s jump in around them.		* Behind Chen, ''Orion'' jumps in, disorienting Chen. As Chen attempts to recover, Burkett relays orders for their return to ''Therion'', notifying them that the Colonies are being attacked and that Admiral [[Nagala]] has taken charge of the [[Colonial Fleet (TRS)\|Colonial Fleet]], ordering all ships to regroup and assist in the fight. As the Ghosts head back to ''Therion'', three Cylon [[basestar (RDM)\|basestar]]s jump in around them.
	* Counting their blessings, ''Sword''{{'\|s}} crew land on ''Orion'', where they are met by Manning. After a hug, Manning tells Tyson that one of the passengers is demanding to speak to him. Tyson moves to do so, having ordered Dyson and Brukka to stow their stolen goods in hiding places below decks, and to jettison the truck once they are in empty space.		* Counting their blessings, ''Sword''{{'\|s}} crew land on ''Orion'', where they are met by Manning. After a hug, Manning tells Tyson that one of the passengers is demanding to speak to him. Tyson moves to do so, having ordered Dyson and Brukka to stow their stolen goods in hiding places below decks, and to jettison the truck once they are in empty space.
	* Tyson introduces himself to the passengers, meeting [[Ian Rao]] and his wife, [[Kiplinn]], and [[Peter Gilmour]], as well as two men who have not identified themselves. The stubble-faced man asks Tyler on his alleged involvement with a theft of medical supplies as part of the Children of Erebus terrorist group. Tyler assures these passengers that no such thing happened, and that there are no members of that terrorist group aboard. In response, the stubble-faced man notes that they are wrong about that, as both he and his brother reveal their handguns, with Tyler facing the wrong end of the terrorist's gun.		* Tyson introduces himself to the passengers, meeting [[Ian Rao]] and his wife, [[Kiplinn]], and [[Peter Gilmour]], as well as two men who have not identified themselves. The stubble-faced man asks Tyler on his alleged involvement with a theft of medical supplies as part of the Children of Erebus terrorist group. Tyler assures these passengers that no such thing happened, and that there are no members of that terrorist group aboard. In response, the stubble-faced man notes that they are wrong about that, as both he and his brother reveal their handguns, with Tyler facing the wrong end of the terrorist's gun.

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: Text replacement - "Caprica" to "{{RDM|Caprica}}"

2020-09-19T21:49:24Z

Text replacement - "Caprica" to "{{RDM|Caprica}}"

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	* On Aquaria, Tyler and Helen talk about Arco, noting that his condition has been deteriorating over the past few weeks. He thanks her for everything she does, and meets up with Dyson, who is reading news about the Children of Erebus and their apparent presence in [[Aquaria City]]. They then prepare to execute their heist, taking a medical supply truck's valuable supplies. During the heist, Dyson claims that they are the Children of Erebus taking supplies for the revolution, and they speed away as the original drivers and laborers working on unloading the truck call the authorities.		* On Aquaria, Tyler and Helen talk about Arco, noting that his condition has been deteriorating over the past few weeks. He thanks her for everything she does, and meets up with Dyson, who is reading news about the Children of Erebus and their apparent presence in [[Aquaria City]]. They then prepare to execute their heist, taking a medical supply truck's valuable supplies. During the heist, Dyson claims that they are the Children of Erebus taking supplies for the revolution, and they speed away as the original drivers and laborers working on unloading the truck call the authorities.
	* As they head toward the spaceport with their heist, Tyson rebukes Dyson for his use of the Children of Erebus in the heist, but Dyson brushes this off, saying that they'll get away with it.		* As they head toward the spaceport with their heist, Tyson rebukes Dyson for his use of the Children of Erebus in the heist, but Dyson brushes this off, saying that they'll get away with it.
	* Upon getting to the spaceport, where ''[[Sword]]'' is birthed, [[Brukka]] informs them that they picked up five passengers who are headed towards ~~[[Caprica (~~RDM)\|Caprica]], and have already ferried them to ''Orion''.		* Upon getting to the spaceport, where ''[[Sword]]'' is birthed, [[Brukka]] informs them that they picked up five passengers who are headed towards {{RDM\|Caprica}}, and have already ferried them to ''Orion''.

	* In orbit, ''Therion'' receives a call from [[Aquarion Ground Control]], wishing to speak to Commander Burkett directly. Burkett is notified of the recent heist and orders Chen and the Ghosts to launch. The marines board their [[Raptor Ultra\|Raptor drop ship]] and launch.		* In orbit, ''Therion'' receives a call from [[Aquarion Ground Control]], wishing to speak to Commander Burkett directly. Burkett is notified of the recent heist and orders Chen and the Ghosts to launch. The marines board their [[Raptor Ultra\|Raptor drop ship]] and launch.

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: Text replacement - "\[\[([A-Za-z0-9_, ])\ $\T\O\S$\|([A-Za-z0-9_, ])\]\]" to "{{TOS|$1|$2}}"

2020-09-12T22:59:37Z

Text replacement - "\[\[([A-Za-z0-9_, ]*)\ $\T\O\S$\|([A-Za-z0-9_, ]*)\]\]" to "{{TOS|$1|$2}}"

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	== Analysis ==		== Analysis ==

	* The story of yet another battlestar surviving the [[Fall of the Twelve Colonies]] is a common (and over-used) story idea by most fan fiction writers who write tales based in both the [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)\|re-imagined]] and [[Battlestar Galactica ~~(TOS)~~\|original]] series universes. As is the case, there are a certain segment of fans who feel that this is an overrated story idea, if not clichéd.		* The story of yet another battlestar surviving the [[Fall of the Twelve Colonies]] is a common (and over-used) story idea by most fan fiction writers who write tales based in both the [[Battlestar Galactica (RDM)\|re-imagined]] and {{TOS\|Battlestar Galactica\|original}} series universes. As is the case, there are a certain segment of fans who feel that this is an overrated story idea, if not clichéd.

	== Questions ==		== Questions ==

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: Text replacement - "'s" to "{{'|s}}"

2020-09-07T23:45:02Z

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	* On planet, Aquarion Ground Control notes that they've received intel on the presence of the Children of Erebus, and have scrubbed the test run. Civil Defense has begun grounding all air traffic and the Ghosts are ordered to intercept any ship attempting to escape.		* On planet, Aquarion Ground Control notes that they've received intel on the presence of the Children of Erebus, and have scrubbed the test run. Civil Defense has begun grounding all air traffic and the Ghosts are ordered to intercept any ship attempting to escape.
	* Despite orders to land, ''Sword'' executes a [[jump]], landing them square in the Ghosts's sights. Landry and Castall order ''Sword'' to stand down, while Dyson tries to stall.		* Despite orders to land, ''Sword'' executes a [[jump]], landing them square in the Ghosts's sights. Landry and Castall order ''Sword'' to stand down, while Dyson tries to stall.
	* In ''Therion''~~<nowiki>~~'s~~</nowiki>~~ [[CIC]], Regus furnishes pictures of the ship and the stolen medical supply truck to Burkett. Having positively identified the ship, Burkett relays this new information to the Ghosts; Captain Chen orders ''Sword''~~<nowiki>~~'s~~</nowiki>~~ crew to surrender or they'll be blown out of the sky.		* In ''Therion''{{'\|s}} [[CIC]], Regus furnishes pictures of the ship and the stolen medical supply truck to Burkett. Having positively identified the ship, Burkett relays this new information to the Ghosts; Captain Chen orders ''Sword''{{'\|s}} crew to surrender or they'll be blown out of the sky.
	* Behind Chen, ''Orion'' jumps in, disorienting Chen. As Chen attempts to recover, Burkett relays orders for their return to ''Therion'', notifying them that the Colonies are being attacked and that Admiral [[Nagala]] has taken charge of the [[Colonial Fleet (RDM)\|Colonial Fleet]], ordering all ships to regroup and assist in the fight. As the Ghosts head back to ''Therion'', three Cylon [[basestar (RDM)\|basestar]]s jump in around them.		* Behind Chen, ''Orion'' jumps in, disorienting Chen. As Chen attempts to recover, Burkett relays orders for their return to ''Therion'', notifying them that the Colonies are being attacked and that Admiral [[Nagala]] has taken charge of the [[Colonial Fleet (RDM)\|Colonial Fleet]], ordering all ships to regroup and assist in the fight. As the Ghosts head back to ''Therion'', three Cylon [[basestar (RDM)\|basestar]]s jump in around them.
	* Counting their blessings, ''Sword''~~<nowiki>~~'s~~</nowiki>~~ crew land on ''Orion'', where they are met by Manning. After a hug, Manning tells Tyson that one of the passengers is demanding to speak to him. Tyson moves to do so, having ordered Dyson and Brukka to stow their stolen goods in hiding places below decks, and to jettison the truck once they are in empty space.		* Counting their blessings, ''Sword''{{'\|s}} crew land on ''Orion'', where they are met by Manning. After a hug, Manning tells Tyson that one of the passengers is demanding to speak to him. Tyson moves to do so, having ordered Dyson and Brukka to stow their stolen goods in hiding places below decks, and to jettison the truck once they are in empty space.
	* Tyson introduces himself to the passengers, meeting [[Ian Rao]] and his wife, [[Kiplinn]], and [[Peter Gilmour]], as well as two men who have not identified themselves. The stubble-faced man asks Tyler on his alleged involvement with a theft of medical supplies as part of the Children of Erebus terrorist group. Tyler assures these passengers that no such thing happened, and that there are no members of that terrorist group aboard. In response, the stubble-faced man notes that they are wrong about that, as both he and his brother reveal their handguns, with Tyler facing the wrong end of the terrorist's gun.		* Tyson introduces himself to the passengers, meeting [[Ian Rao]] and his wife, [[Kiplinn]], and [[Peter Gilmour]], as well as two men who have not identified themselves. The stubble-faced man asks Tyler on his alleged involvement with a theft of medical supplies as part of the Children of Erebus terrorist group. Tyler assures these passengers that no such thing happened, and that there are no members of that terrorist group aboard. In response, the stubble-faced man notes that they are wrong about that, as both he and his brother reveal their handguns, with Tyler facing the wrong end of the terrorist's gun.

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2020-04-18T18:35:26Z

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	== References ==		== References ==

	~~<div style="font-size:85%"><references/></div>~~		{{reflist}}

	== External links ==		== External links ==

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: tweaking

2008-11-05T04:20:35Z

tweaking

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	* After Captain [[Alexander Chen]] of [[Ghost Squadron]] requests and receives landing clearance, his squadron lands on the [[Mercury class battlestar]] ''[[Therion]]''. Upon landing, they receive word that shore leave on [[Picon]] has been canceled and they are heading towards Aquaria.		* After Captain [[Alexander Chen]] of [[Ghost Squadron]] requests and receives landing clearance, his squadron lands on the [[Mercury class battlestar]] ''[[Therion]]''. Upon landing, they receive word that shore leave on [[Picon]] has been canceled and they are heading towards Aquaria.
	* Lieutenants [[Jorianne Landry]] and [[Myer Castall]], who are both married, note that their sons will have to spend time with Castall's father for a while longer, which Landry notes that they'll love. After this, [[~~Dosil~~ Pennit]] is told to move his ass, to which Pennit—a [[Number Two]] copy—replies that greatness cannot be rushed.		* Lieutenants [[Jorianne Landry]] and [[Myer Castall]], who are both married, note that their sons will have to spend time with Castall's father for a while longer, which Landry notes that they'll love. After this, [[Dozil Pennit]] is told to move his ass, to which Pennit—a [[Number Two]] copy—replies that greatness cannot be rushed.
	* Ghost Squadron is summarily ordered to a briefing, where Commander [[Burkett]] introduces Colonel [[Regus]], and congratulates Chen and the Ghosts on their work against [[Gemenon\|Gemenese]] pilots, noting the fact that the pirates's leader is "seeking medical attention for the size-twelve boot" Chen placed his hindquarters.		* Ghost Squadron is summarily ordered to a briefing, where Commander [[Burkett]] introduces Colonel [[Regus]], and congratulates Chen and the Ghosts on their work against [[Gemenon\|Gemenese]] pilots, noting the fact that the pirates's leader is "seeking medical attention for the size-twelve boot" Chen placed his hindquarters.
	* After the praise, Burkett briefs them on [[Medusa]], the crown jewel of the Colonial Military's new nuclear initiative and the fact that the highly dangerous [[Children of Erebus]] terrorist group are after it. The Ghosts are to provide security for the test launch of the weapon, which may very well have live nuclear warheads, hence the decision to head straight to Aquaria.		* After the praise, Burkett briefs them on [[Medusa]], the crown jewel of the Colonial Military's new nuclear initiative and the fact that the highly dangerous [[Children of Erebus]] terrorist group are after it. The Ghosts are to provide security for the test launch of the weapon, which may very well have live nuclear warheads, hence the decision to head straight to Aquaria.
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	== Questions ==		== Questions ==

	* Do [[Teresa Manning]] and [[~~Dosil~~ Pennit]] know of their Cylon nature?		* Do [[Teresa Manning]] and [[Dozil Pennit]] know of their Cylon nature?
	* What do the [[Children of Erebus]] want with ''Orion'' and her crew?		* What do the [[Children of Erebus]] want with ''Orion'' and her crew?
	* Given the status of [[D'Anna Biers]] as a well-known tabloid journalist, wouldn't [[Arvin Tyler]] or another member of the crew have noted the similarities between Biers and Manning?		* Given the status of [[D'Anna Biers]] as a well-known tabloid journalist, wouldn't [[Arvin Tyler]] or another member of the crew have noted the similarities between Biers and Manning?

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Notes */ + love message in starfield

2008-11-04T21:43:46Z

Notes: + love message in starfield

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	== Notes ==		== Notes ==

			[[Image:Ghosts 1 - Mulong loves Rayann.jpg\|thumb\|A "hidden" message written in the starfield on page 30 of the issue.]]

	* As writer [[Brandon Jerwa]] noted, the Ghosts were intended to be stationed aboard ''[[Pegasus (RDM)\|Pegasus]]'', as was noted in his original pitch. This piece is later picked up in the marketing for the book, but is erroneous, as this was changed during scripting.<ref>{{cite_web\|url=http://www.newsarama.com/comics/080715-BSGGhosts.html\|title=Jerwa: The Ghosts of Battlestar Galactica\|date=2008-07-15\|accessdate=2008-10-12\|last=Brady\|first=Matt\|format=\|language=}}</ref>		* As writer [[Brandon Jerwa]] noted, the Ghosts were intended to be stationed aboard ''[[Pegasus (RDM)\|Pegasus]]'', as was noted in his original pitch. This piece is later picked up in the marketing for the book, but is erroneous, as this was changed during scripting.<ref>{{cite_web\|url=http://www.newsarama.com/comics/080715-BSGGhosts.html\|title=Jerwa: The Ghosts of Battlestar Galactica\|date=2008-07-15\|accessdate=2008-10-12\|last=Brady\|first=Matt\|format=\|language=}}</ref>
			* On page 30 of this issue, a message written in the starfield near the bottom of the page reads "Mulong (hearts) Rayann".

	== Analysis ==		== Analysis ==

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Day Zero */ no dash...

2008-11-04T03:49:21Z

Day Zero: no dash...

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	* After fetching Arco water, Arco refuses to swallow water and he calls out for the nurse, [[Helen (comic)\|Helen]], who gives Arco an injection that'll help him rest. Tyler turns away, as Arco mumbles about his boy being there, and his wife coming soon thereafter.		* After fetching Arco water, Arco refuses to swallow water and he calls out for the nurse, [[Helen (comic)\|Helen]], who gives Arco an injection that'll help him rest. Tyler turns away, as Arco mumbles about his boy being there, and his wife coming soon thereafter.

	* After Captain [[Alexander Chen]] of [[Ghost Squadron]] requests and receives landing clearance, his squadron lands on the [[Mercury-class battlestar]] ''[[Therion]]''. Upon landing, they receive word that shore leave on [[Picon]] has been canceled and they are heading towards Aquaria.		* After Captain [[Alexander Chen]] of [[Ghost Squadron]] requests and receives landing clearance, his squadron lands on the [[Mercury class battlestar]] ''[[Therion]]''. Upon landing, they receive word that shore leave on [[Picon]] has been canceled and they are heading towards Aquaria.
	* Lieutenants [[Jorianne Landry]] and [[Myer Castall]], who are both married, note that their sons will have to spend time with Castall's father for a while longer, which Landry notes that they'll love. After this, [[Dosil Pennit]] is told to move his ass, to which Pennit—a [[Number Two]] copy—replies that greatness cannot be rushed.		* Lieutenants [[Jorianne Landry]] and [[Myer Castall]], who are both married, note that their sons will have to spend time with Castall's father for a while longer, which Landry notes that they'll love. After this, [[Dosil Pennit]] is told to move his ass, to which Pennit—a [[Number Two]] copy—replies that greatness cannot be rushed.
	* Ghost Squadron is summarily ordered to a briefing, where Commander [[Burkett]] introduces Colonel [[Regus]], and congratulates Chen and the Ghosts on their work against [[Gemenon\|Gemenese]] pilots, noting the fact that the pirates's leader is "seeking medical attention for the size-twelve boot" Chen placed his hindquarters.		* Ghost Squadron is summarily ordered to a briefing, where Commander [[Burkett]] introduces Colonel [[Regus]], and congratulates Chen and the Ghosts on their work against [[Gemenon\|Gemenese]] pilots, noting the fact that the pirates's leader is "seeking medical attention for the size-twelve boot" Chen placed his hindquarters.

Joe Beaudoin Jr.: /* Day Zero */ revising

2008-11-04T02:59:44Z

Day Zero: revising

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	* Behind Chen, ''Orion'' jumps in, disorienting Chen. As Chen attempts to recover, Burkett relays orders for their return to ''Therion'', notifying them that the Colonies are being attacked and that Admiral [[Nagala]] has taken charge of the [[Colonial Fleet (RDM)\|Colonial Fleet]], ordering all ships to regroup and assist in the fight. As the Ghosts head back to ''Therion'', three Cylon [[basestar (RDM)\|basestar]]s jump in around them.		* Behind Chen, ''Orion'' jumps in, disorienting Chen. As Chen attempts to recover, Burkett relays orders for their return to ''Therion'', notifying them that the Colonies are being attacked and that Admiral [[Nagala]] has taken charge of the [[Colonial Fleet (RDM)\|Colonial Fleet]], ordering all ships to regroup and assist in the fight. As the Ghosts head back to ''Therion'', three Cylon [[basestar (RDM)\|basestar]]s jump in around them.
	* Counting their blessings, ''Sword''<nowiki>'s</nowiki> crew land on ''Orion'', where they are met by Manning. After a hug, Manning tells Tyson that one of the passengers is demanding to speak to him. Tyson moves to do so, having ordered Dyson and Brukka to stow their stolen goods in hiding places below decks, and to jettison the truck once they are in empty space.		* Counting their blessings, ''Sword''<nowiki>'s</nowiki> crew land on ''Orion'', where they are met by Manning. After a hug, Manning tells Tyson that one of the passengers is demanding to speak to him. Tyson moves to do so, having ordered Dyson and Brukka to stow their stolen goods in hiding places below decks, and to jettison the truck once they are in empty space.
	* Tyson introduces himself to the passengers, meeting [[Ian Rao]] and his wife, [[Kiplinn]], and [[Peter Gilmour]] ~~and his brother~~. ~~Gilmour questions~~ Tyler on his alleged involvement with a theft of medical supplies as part of the Children of Erebus terrorist group. Tyler assures ~~his~~ passengers that no such thing happened, and that there are no members of that terrorist group aboard. In response, ~~Gilmour~~ notes that they are wrong about that, as both he and his brother reveal their handguns, with Tyler facing the wrong end of ~~Gilmour~~'s gun.		* Tyson introduces himself to the passengers, meeting [[Ian Rao]] and his wife, [[Kiplinn]], and [[Peter Gilmour]], as well as two men who have not identified themselves. The stubble-faced man asks Tyler on his alleged involvement with a theft of medical supplies as part of the Children of Erebus terrorist group. Tyler assures these passengers that no such thing happened, and that there are no members of that terrorist group aboard. In response, the stubble-faced man notes that they are wrong about that, as both he and his brother reveal their handguns, with Tyler facing the wrong end of the terrorist's gun.

	== Notes ==		== Notes ==